Home | Members | Help | Submission Rules | Log In |
Recently Added | Categories | Titles | Completed Fics | Random Fic | Search | Top Fictions

Reviews for Lay Me Low

yoursarin2011.01.27 - 09:48PM7: Six: Love's Got A Lot To Answer ForSigned
I'm so glad I was in bed sick today. Two chapters to cheer me up, and they were amazing!

Author's Response: I'm so sorry you're not feeling well. I'm so glad I could help you feel better - one of the best compliments you can give a writer is that they heal people! Thank you for your kind words. Get well soon!

sapphire_phoenix2011.01.27 - 07:55PM7: Six: Love's Got A Lot To Answer ForSigned
WOW! I was so confused at first by the double update and I thought I'd missed something. But I read every word with DELIGHT! Oh my! so good! And such a cheeky little cliff-hanger! LOVE IT

Author's Response: Thank you! Yes, I was a little surprised they uploaded them both, but happy as well. I hope you'll continue to enjoy it!

BeeRabbit2011.01.27 - 07:32PM7: Six: Love's Got A Lot To Answer ForSigned
A wonderful story. I thought Hermoine's blood oath was interesting- "I won't let anyone take what belongs to you." If it turns out that it's Hermoine who "belongs" to him then things could end up very dicy for Sirius when she honors the oath. Here's hoping!

Author's Response: Sirius is a very vain, very naughty wizard in Teddyland. muhahahaha!

Formeandmygirls22011.01.27 - 07:27PM7: Six: Love's Got A Lot To Answer ForSigned
Wow. I wonder if Sirius understands that the game is utterly up at this point? He seems to let his hatred of Severus get in the way of thinking straight. As far as Severus, I wonder how much trouble he's going to be in with Hermione. I'm concerned for how they will get along after this. The blood bond just didn't seem right on her part. Her promise was just dead wrong. I'm assuming that it was the result of being the target of the curse, but geez. that's going to be a tough thing to deal with. I am soooo eagerly awaiting the next update.....

Author's Response: Well, it wouldn't be Severus if he didn't occasionally let his mouth run away from him, and it wouldn't be Hermione if she didn't try to control things, and it wouldn't be Sirius if he didn't think he couldn't get into the knickers of every witch on the block. Things are going to get a little wild from here on out...

gifarlme2011.01.27 - 06:59PM7: Six: Love's Got A Lot To Answer ForSigned
what an ending to that chapter....can't wait to read what Hermione has to say about that!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm sure our girl will have a little to say about it!

NNNN2011.01.27 - 06:18PM6: Five: Take Me In, Tender Woman, Sighed The SnakeSigned
I am still enjoying your story very much. Thanks for uploading 2 chapters at a time ^_^

Author's Response: Thank you! These are a bit of transitional chapters - so things are going to start getting a little wild from here.

Sampdoria2011.01.27 - 05:27PM7: Six: Love's Got A Lot To Answer ForSigned
Fantastic update, I really liked the end, not because the two so-called grown-ups had a pissing contest (though I to think Severus won that one), what I really liked was Hermiones mature reaction (so far:-)) over what she overheard. If Sirius have even one brain-cell left, and I am not sure he does, he should know that the game is lost . I am afraid that the thougth of getting one over Severus will trigg him more than any form of seduction though, not a smart man that Sirius. I hope Hermione will scold Severus for what he deserves being scold for: letting himself be provoked by Sirius and saying thing he don't intend to act upon just to annoy Sirius. I am really looking forward for the next update to see how it goes.

Author's Response: Thank you, Sampdoria! I hope you will continue to enjoy the story. Things are going to get a little off the rails from here on out!

talesofsnape2011.01.27 - 04:13AM5: Four: There Are Wounds That Stir Up The Force of GravitySigned
Grrr! I hate the fact that this place doesn't send out email notifications. There's just so much to love about this chapter, from Severus looking for that very emotion in all the wrong places and not even knowing what it is he's really looking for, to the fact that even under a curse, despite the fact he despises himself, he's a better man than Sirius. (That's assuming he's right about being cursed and it isn't just a perfectly natural reaction between two people who are becoming increasingly attracted to each other.) I think what I really love about your portrayal of Severus is that the dark is there, it laps around his soul like the lake in that cave laps around the island, and he has these moments where in small ways he gives in to its temptation, but when it comes right down to it, he's a better man than he thinks he is. Looking forward to more of this once it makes it through vetting. Hugs you!

Author's Response: Tales! Thank you so much for reading. This one is my problem child, but the Muse is steadily helping me to put together this dark fic. I hope to show Severus' vulnerability. So many fics portray him as a continuously mean, angry man. I think more than anything, he was a very frightened child pining for love. He is the quintessential misunderstood man.

[Previous] 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 29 30 31 32 33 34 35 36 37 38 39 40 41 42 43 44 45 46 47 48 49 50 51 52 53 54 55 56 57 58 59 60 61 62 63 64 65 66 67 68 69 70 71 72 73 74 75 76 77 78 79 80 81 82 83 84 85 86 87 88 89 90 91 92 93 94 95 96 97 98 99 100 101 102 103 104 105 106 107 108 109 110 111 112 113 114 115 116 117 118 119 120 121 122 123 124 125 126 127 128 129 130 131 132 133 134 135 136 137 138 139 140 141 142 143 144 145 146 147 148 149 150 151 152 153 154 [Next]


Disclaimers
Terms of Use
Credits

Ashwinder
A Severus Snape/Hermione Granger archive in the Harry Potter universe

Copyright © 2003-2019 Sycophant Hex
All rights reserved