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Kermit 12011.02.13 - 10:33PM12: Eleven: I am the Spear as it Cries Out for BloodSigned
You don't cease to amaze me with this complicated plot! Here I was thinking they were one up on Voldemort when this happens. Thank you for keeping them as a couple as I believe that together they will bring LV down somehow down the road. I think it's compelling the way you write Severus- being able to share his thoughts makes him vulnerable and so human despite his cold and calculated exterior. I truly admire your Severus and I hope that he and Hermione will strengthen their bond (are they soulmates? will they marry and bond?) to become the leaders after LV is gone. Well done! Thanks for the treat.

Author's Response: Thank you, Kermit, for your kind and encouraging words. I have to say this fic is one of the toughest things I've ever written. So many fics have them in conflict all the time, and I just feel that there is enough outside conflict - we don't need them arguing or playing the pride game - there is too much at stake for that! I know where the plot goeth, but getting it there is a bit of a bumpy ride. I'm trying very hard to finish up the next chapter, but I really appreciate the support and feedback. It keeps me going!

sandlapper2011.02.13 - 09:43PM12: Eleven: I am the Spear as it Cries Out for BloodSigned
Why do I have the feeling that the angst is just beginning to climb? You have such a way with words that I felt Severus pain and fear and Hermione's grief. And let me say...good on Severus for getting at least a little revenge for the things that his fellow DEs have perpetrated on him. Well, let me get back off the edge of my seat before I fall!! Please, some more?

Author's Response: I'm feverishly working on Chapter 12, but I have very strict betas now!

lcwelsh2011.02.13 - 09:24PM12: Eleven: I am the Spear as it Cries Out for BloodSigned
Seriously. Great.

Author's Response: Thank you!

linn from IA2011.02.13 - 08:59PM11: Ten: Into The Belly of The BeastSigned
It's so impressive how you map this chapter to canon (the whole story really) and yet it stands apart, completely riveting on its own, with this sense of danger and desperation that's truly palpable. Sirius changing into his animagus form to rape Hermione is ... dreadful, beyond reason (Azkaban related? as well as the pressures of solitary confinement at Grimmauld?) Dreadful but ingenious. I love how Snape stays in character snarling at Ginny & thanking her in the same breath.

Author's Response: Thank you so much linn. I promise to get a little more in depth as to Sirius' inner workings a little further down the line. I am relieved that my canon is still holding - I solemnly swear I will never to a 'canon' fic again - it's too exhausting! Thankfully, I have a beta who is a canon genius and keeps me more or less straight. I hope you will continue to enjoy the story.

severus492011.02.13 - 07:27PM11: Ten: Into The Belly of The BeastSigned
This is the first time I've ever been really happy Sirius is gone. But I'm kind of mad at Hermione too, for throwing caution to the wind and getting herself in that situation.

Author's Response: Yes, well, it wouldn't be the first time....probably won't be the last... hee hee

iris m2011.02.13 - 06:31PM11: Ten: Into The Belly of The BeastSigned
wow talk about crazy, I had tears in my eyes when I got to the end. oh and thank you for not letting that dog shit get to her. well potter find out what happend.....can't wiat till you post the next chapter. I got chicken skin, thats how happy I am :)

Author's Response: SQUEEEEEEEEE! I love causing chicken skin! Thank you, Iris, for reading. Harry will find out - eventually.

sandlapper2011.02.13 - 06:05PM11: Ten: Into The Belly of The BeastSigned
I am soooo not suprised that Sirius would try to rape Hermione and even less shocked that the would do it in his animagus form. I just really hope that Harry gets a faceful of Hermione's memories of what happened. He has always needed a big dose of reality imo!! Keep up the great work...I will sit back in my seat now and wait on the next with bated breath!!

Author's Response: Thank you. Harry will realise the truth - eventually. But these things take time...but all is not as it seems....

phoenixfyre2011.02.13 - 04:41PM11: Ten: Into The Belly of The BeastSigned
I'm loving this story. Keep up the good work

Author's Response: Thank you so much!

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