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s50m2012.05.23 - 03:04PM9: Eight: I Cover My Ears, I Close My Eyes; Still Hear Your Voice Telling Me LiesSigned
There were so many excellent parts to this chapter - first and foremost when Snape told off Dumbledore in his office after the meeting. I'm sure that Albus didn't like it when his pawn finally found his own voice! I especially loved this line (said by Severus): "If your actions bring harm to one mad curl on her head, I’ll take her, and we’ll go so far underground neither you nor the Dark Lord will ever find us. We. Will. Disappear.” :) Other yummy romantic moments were when 1) Severus told Hermione that he was "Professor Snape" around others, but "Severus" when they're alone and 2) When he said, "I think that's enough reciprocation." Wonderful work! :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much! It's delightful seeing these earlier chapters reviewed. It's been awhile since I wrote them, so to see them still being enjoyed is wonderful.

s50m2012.05.23 - 02:22PM8: Seven: No Life I Own, No LibertySigned
The scene when Snape told Hermione about his life was so intense and perfect. I love how Hermione stayed to hear him out and that they've both admitted their feelings for each other. And as for Sirius and his lie, I'm quite looking forward to his falling beyond the veil in the Dept. of Mysteries.

Author's Response: Ah, poor Sirius! I'm afraid I've always pictured him as a bit of a horndog, so he was the perfect villain in this story. I'm afraid he's going to be wearing the red shirt in this story as well...

s50m2012.05.23 - 01:57PM7: Six: Love's Got A Lot To Answer ForSigned
Snape just got busted! I can't wait to see how Hermione reacts to his statement. Also, I loved this line of Severus's: “And what, pray tell, would I want from Hogsmeade, Miss Granger? I’m scarcely on tenterhooks pining for a nose-biting teacup from Zonko’s.” Very funny! :)

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm really glad you are enjoying it.

s50m2012.05.23 - 01:26PM6: Five: Take Me In, Tender Woman, Sighed The SnakeSigned
Poor Severus! I hope the curse wears off soon! And Albus was at his manipulative best (or should that be WORST?) in this chapter. It's interesting how, in the early books, Dumbledore was one of my favorite characters, but changed to be one of my least-liked characters after his plotting, controlling, scheming personality was revealed in the later books. Super work! I hope that Snape's feelings for Hermione don't wear off once the curse goes away! :)

Author's Response: Thank you! I, too, grew very resentful of his manipulations. I think he was quite cold-blooded at times, especially where Severus was concerned. But I hope you continue to enjoy the story!

Jasmine_McK2012.05.21 - 09:53PM33: Thirty Two: I Have Promises To KeepSigned
PLEASE UPLOAD A NEW CHAPTER!! <3 I've been reading this story all day; literally, nothing else, and I want more! :O

Author's Response: First of all, thank you so much for reading my story! I will tell you that the next two chapters are being finished today and going to Jules the wonder-beta in the next day or so, so you should have an update next week. Thank you so much for reading!

Ljpjcg2012.05.21 - 08:40AM33: Thirty Two: I Have Promises To KeepSigned
Amazing chapter! The closure between them was perfect and sweet and a little hot -_~. And as always, Luna is lovely, even if we only get bits of her.

Author's Response: Thank you. I am not big on slash, but I do find the idea of a young Severus and Reg to be a little on the warm side myself! I'm glad you have enjoyed the story!

Ljpjcg2012.05.21 - 07:06AM30: Twenty Nine: Tell Me No Secrets, and I'll Tell You No LiesSigned
Yay for smart, sensible Ron! Love you for bot debasing him and making him another ally.

Author's Response: Thank you! I always liked Ron - I just never thought he and Hermione were a good couple. I think that was a huge misstep on JKR's part, but, hey, that's why we love fanfiction - we can put everything to rights! ;)

Ljpjcg2012.05.21 - 06:42AM29: Twenty Eight: Lonesome ValleySigned
I'm so relieved they have Poppy as a shoulder to share their burdens. You couldn't have picked a better ally.

Author's Response: :) I have always loved Poppy as a character, and thought that, if anyone would know what he's had to go through, it would be her.

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