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| Rema | 2011.02.14 - 04:12AM | 12: Eleven: I am the Spear as it Cries Out for Blood | Signed |
| Wonderful and intense.Thank you:) Author's Response: Thank YOU for reading. | |||
| KellyJoy | 2011.02.14 - 01:21AM | 12: Eleven: I am the Spear as it Cries Out for Blood | Signed |
| I was waiting until today to savor chapter 10, and to my delight found that I had two chapters to enjoy! Thank you for spoiling me. :) There are some family issues going on in my life right now (centered around my sister's pompous fiancé calling off their wedding), and, well, it's a balm to my heart to be able to read about a couple (albeit a fictional one) with true love and understanding for each other. I love how in your writing the emotions are always so palpable. By the way, I really like that the story takes place during OoTP. It always seemed to me to be the book where everything “got real” in terms of what was at stake. I knew Hermione checking on Sirius would be bad news, and damn, Sirius didn’t disappoint. I was half hoping you wouldn’t kill him at the Department of Mysteries because it seems like there’s still unfinished business there, but maybe he’ll end up coming back? Hmm. And then the lovely scene of Severus cradling Hermione in his embrace and her unshaken faith in him… Beautiful. Thank you SO much for writing! Author's Response: Kelly, thank you for your thoughtful and supportive feedback. I am so happy you are enjoying the story. It is a little different for me, but hopefully I can hold it all together! Thank you for having faith in ME. | |||
| paddiew | 2011.02.14 - 12:16AM | 12: Eleven: I am the Spear as it Cries Out for Blood | Signed |
| Not at all, I only took it as a warning. I only left my first review as praise to how you keep drawing me in against my will.
Your talent is superb.
I probably will pass on the rest of this story, (based on your recommendation), but look forward to your next story,
Just thinking--If a fourteen-year-old is fourteen for 24 months, does that make her an older person? Author's Response: Well, in the Wizarding world, anything is possible... | |||
| mlmonty | 2011.02.14 - 12:06AM | 12: Eleven: I am the Spear as it Cries Out for Blood | Signed |
| Wonderful last 2 chapters. I'm disappointed they didn't get to accuse Sirius of attempted rape but his death worked for the story. Author's Response: Thank you, but never say never... | |||
| paddiew | 2011.02.13 - 11:42PM | 12: Eleven: I am the Spear as it Cries Out for Blood | Signed |
| Okay Author's Response: Please understand, I really appreciate your feedback, and I hope I haven't offended you or anything. | |||
| Half Blood Outcast | 2011.02.13 - 11:40PM | 12: Eleven: I am the Spear as it Cries Out for Blood | Signed |
| you truly know how to write a damn good story. i'm exceedingly easy to move to tears, but at the same time i'm harder to impress when it comes to quality of a story. this has done both for me. several times over.I can't wait until the next update! Author's Response: Thank you, Halfblood. You are a balm to the spirit! I'm in the middle of a very tricky chapter, but I hope to be able to provide a little relief from all the angst in the next chapter. I hope, anyway! | |||
| paddiew | 2011.02.13 - 11:20PM | 12: Eleven: I am the Spear as it Cries Out for Blood | Signed |
| I don't know how to review such an intense story. I hate so many parts of your plot. I have a sixteen year old grand-daughter and the thought of grown men lusting after her turns my stomach. Even Snape, trying to protect her, is still thinking of her as a woman instead of a child. His punishments endured and extracted should send the deatheaters running for safety. Dumbledore is evil incarnate.
So, basically, I hate your story, but cannot stop reading due to your writing talent. Great work you are doing; but I need a tummy rub every time you update.
Thank you for sharing Author's Response: Wow, I don't really know what to say... please understand that I have orchestrated this story to reflect that Hermione is NOT sixteen, but is in reality eighteen, and the age of consent. Things are starting to get very intense, and you might want to look away now... | |||
| Fizzabella | 2011.02.13 - 11:00PM | 12: Eleven: I am the Spear as it Cries Out for Blood | Signed |
| This pushes all the buttons. Amazing chapter, amazing story:)
Warm regards,
Fizzabella Author's Response: Wow, thank you! That means so much, coming from a writer I admire. Thank you. | |||
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