Reviews for Lay Me Low
braye27 | 2011.04.17 - 07:16AM | 18: Seventeen: Wedding Song | Signed |
That is a lot to survive in a 24 hour period. I'm not sure who is the worst master -- Voldemort or Dumbledore -- they're running neck and neck.
I like Registrar Leo Keown, and the name rang a bell with me, so I decided to see what I could find. I have no idea if this had anything to do with your choice of name for him, but for what it's worth: William Welch was a graduate engineer from the University of Edinburgh, who worked on the Stumphouse Tunnel (in Oconee County) when until work on the tunnel was resumed in the 1890's and 1900. Leo Keown of Mountain Rest is one of his descendents.
http://sciway3.net/scgenweb/oconee-county/archived-txt/history/mr-05.txt
I had to laugh when Severus began to tease her because of her thoughts about their "first time" that he could hear in his own mind: "Well, be that as it may, but rest assured, husband, what I lack in experience I promise I will make up for in enthusiasm."
Now I'm on to the next enthusiastic chapter!
Beth
Author's Response: Bethie! I will admit, I picked the name Leo Keown out of the air, but that just goes to show you that the Muse is in tune with his environment, since the Stumphouse is literally an hour away from where I'm sitting here typing! I had a Scottish friend named Leo, and Keown is the name of two brothers I know who are fantastic musicians. I tend to name my original characters after people I know. I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter - I hope you'll like the next one! |
iris m | 2011.04.13 - 02:23PM | 19: Eighteen: I値l Be Thunder, You値l Be Lightning | Signed |
HOLY HELL THAT WAS HOT!!!!! GET ME SOME WATER, IM ON FIRE!!!!!
Author's Response: Here is your water, dear. Glad you enjoyed it! |
verasuspense | 2011.04.13 - 09:48AM | 18: Seventeen: Wedding Song | Signed |
How dare that bastard of a headmaster blame Severus for the Grangers' deaths ! He can't die fast enough to suit me.
Author's Response: Weeelllll, he will eventually.... ;) |
kathyjo | 2011.04.13 - 03:07AM | 19: Eighteen: I値l Be Thunder, You値l Be Lightning | Signed |
Whew..Hot.that was just perfect you are so talented i am in awe..thank you..cant wait for more
Author's Response: Thank you so very much! I am so glad you enjoyed my little honeymoon! |
Jong_Kahn | 2011.04.12 - 10:52PM | 18: Seventeen: Wedding Song | Signed |
I like your writing so well, I will continue of course to read this satisfying little tale. But I do it in spite of the fact I don't really believe Hermione could fool Lord Voldemort about the pregnancy, and I find both our favorite characters rather OOC. But you're a sweetheart and you write interesting plots, so I'm willing to go along for this very entertaining ride. Thanks for all your hard work.
Author's Response: Well, Jong, the great thing about fanfic is that you really can take them anywhere! I will admit I will never write a canon fic again - it is too stressful. I prefer to move beyond it, but I have opened this little dark chest of wonders, and I have to see it to its end. |
Kermit 1 | 2011.04.12 - 04:52PM | 19: Eighteen: I値l Be Thunder, You値l Be Lightning | Signed |
Wow! What a tremendous chapter. Very powerful. What happened to their magic? I can only assume that both of them have increased their power. Will this be significant later on? Thanks for the update; it was worth the wait.
Author's Response: Thank you, Kermit! Chapter 19 is in the cleaners, and I'm working on this short vampire fic - LML will start to move forward a little faster now, and RL is getting tough, but I won't abandon it, or my readers. |
mlmonty | 2011.04.11 - 10:13PM | 19: Eighteen: I値l Be Thunder, You値l Be Lightning | Signed |
Whoot!
Author's Response: :) |
Elou | 2011.04.11 - 07:26PM | 19: Eighteen: I値l Be Thunder, You値l Be Lightning | Signed |
Yes, breathing is good. Holding ones breath for that long is bad. *giggle*
I prostrate myself, utterly humbled, and in a state of awe.
In my last year of reading Severus and Hermione eccentric fiction I have never laid eyes upon something so undeniably whole, beautiful and magical. The entirety of the scene, every element lending to this moment is extraordinarily written. Be proud, revel in what you have created.
Thank you, thank you for sharing~Elou
Author's Response: Elou, thank you so much for your wonderful words - I cannot tell you how much they mean to me! I love to make readers happy, but you have just made this writer more happy than I can ever say. Thank you! |
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