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Reviews for Lay Me Low

christev2012.09.04 - 09:15PM22: Twenty One: Heaven From OneSigned
Brilliant retelling of the bathroom scene! In truth, I really wanted Harry to swing in the breeze a bit. That was probably the most egregious injustice in canon, in my opinion, when he basically had no punishment for almost killing Draco. (srsly, detention??) I love how Hermione used this to fake losing the (fake) baby, and even though I wanted Harry to suffer more, love the forgiveness scene between the two of them. <3 <3 <3

Author's Response: Thank you! I tell you, when I wrote the first chapter of this story, I never envisioned I would be writing a parallel canon story. It has been so challenging, but this scene was one that DahlraMuse burned into my brain long before I committed it to my pc. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Yes, Harry spent too much time in that book macking on Draco, and this was a hideous thing. Not to say he might not pay later...

christev2012.09.04 - 08:38PM21: Twenty: Valley Of PainSigned
Ahhhhhhh!!!!!! What on earth?! Hermione? *clicks*

Author's Response: Oh, no! What's she done now???

christev2012.09.04 - 07:51PM20: Nineteen: The Dimming of The DaySigned
I'm glad they are having some good honeymoon time now - it's almost unbearable to think what will happen at the end of their school year ahead... Also, how hard must that have been for Hermione to write that about her parents, after their deaths. *sniffs :-( Severus' vows to himself are hard, but make a lot of sense.

Author's Response: Yes, it gets a lot harder from here, that's for sure.

christev2012.09.04 - 07:11PM19: Eighteen: I値l Be Thunder, You値l Be LightningSigned
Holy moley. When you give lemons, it's more like the whole orchard! I'll be over here fanning myself for a while, don' t mind me...

Author's Response: Well, I've always said that these are two very fiery, passionate individuals, and when they do come together, it would be like storm fronts colliding. They wouldn't settle for any bloodless, soulless relationship. It would be all or nothing!

onecelestialbeing2012.09.04 - 11:15AM19: Eighteen: I値l Be Thunder, You値l Be LightningSigned
I've read this countless times but don't think I've properly expressed my love for this chapter especially...it's so beautifully written that it puts my chatty self at a loss for words.

Author's Response: Oh, thank you so much. This story has come to be so important, because it's taught me so much as a writer.

christev2012.09.04 - 12:04AM16: Fifteen: For the Want of a NailSigned
Honestly, the telling off of Dumbledore in this story has given me some of the most satisfying fanfic moments I've ever had!

Author's Response: Thank you! I was able to take out my feelings on Dumbledore most satisfactorily in this story.

christev2012.09.03 - 09:05PM14: Thirteen: When We Dance, Angels Will Run and Hide Their WingsSigned
Every chapter that has a scene about Hermione's parents, you've got me snuffling and searching for tissues. The way you've written her grief / love / longing for her parents is quite beautiful. And then closing scene of this chapter, I just love the way Severus phrases why he loved Lily compared to why he now loves Hermione. So gorgeous!

Author's Response: Thank you so much. As I say, this was such a learning experience for me.

christev2012.09.03 - 08:21PM13: Twelve: My Dear SomeoneSigned
Harry's actions and words make me wonder if he knows about Hermione's parents. Does he realize that her whole world - save Severus - was also destroyed? It does seem like a wedge has been put between them, but if anything, it was put there by Dumbledore, with all his coddling of Harry to the detriment of everyone else. Voldemort doesn't realize he has an ally in the Headmaster!

Author's Response: I really think that Dumbledore was ready to sacrifice anything and anyone, including Harry, but he was so fixated on the prophecy that Harry was the only one who could kill Voldemort he didn't see the potential for even greater loss. For such a great wizard, he was blinkered when it came to Harry, i think.

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