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Reviews for Lay Me Low

Rema2011.02.20 - 07:14AM13: Twelve: My Dear SomeoneSigned
Tank you fo another wonderful chapter.So full of emotion.

Author's Response: Thank YOU for reading and giving me such encouraging feedback.

aliciana2011.02.20 - 06:13AM13: Twelve: My Dear SomeoneSigned
Firstly, Teddy...."grubby little scrote" ....yes that just about sums up Harry and Sirius I would have thought. Secondly although it's Sunday morning and I'm relatively refreshed, as I read about Severus lulling and comforting Hermione to sleep with his gorgeous voice I can actually feel my eyelids drooping too. Not from ennui mind but from a "I'll do anything you command master" perspective. Funny thing these time-turners and I loved how you gave us an explanation and clarification because I naively used to think it may have the opposite effect and take years off her. Don't ask me to justify and explain. I just smile sweetly and say I am a lateral thinker. But she's eighteen now (a couple of years older then the real age of consent in Blighty) and now presumably up for a bit of "How's yer father" once she's all healed up. Yes?.........very good. Well I hope you get those chapters back from the cleaners soon as I'm off to Benalmadena at the end of the week. Best wishes, Love Ali xxxxx.

Author's Response: Have a wonderful time! If you think my writing will soothe you, check out http://my.deviantart.com/messages/#/d39v97f from Sempraseverus. She and I have this happy little collaboration friendship, and her drawings of my work are amongst my proudest moments.

Jong_Kahn2011.02.20 - 04:30AM11: Ten: Into The Belly of The BeastSigned
I knew it! I just had this niggling little bad feeling every time Severus imagined himself being "the first". Something was chiming in the background that it wouldn't work, that someone else was going to ruin it.

Author's Response: Well..

Ethylene2011.02.20 - 04:07AM13: Twelve: My Dear SomeoneSigned
I've really enjoyed the story thus far. You've done a brilliant job with the tension and the longing. So good! Gah-I'm finding your Severus deviously delicious. Cheers! and I look forward to the next chapter.

Author's Response: Severus goes through a lot of changes in this story, and I hope they are for his own good...

shuldham2011.02.20 - 03:38AM13: Twelve: My Dear SomeoneSigned
Another wonderful chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you very much for reading. I hope you continue to enjoy the story.

Jong_Kahn2011.02.20 - 03:32AM8: Seven: No Life I Own, No LibertySigned
You have taken this chapter in a direction I am frankly surprised no one else ever has before. I speak of the way Hermione bade Severus confess himself openly to her. She is the know-it-all--and she made sure she did indeed know it ALL. And you handled it beautifully, you did it completely, and believably. I cried at the way you had Severus weep at the end, when he finally broke open his final secrets--his feelings for HER--as he wept in her arms. It's 2:30 in the morning and I'm babbling now, but you are just too good! Thank you for all you do here. Thank you.

Author's Response: Thank YOU for your amazing feedback. I suffer painful bouts of self-doubt over this fic, but your words give me courage to keep typing away. It is about to get a whole lot more difficult, so I'm trying to prepare myself mentally!

Jong_Kahn2011.02.20 - 03:00AM7: Six: Love's Got A Lot To Answer ForSigned
Whoa! Look out there, boys--Hermione's arrivin', and she ain't chuffed! I think she's going to be having a very serious talk with her PROFESSOR, next chapter! I like your work! Thanks for all of it!

Author's Response: Thank you! Hey, Hermione's a tough gal - she ain't taking no prisoners, that's for sure...

Jong_Kahn2011.02.20 - 02:24AM5: Four: There Are Wounds That Stir Up The Force of GravitySigned
Another chapter as irresistable as Severus' voice! Your artful storytelling is among the very best. Thank you for all your work!

Author's Response: I can't tell you how much I appreciate that!

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