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snapefan19832014.08.03 - 07:16PM8: Seven: No Life I Own, No LibertySigned
when severus was telling hermione his tale you never said if he did he tell her the truth about his betral of hermione when he told the dark lord that hermione lust after severus and vise versa?? what was hermione reaction to that??

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snapefan19832014.08.03 - 06:30PM7: Six: Love's Got A Lot To Answer ForSigned
he promised to protect her though an oath? does that mean that if serius touches her then it will burn him?? hope so!! so why did she make that oath to not allow anyone to take whats him?? and what does it mean for her or him etc?? is it talking about not taking whats his as in a object or as in a person?? also why didnt she make an oath to protect him like he did for her?? With an unsteady hand, Hermione drew the tip of her wand over her palm. “Tergum Lubricus.” It was more like a feeling of heat being laid across her palm, and soon the blood began to pool in her hand. “Good.” She looked up and saw Professor Snape watching her intently. “Now place your hand in mine, Miss Granger. Our blood must mingle.” “Are we doing blood magic? isn’t that part of the Dark Arts?” Snape sneered. “Intent, Miss Granger. Surely you remember your DADA notes: Intent is the difference between the dark and light. Hurry now, Madam Pomfrey will return any minute.” Finally, Hermione awkwardly placed her hand within his, bound as his was by his side. She had to lean down beside him, to press their hands completely together. She felt the warmth of his palm, as his fingers twined with hers. A tingle began in her hand, that shot up her arm and into her body. It felt like pleasure; it felt like torture. Quietly, he lay back on his pillow, his eyes boring into hers, her face close to his. “By my blood, which flows to yours, I swear that I will not harm you in any way against your will, nor will I allow harm to come to you while I am able to prevent it. By this blood oath, I swear it.” He was looking deeply into her eyes, and their faces were close together, almost touching. Hermione, shocked, held on. “By my blood that flows to yours, I swear that I will not allow harm to come to you while I am able to prevent it.” She held on. Almost without thought, she looked into his obsidian eyes. Her mouth opened, and before she could give it rational thought, she whispered, “I swear I will never allow another to take what belongs to you. By my blood oath, I swear it.”

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snapefan19832014.08.03 - 02:13PM1: PrologueSigned
I do not understand this chapter?? Why is he watching her?? And why in such an personal way?? Are they lovers?? He sat, watching the girl sleep. He did that often now. It wasn't necessary, he told himself, and he wasn't needed, but he couldn't stop himself. The fire smoldering in the fireplace was welcome down in the dungeons, even in summer, but the moisture in the castle walls of Hogwarts made the room as close and stuffy as a sauna. He smirked at the growing kinks in her already-untameable tresses, caused by the humid air. He was tempted to move her hair from her slightly shiny face, but he was afraid it would cause her to stir. She looked so peaceful, in spite of the wild mess fluffing around her face, he was loath to disturb her slumber. The girl sighed in her sleep, and kicked the duvet away from her body. There was a slight sheen of sweat on her forehead, and his sensitive nose detected the faintest sweet/metallic tang of approaching menses in her perspiration. She was restless because of the heat, and while every instinct told him to cover her, he resisted. She would only become more uncomfortable until she woke, and he wasn't there to wake her. He was there to watch over her. Also whats this about third year?? Does snape fancy Hermione? Since third year?? "Assignment, Snivellus? Don't you think you could come up with a little better excuse than that?" Severus gave Black his second-best sneer. "I don't need an excuse to rescue the child from your clutches, Black." He stepped closer. "Leave. Her. Alone," he hissed, his black eyes flashing in anger. Black merely laughed. "Jealous, Snape? Don't be. I'm sure there's plenty to go around. She is a lovely little peach, isn't she?" For a moment, a red mist covered Severus' vision and he drew his wand. "Shut your filthy mouth or I'll shut it permanently, Black!" "Oh really?" Sirius retorted, his playful stance hardening. "And what sort of message will that send, Snivellus? The great Severus Snape, dueling over a little girl!" Black's once-handsome face grew pale and ugly. He spat, "You don't fool me, Snape! You've been sniffing around her little tail since her third year! Oh, Remus told me all about it! You're just jealous that she's turning to me for a little experience. How can I help it that she's curious to know what it's like to be with a real wizard? She certainly wouldn't learn it from you!" His gaze swept down Severus' form with contempt. "Do you honestly think a little treat like Hermione would ever be anything but disgusted by her greasy Potions teacher?" Also whats this about the meeting with the order surely they wont put severus under the Cruciatus Curse?? With the terrifying speed that made him such a deadly dueling opponent, he whipped round and faced the girl, still seething. "If you'd stop flaunting yourself in front of every wizard you see, you wouldn't be in need of rescuing, Miss Granger. Perhaps the next wizard to come upon you and Black may not find the thought of fucking you so…” He raked his eyes over her slim frame, a look of pure distain marring his features. “Unpalatable.” With those words, he quickly disappeared into the front room, leaving the bewildered girl standing in the hall. He did not see her dash up the stairs and ward her bedroom. He did not know that she wept in shame during the Order meeting, which was tedious and unfruitful, and cost him several moments under the Cruciatus Curse later that evening. She did not know that the meeting was so tedious because Severus could not get her stricken expression out of his mind, and had paid little attention to the actual motions of the meeting. Nor did she know that, while he screamed and lost control of his bodily functions under the Cruciatus, he was thinking about how he would feel if he had to watch her suffer. She did not know that, in one brief, selfish, yearning moment of self-preservation, Severus Snape sealed her fate alongside his. what does that mean about sealing her fate etc??

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Farsideomoon2014.08.02 - 02:20PM40: Author's NotesSigned
I felt this story was amazing. Loved reading every word of it. And I want to thank you for all your hard work on it and your Betas hard work. I'm glad to read you felt it was worth it also. Thanks;-)

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm really glad you enjoyed this story.

Jensteed2014.07.10 - 07:31AM39: Thirty Eight: Even The Weariest River Winds Somewhere Safe To SeaSigned
Thank you for the joy of reading this story (and sorry it took so long) it's been a fantastic journey and I've loved every second. This is the first story I've read where I've hated Ginny, and I mean loathed her completely. I'm so used to her being so strong and forgiving but I loved her change in character, I loved that you gave such an evocative view of her that it stuck. I think my favourites were the more secondary characters because you brought them to life. Ginny, Madam Pomfrey, Hagrid (who my autocorrect keeps messing up) Regards Black, Sirius. I came to hate people I'd previously loved and vice versa which was amazing. Thank you for everything, even making Hermione suffer in Azkaban :) it was a beautiful story x x x

Author's Response: Thank you for reading and leaving such encouraging reviews. I am so glad you enjoyed it, and that it made you look at old characters in a new way. Thank you for being such an uplifting spirit here.

Jensteed2014.07.10 - 05:19AM37: Thirty Six: Will Death Tremble To Take Us?Signed
Brilliant chapter Teddy, you wrote some great carnage. Minerva really took me by surprise, she's always such anice awesome character that I never expect her to die.

Author's Response: Thank you! It took me over a year to get up the courage to write this chapter. Once it started, it was easy, but man, getting up the nerve to write it took a long time.

Jensteed2014.07.08 - 06:37PM29: Twenty Eight: Lonesome ValleySigned
Got dragged away from here for a bit but I couldn't stay away long ;) I love Madam Pomfrey so I think it's fantastic that she's in on it now. I've always thought of her as being the only person who cared about Severus through all the years she patched him up and saw the hell he was suffering. It really is such a bloody brilliant story!!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for hanging in there!!

Jensteed2014.07.04 - 06:42PM16: Fifteen: For the Want of a NailSigned
I love seeing those two stand up to Dumbledore and stop taking his bollox. He always makes my blood boil, willing to sacrifice anyone and everything for his bloody "greater good", he who had 150 full years of life sending children to die with dribbles of information. Whoops, better stop before I go off on a proper rant. Fantastic story so far, you always make everyone so human with strengths, faults and weaknesses like anyone else. And as always thank you for all the different lives you've given to Severus Snape. They're a pleasure to read Teddy <3

Author's Response: Thank you !! You make me so happy1

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