Reviews for Lay Me Low
linn from IA | 2011.03.11 - 10:15AM | 17: Sixteen: Buy A Dream and Hide Away | Signed |
Absolutely sublime: smart, smart loving Hermione; playing the Dark Lord; the exquisite relief at the end; Snape saying that he will marry her before she changes her mind! Beautifully plotted, as always, to keep me guessing and smiling in surprised delight, but I also love the details on what Legilimency feels like, or how Hermione feels about Narcissa at the beginning and then at the end of the chapter. Wow.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm really delighted with the response from this chapter - it was my problem child and I bet I rewrote it four times. I'm glad it ended up being what it is. |
verasuspense | 2011.03.11 - 10:08AM | 17: Sixteen: Buy A Dream and Hide Away | Signed |
Hermione faced Voldemort and managed to fool him completely. Way to go, Girlfriend. I'm agog to find out how she can protect Severus if he's her husband, but not if he's her lover.
Author's Response: Thank you! Hopefully, these two will get hitched soon...and you know what that means.... |
Jong_Kahn | 2011.03.11 - 01:57AM | 17: Sixteen: Buy A Dream and Hide Away | Signed |
Good chapter. Like the previous reviewer, I too am wondering the thing Hermione perceived in Bella's eyes.
Author's Response: Thank you. It is not a pretty sight... |
sandlapper | 2011.03.11 - 01:05AM | 17: Sixteen: Buy A Dream and Hide Away | Signed |
And the mine field continues to stretch before them...I can't wait to see how you handle the meeting between Narcissa and Severus. And WHAT did Hermione see in Bella's mind? Still on the edge of my seat!
Author's Response: There is something big.... |
thepantsparty | 2011.03.11 - 12:59AM | 16: Fifteen: For the Want of a Nail | Signed |
I can't believe I didn't realize this sooner, but your summary is "For the Want of a Nail" by Todd Rundgren. SUCH a good song. Do, not only was the chapter amazing, but you also get mad kudos for knowing about good ol' Todd.
Author's Response: Thank you...I like to keep up with the 'Popular Beat Combos'... |
buffyslayer | 2011.03.11 - 12:40AM | 17: Sixteen: Buy A Dream and Hide Away | Signed |
Bravo! Brava! Bravissimo! Cheers!
Author's Response: Thank you, thank you, thank you!!! I hope you'll continue to cheer me on! |
dirrtieshorrtie | 2011.03.10 - 01:27PM | 16: Fifteen: For the Want of a Nail | Signed |
Dumbledore's Obliivate comment made me so freaking angry. I can believe that man! But Hermione kept her cool and told him how it is. Dumbledore is really throwing some low blows to hurt Hermione. He needs to be dealt with immediately. How did Dumbledore know about the plan to have Draco kill him? Surely Severus would have known about it first and told the Headmaster about it and a plan would have been formed to stop it then. They are getting married?! But, of course, we don't know what Severus' response it, so I'm sure he will have something to say about it. There are reasons I don't normally read WIPs, and this story is a prime example of them. I am so caught up in it, and now I have to wait until you update. I honestly don't know what I am going to do with myself until then. I am open to suggestions.
Author's Response: Well, I don't know if you've read any of my other stories, but you could fill in your time reading those....seriously, I have a new one waiting to be posted, and as soon as those chapters are posted I'll post the next chapter. We can only upload two chapters at a time. But hopefully they will be posted soon. |
dirrtieshorrtie | 2011.03.10 - 01:01PM | 15: Fourteen: Love is Not a Victory March | Signed |
Severus has put in so much thought to what Hermione would want for her first time. I think that really shows the love that he has for her. Holy crap, if only I could get AR to say these words to me! I love how pleasuring Hermione brought pleasure to himself. And how very voyeristic to do it in front of a mirror! I don't think I can tell you enough how much I love how you have written Poppy's character! She is just so ... complete. I really don't know any other way to describe her. And what a foolish old man Dumbledore is! He is going to ruin everything! He is yet again going to ask too much of Severus and in turn affect (or is it effect, I'm never sure about those words) Hermione and their "passion play"! Damn you Dumbledore!
Author's Response: He's not a nice man, but he's also in trouble... |
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