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Reviews for Lay Me Low

Tangerine Dream2011.01.12 - 05:13PM3: Two: From The Waiting To HearSigned
Wonderful story!! Very intense & powerful!! Can't wait to read more!!

Author's Response: Thank you, Tangerine - it's good to see a familiar reader's name reviewing my work. I hope you continue to enjoy it.

WnL6242011.01.12 - 11:15AM3: Two: From The Waiting To HearSigned
Intense and roller-coaster chapter, loved it. Keep it coming, please! Thanks so much!

Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Kermit 12011.01.12 - 09:46AM3: Two: From The Waiting To HearSigned
This is getting better and better. Hermione is showing a level of maturity that I hadn't expected to see and I am so glad that Severus has decided to tell her the truth. It appears to me that both Severus and Hermione together could become very strong and formidable allies. They may consider going along with the plan- their power will only increase. I do wish you find a way to put Sirius in his place and I'd like to see Hermione do just that. Thanks for this chapter. You've managed to bring out an overwhelming depth in the characters, especially Severus.

Author's Response: Kermit, thank you for your thoughtful review. I'm casting my net a little wider than usual in the AU waters and I'm hoping I'll do it justice. Thanks for sticking with me!

alm10672011.01.12 - 09:01AM3: Two: From The Waiting To HearSigned
I think this is a good start to a great story so far. Thanks so much.

Author's Response: Thank you! I hope you enjoy it.

aliciana2011.01.12 - 05:39AM3: Two: From The Waiting To HearSigned
I'm really pissed off Teddy.......the chapter actually ended! How dare you! Oh I can just hear him talking to her like that and I agree.....in my humble opinion Severus Snape was one of the most honest characters in the books. "Nimue's Bristols"....honestly Teddy....that did bring a smile to my face and I've got pneumonia....well I don't really but in comparison to my husband's man-flu so I need cheering up. Brilliant dialogue....brilliant plotline.........brilliant update.Cheers me dear. Best wishes, Love Ali xxxx.

Author's Response: Well, Ali, they say that laughter is the best medicine. I'm really sorry you're under the weather. I'm snowed in and can do nothing but write, so I'm taking advantage and writing like crazy! Get well soon, TR

Sampdoria2011.01.12 - 04:31AM3: Two: From The Waiting To HearSigned
Great update, I love the development in the plot. Don't misunderstand, I am equally mad at both Dumbledort and Sirius, what I love is that Severus, however dubious his own motivations are, at least tells Hermione most of the truth, not to mention believes her when she tells about Sirius advances. Perhaps Severus should learn Hermione a spell or two that would make men who doesn't know when to quit or take no for a no to hurt in certain places they preferably don't want to hurt? A certain dog should obviously be thougth a lesson by a woman, there must be some way to do it that wouldn't hurt Harry to bad? On the other side, while Harry migth need someone who cares for him, does he really need Sirius who obviously doesn't care enough about Harry to not hurt his friend? Then again, Sirius is probably so full of him self that he can't fantom that a woman honestly doesn't want him, thus again leading back to please let Hermione learn something that will make sure that Sirius get a lesson for life......

Author's Response: Sampadoria, thank you for your great review! I am glad you are enjoying the story and that it has produced some really thought provoking ideas. Yes, I think the bottom line is that Sirius can't imagine any witch not wanting him. Plus, the guy's been cooped up in Azkaban for almost 13 years - that's had to rearrange your psyche a little!

Kittens2011.01.12 - 03:31AM3: Two: From The Waiting To HearSigned
I don't know you, but you've stolen me. You write seduction without actual sex in it. Well....yet, I suppose? (whimpers)

Author's Response: Well, Kitten, as it so happens, I've just written a lovely little chapter for our friends...It will be awhile. After all, the poor girl is only 17! But good things come to those who wait, so I guess you could call Hermione a good thing!

Nerdlee2011.01.12 - 01:18AM3: Two: From The Waiting To HearSigned
I'll cop to loving the darkness in your story. I love the storytelling altogether, truth be told. ~Mia

Author's Response: Thank you! I hope you'll continue to enjoy it.

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