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Reviews for Lay Me Low

vze57t9j2012.04.03 - 03:08AM2: One: Not Enough Fingers To Count The CostSigned
Excellent chapter! I'm still stunned by the nights events, especially the deal with the Dark Lord. I hope that it doesn't bite both of them in the @$$. Nice scene between Severus and Hermione, though. She needs to tell someone of Sirius' unwanted attention. Onto the next chapter. :D

Author's Response: Thank you!

vze57t9j2012.04.03 - 02:13AM1: PrologueSigned
Excellent chapter!!! Hello, again! I'm sorry that I have been a little too preoccupied to give this story a look, it's been on my 'to read' list for some time now. I hate Sirius. He's such scum. I understand Severus' anger, if misplaced, and probably the reason he watches over her. On to the next chapter!!! :D

Author's Response: Thank you for giving the story a chance - I hope you enjoy it.

Jong_Kahn2012.03.30 - 12:21AM31: Thirty: Love Has No PrideSigned
I can't help it, I find myself glad that Severus got the torture; he had it coming, treating Hermione so badly. His already feeling like overwhelmed crap was no excuse when she was trying to reach out to him for him to berate her so badly. Now the iron's REALLY in the fire. Will any of 'em make it out? If you of all people don't know, it's possible I suppose, that the Dark Lord could even win! That's not the outcome I'm hoping for, of course. But as we wait through the next month to get the next chapter, I'm going to pretend nothing's going to work, so if any Gryffindor's do get killed, I can say 'I told you so!' (Grumbles because she really hates cliffhangers, so is just saying mean things...to identify with Severus, see....) Anyway, another '10' for all your hard work--thank you.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! Actually, I do know what will happen. It will not be easy to read, but for those who know me, you know I have two rules: I never write tragedies over thirty-five chapters, and I never want my readers to be disappointed. But this chapter was important (though very painful to write) because it had to show that their nerves were at the braking point, and the strongest and best of marriages will have these earthquakes. It's the underlying bedrock that determines whether they survive the damage or crumble. But I appreciate your hanaging in there with the story, and I hope I can continue to please you.

maraina2012.03.26 - 05:33AM31: Thirty: Love Has No PrideSigned
Hey there Teddy. I've lurked around this website for a while now without commenting but felt compelled to come out of the shadows by this chapter LOL; your stories are consistently engaging by the way which I appreciate. Back to this story I just couldn't help but remember that when Hermione's parents were killed Severus told her she wasn't alone and never would be...that he was her family now. The apparent about-face shown in this chapter then is just devastating - despite being privy to Severus' reasoning - and my sympathies go out to Hermione. The 'please, I don't want to die alone' line and Severus' rebuff of her attempts to link with him sealed it. I believe she will survive this night but am really worried about what piece of her heart might die instead. Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for taking the time to comment. As you can imagine, this was a very difficult chapter for me to write, especially as I have portrayed them as such a strong couple all along. But being in a strong relationship myself, I know that tensions and outside influences and bottled up emotions can cause these kinds of things to happen at the drop of a hat, usually at a time when you need one another most. Nerves get frayed and tempers snap, but underneath, the love is still there. She will survive. Thank you again for taking the time to write. I hope I can continue to make this an enjoyable read for you.

aliciana2012.03.25 - 06:15PM31: Thirty: Love Has No PrideSigned
Hell Teddy i've just come home from a great weekend in the Lakes....soaked in the hot-tub in the extra hour of sunshine and now you've thoroughly depressed...no wrong word....saddened me. I know it's wrong but I just adored your dialogue during their argument. It was so realistic but harrowing. And another glimmer of light in that the formidable Minerva is now back on their side. Poor, poor Hermione! Will it be little Dobby to the rescue again?Quite frankly I wouldn't care if it was Sooty and Sweep. Just keep them safe. Great stuff. Best wishes, Love Ali xxxxx.

Author's Response: Quite frankly I wouldn't care if it was Sooty and Sweep. NOW I know how I'm going to end the next chapter! LOL Oh, Ali, you do make me laugh. Thank you so much - i'm sorry to have been a buzz kill for your lovely weekend. I'll try my best to work things out!

incrediable love2012.03.25 - 05:56AM31: Thirty: Love Has No PrideSigned
each time i read this, i can't help crying. when will all these come to an end?

Author's Response: It is a very difficult time. I hope I will do right by these characters.

Riva2012.03.24 - 02:41AM31: Thirty: Love Has No PrideSigned
Oh no, Hermione! :( You write the stress and tension of the situation so well!

Author's Response: Thank you so much!

sandlapper2012.03.24 - 02:21AM31: Thirty: Love Has No PrideSigned
I'll write more when I remember to breathe and can type without the tears shorting out the keyboard... Devastatingly beautiful writing...

Author's Response: Thank you, Shell! I'm sorry I got you so worked up....

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