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sunny332011.02.14 - 05:35PM2: One: Not Enough Fingers To Count The CostSigned
I love the way you give such depth to your characters, Teddy. The reader can really feel the emotions. One question, dear. What year is this set in? Sirius is alive and Hermione is in Dumbledore's army, which was fifth year, but it says she is nearly eighteen. *iz confused* Dammit, have to do some more work before I get to read the next chapter! :D

Author's Response: Sunny, I did this big rigamarole about Hermione and the time-turner. According to my story, she spent so much time using it that she technically added time to her life - about 18 months or so. She was sixteen during her 5th year (she was almost 12 when she started Hogwarts. Barring that, just trust me.

Tangerine Dream2011.02.14 - 04:47PM12: Eleven: I am the Spear as it Cries Out for BloodSigned
I am so glad Severus got his revenge!! I knew Hermione would never blame him for the death of her parents. I do hope they get a bit of a break soon!!

Author's Response: Me too! lol They are exhausting me...

verasuspense2011.02.14 - 01:05PM12: Eleven: I am the Spear as it Cries Out for BloodSigned
If Dumbledore wants the murder of Hermione's parents kept secret except for the ones already in the know (AD, Severus, Pomphrey, McGonagall), then Hermione won't be allowed to tell Harry and Ron. And of course, Harry will be ranting about how wonderful Sirius' death is all Snape's fault, and she Can't tell him that He was the only one who could offer her any comfort - altogether its going to be a difficult situation. I expect the Golden Trio will go through a bad patch, with Ron siding with Harry, as usual. Hermione will probably have to stun the two dolts and forcibly make them watch her pensieve memories of Sirius' behaviour. If the attempted rape doesn't finally open Harry's eyes, nothing will.

Author's Response: And maybe that won't even do it....

Maria2011.02.14 - 12:57PM12: Eleven: I am the Spear as it Cries Out for BloodSigned
You weave canon into fiction quite well - brava! This was a painful, but very well written chapter. It moves the story along nicely.

Author's Response: Thank you! I hope you continue to enjoy the story.

iris m2011.02.14 - 11:06AM12: Eleven: I am the Spear as it Cries Out for BloodSigned
I had to stop reading twice, its hard to read with tears in your eyes. by the way point to snape for getting that asshole. and this was a wonderful chapter...hope you post as fast as last time....even if Im using study time to read this :)

Author's Response: Shame on you - I hate to know I'm encroaching on your study time ;) Thank you for reading, Iris, I hope you will enjoy the upcoming chapters.

aliciana2011.02.14 - 09:30AM12: Eleven: I am the Spear as it Cries Out for BloodSigned
A very sad chapter Teddy but he did get his revenge on Dolohov. Hermione was very understanding but her logical brain does work that way doesn't it? Her parents were always marked because of her allegiance to Harry. Bella's a right bad bitch but (hopefully) she did get rid of Sirius. I'd like to think our would-be lovers are going to get an easy ride from now on but some how I don't think so. Best wishes, Love Ali xxxxx.

Author's Response: Easy ride? Hmmm. Okay....hee hee.

aliciana2011.02.14 - 08:49AM11: Ten: Into The Belly of The BeastSigned
Up the Manc mill trash boys that's what I think Teddy! Two-One! Two-One! I bloody cheered when I read that bit. Almost as good as Rooney's winning goal! Now on to the next chapter. Best wishes, Love Ali xxxxx. Oh and he could spit into my mouth any time! Yes, yes I know that's quite nasty heh heh!

Author's Response: Well, I think we have to remember that Severus has tried for a long time to 'fit it' with the Slytherin upper crust, but until he was eleven, he lived like the Gallagher brothers. Real council house chav. He wasn't born to much, but he has overcome it, to a point. And yes, if he wants to any ANYTHING in my mouth.....

ivaana2011.02.14 - 07:15AM1: PrologueSigned
It is a great story, I dare say the best I have read so far (mind you, I have read a great deal of them)! Indeed! I love Severus/Hermione paring. I only hope you will finish it soon, because the anticipation is driving me mad! Furthermore, I hope the story will have happy ending, and that Severus will not die as he has in DH. Congradulations! Keep on!

Author's Response: Thank you SO much for your supportive and encouraging feedback. The story has a way to go, but it is moving along quite nicely now. I hope you will continue to enjoy it.

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