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MollysSister2011.01.25 - 10:53PM2: One: Not Enough Fingers To Count The CostSigned
Well now this is an interesting turn of things. It was comforting to hear both Severus' and Hermione's POV. I hope he tells her what Voldy wants him to do...unless he wants to keep playing the slytherine games??

Author's Response: Well, you know those Slytherins, to them it's all the game. I think Severus is trying to juggle a lot of balls in the air and hoping he doesn't add his own to the list.

MollysSister2011.01.25 - 10:42PM1: PrologueSigned
Way to blame the victim Snape. I doubt she was doing any more than breathing to "attract" Black. Nonetheless I am glad SS was there to prevent any sort of funny naked business with Sirius. Icky poo

Author's Response: Severus has a way of not exactly dealing with things all that well, and it often comes back to bite him. Hopefully he'll see the light - thanks so much for reading and reviewing.

Remarkable2011.01.25 - 02:11PM5: Four: There Are Wounds That Stir Up The Force of GravitySigned
Oh my! You are one of my fave authors, the way you write and portray my favorite couple is just so delicious. Such a unique draw on his desire for her to take her and protect her, to need her love subconciously and deem himself unworthy, his unrequited lust for her and self loathing at it even as she returns his feelings. It's a train wreck waiting to happen and I ove every second of it can't wait for more girl! do you have an LJ?

Author's Response: Thank you so much - I am so appreciative of your warm and encouraging review. To be one of your favourite authors is such a compliment! I do indeed have an LJ account - teddyradiator - please friend me!

Just2011.01.22 - 09:02PM5: Four: There Are Wounds That Stir Up The Force of GravitySigned
Great! Really love how you portray the characters... Allright, who am I kidding, the only character I care about is Severus Snape! Keep it up... MORE PLEASE! ^.^

Author's Response: LOL I like the way you think, Just! I'm revising the next chapter even as we speak. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

darkangel_0012011.01.21 - 11:25AM5: Four: There Are Wounds That Stir Up The Force of GravitySigned
Great story, I truly enjoyed it. I was wondering if there was a way Hermione could protect herself from Black? I know that in this kind of situations fear can take over everything- but since Hermione is a witch, I would have thought her raw magic would have protected her- as Harry's did when he was at the Dursley's?

Author's Response: Quite possibly, but then Severus wouldn't need to rescue her, would he? hee hee

braye272011.01.21 - 11:09AM5: Four: There Are Wounds That Stir Up The Force of GravitySigned
"Votumtactus." The spell Voldemort cast on Severus is brilliant, and it almost succeeded in causing Severus to take Hermione then and there. As powerful as the Dark Lord is, even his spell couldn't overcome the Potions master's innate need to protect Hermione, to cherish her, and to love her… not take her... even though the spell was telling him to do just that. Now Hermione knows that her professor truly desires her... and that the Dark Lord knows it, too. "The Dark Lord knows I desire you, girl, and if you stay, I'll take you against your will!" But would it really be against her will? It would be a very bad idea at this point, but would it really be against her will? I hope Dumbledore will be helpful to his spy, and not try to take advantage of him like the Dark Lord does. But we all know how Dumbles defines "helpful." Great chapter, Teddy! Beth

Author's Response: Thank you, Beth! I hope you will continue to enjoy it. I'm feverishly working on the next chapter, thought it was done, but my glorious Muse has other plans! So I need to do a little reworking, and hopefully it will be ready in a few days.

lmbrewer2011.01.21 - 10:13AM5: Four: There Are Wounds That Stir Up The Force of GravitySigned
Is nothing ever easy for Severus (or Hermione)? Another great chapter. Every time I read a chapter in this story I get sucked further in and wait ever more anxiously for the next chapter. Thank you for sharing.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm working very hard on the next chapter, trimming a little fat from it.

braye272011.01.21 - 01:17AM4: Three: If I Am To Be Condemned For My Sins, Let Me Commit Them FirstSigned
Oh, how I love that voice. All that verbal sexual tension was well written, Teddy. I was so hoping that Severus wouldn't have to go to the Dark Lord, but once he got there, he played his role well. Those few minutes when Hermione and her Potions master were speaking and touching and caressing each other nearly drove me mad. *fans self* Well done, my friend! Beth

Author's Response: Beth, I'm so glad you're enjoying it! I'm working very hard on this one, and the fact that folks are enjoying it so much is very enjoyable!

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