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| Sampdoria | 2011.02.24 - 03:33AM | 14: Thirteen: When We Dance, Angels Will Run and Hide Their Wings | Signed |
| What a chapter, it was brilliant and so seductive, oh my did you do a grand job here. Absolutely wonderful! What was not so wonderful was where it ended, I want to read more, much more:-)) Author's Response: Coming up as soon as chapter 14 is back from the cleaners. | |||
| sandlapper | 2011.02.24 - 02:56AM | 14: Thirteen: When We Dance, Angels Will Run and Hide Their Wings | Signed |
| And...I cried. I cried at the terribleness of it and the sweetness of it and the sheer devotedness of it. Your Severus and Hermione are beyond 3D. I have read a lot of stories and I have read some beautiful characterizations. This couple ranks up there. And, I really did cry... Author's Response: Thank you, sandlapper. I just feel these two have enough outside influences that are negative - I wanted to convey that they need each other, and I'm glad it seems to be working. Here, have a tissue... | |||
| lovelittle | 2011.02.24 - 12:35AM | 14: Thirteen: When We Dance, Angels Will Run and Hide Their Wings | Signed |
| I love how you were able to convey that looks are not all the counts in a relationship but are the things we often dwell on. It makes the Severus and Hermione of your story so dynamic and real!
Also, I have to thank you for updating so often! Author's Response: Thank you - I have two more chapters in the cleaners, so they will go on as soon as they are polished up. I'm glad you are enjoying the story. I hope you'll continue to enjoy the story. | |||
| severus49 | 2011.02.23 - 11:58PM | 14: Thirteen: When We Dance, Angels Will Run and Hide Their Wings | Signed |
| Their love is beauty and their beauty is a dance. It's beguiling and wonderful to read *watch*. I adore the fact that you don't push what will come naturally between the two of them. I'm sure when she's ready to vocalize exactly what she wants/needs from Severus physically, then he'll know she's ready to take the next step. But it's so amazing and loving and caring of him to let her set the pace. Author's Response: Thank you! I really appreciate your feedback, and I hope you continue to enjoy the story. | |||
| Ethylene | 2011.02.23 - 11:13PM | 14: Thirteen: When We Dance, Angels Will Run and Hide Their Wings | Signed |
| Delicious, like slow sweet treacle from a warm spoon. Yum. I've been enchanted by the pearls of insight and the naturalness of the dialogue. Oh! what a wonderful Poppy! Well done and cheers. I anticipate the next installment, warm spoon in hand, just in case. :) Author's Response: Yummy warm goodness coming up... | |||
| lmbrewer | 2011.02.23 - 10:21PM | 14: Thirteen: When We Dance, Angels Will Run and Hide Their Wings | Signed |
| Beautiful. The tenderness and love between Severus and Hermione in this story is heartwarming. You do a wonderful job of showing how their relationship is growing through each trial they face.
Thank you for sharing this amazing story. Author's Response: Thank you so much! I really appreciate everyone's feedback on this story. I've never seen anything like it. I hope you continue to enjoy the story. | |||
| Remarkable | 2011.02.23 - 09:58PM | 14: Thirteen: When We Dance, Angels Will Run and Hide Their Wings | Signed |
| *shudder, shudder, shudder* I just love this gentle, in control Severus. Yes, he can be an angsty bastard, but I never for one moment see him as a completely immature person. On the contrary, Severus has had to grow up very fast and stories that portray him as immature like Sirius don't seem to sit well with me. Socially awkward, sure but not always to the point of pushing everyone away. I like that he is reaching out to her and using his body as a portrait to show her self acceptance, that his love is unconditional and to reach past the purely physical as Sirius has warped it and translate their love into something more than the sum of their physical parts. Although, you do a wonderful job of describing their encounters both physically and otherwise! I am so in love with this pair, and it's not easy in my opinion to get it right through the time that she is in school. I strangely don't have issues with severus being with hermione while she is still a student. I still remember what it was like to be fifteen and deeply in love with my first crush. To be told it's not real is obscene. Yes, one is looking at the teacher and student relationship but Severus and Hermione is about two extraordinary people anywyay, the exception to the rule, both very intelligent and wise beyond their years with opposite strengths that enhance one another as neither can gain by themselves. Okay now I'm babbling. Keep up the fab story dear LOVE LOVE LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Author's Response: Thank you, Remarkable, for the type of feedback a writer longs to receive. I really appreciate your comments, and I will tell you that I feel the exact same way as you about their special relationship, but you've put it better than I ever could! Thank you so much. I hope you'll continue to enjoy it. | |||
| iris m | 2011.02.23 - 09:55PM | 14: Thirteen: When We Dance, Angels Will Run and Hide Their Wings | Signed |
| we get to the good stuff just so you can stop the chapter.....are you going to post soon? I hope so I love this story. Author's Response: Thank you, Iris. The next 2 chapters are in the cleaners, so we'll try to get them tidied up very quickly! | |||
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