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Reviews for Lay Me Low

Blueyedsparrow2011.03.04 - 10:12AM16: Fifteen: For the Want of a NailSigned
Absolutely brilliant chapter. More soon I hope! Cheers.

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Blueyedsparrow2011.03.04 - 10:12AM16: Fifteen: For the Want of a NailSigned
Absolutely brilliant chapter. More soon I hope! Cheers.

Author's Response: Thanks!

verasuspense2011.03.04 - 10:09AM16: Fifteen: For the Want of a NailSigned
great chapter. If anyone can get Severus out of the trap Dumbledore put him in, it's Hermione, with her brains, her ruthless courage, her loving heart.

Author's Response: Thank you! I am writing feverishly. Now, where did I put those lemons....hmmm... I had them here awhile ago...

Tangerine Dream2011.03.02 - 05:12PM15: Fourteen: Love is Not a Victory MarchSigned
Wow!! So wonderfully erotic!! And they have hardly started!! Hope they have time for each other with all the rough times ahead!!

Author's Response: Love makes time....

katty88122011.03.01 - 01:18PM15: Fourteen: Love is Not a Victory MarchSigned
You are a wicked, wicked tease!! to write a chapter like that and not top it up with a full blown lemon! You are the devil incarnate!! There is something incredibly erotic yet tender about Severus calling Hermione 'Lass'. I wonder why no one has used it previously. Looking forward to the next update!

Author's Response: Thank you, Katty. Well, with Severus being a good old Manc boy, I figured he would. Someone told me that he wouldn't call her that, but I knew a lot of Mancunian blokes in England, and almost every one called me 'lass', and it just melted my butter!! Glad you enjoyed it. I'm working on the next couple of chapters, but taking a detour to write for my favourite Severus artist, Sempraseverus' birthday. A smutty little fic that won't go away, so when it's done, we will resume regular programming.

Jong_Kahn2011.02.28 - 11:34PM15: Fourteen: Love is Not a Victory MarchSigned
I love stories like yours. You embroider your details onto the main fabric of canon very well here. Thank you for all your hard work to do so. Hermione's scar hurt because Severus is in mortal peril--from the soon-to-be-issued request from Dumbledore? Do relieve the suspense soon--we need to know what's going on! Again, thank you.

Author's Response: Jong, thank you so much! We are heading into the murkier waters of canon vs. story, and if I can hold it together through all of this, I believe we can hold it together until the end! Thank you as always for the positive feedback.

Ethylene2011.02.28 - 09:53PM15: Fourteen: Love is Not a Victory MarchSigned
That was a titillating slow seduction and nicely wrought! Sumptuous dirty talk, too. Cheers.

Author's Response: There is a huge debate between my contemporaries and me about the validity of dirty talking. Being the voice slut I am, and this being my AU world, our dear Professor is a good dirty talker. Hopefully, he'll do more soon!

Kermit 12011.02.28 - 09:42PM15: Fourteen: Love is Not a Victory MarchSigned
Oh... you do enjoy teasing us! Now that Dumbledore is cursed, can we expect him to ask Severus to kill him? Will you keep to the original? How can Hermione help? Your story mesmerizes me; it is so well plotted and logically sequenced. The scene between Severus and Hermione should receive a prize! Thanks for the update; as always, I'm looking forward for more.

Author's Response: Thank you, Kermit, as always! I hope you will continue to enjoy the story. Things are getting a little wild now.

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