Reviews for The Succubus
| beaweasley2 | 2008.03.14 - 05:33PM | 24: Chapter Twenty Four | Signed |
| For a minute the way Hermione was acting I thought it was the Succubus back attacking Severus. *blushes* But wowzers that was an amazing scene...
I think I'm with Higgs on the whole plan thing... seems way to simple with too many small factors that can go wrong. One small slip and the plan will fall and they will have to fly on the cuff, won't they?! I'd love for there to be a glitch! Bradley hasn't a clue at all - he's literally falling into his own web, isn't he? Too bad - sucker!
Looking forward to more, but lunch is over and I have to get back to actually DOING some work today. hehehe But I'd rahter keep reading this! |
| beaweasley2 | 2008.03.14 - 03:35PM | 23: Chapter Twenty Three | Signed |
| Oh my gods! Draco. Kissing her in the Great Hall. In front of everyone. and the wat Severus reacted!! Brilliant! Hooch - crackin good reaction! Whoot!! Minerva, not gets to kick Slytherin back a notch, but got a dig inon Severus as well. Yikes!
But poor Draco, embarrased himself in front of the whole school, scolded (sort of) by Severus, lost his house 50 points and still has to serve detention AND will still have to embarrass himself by following Hermione everywhere. Kind feel for him, even if everyone IS in on the truth of it all. geeze! wowzers... |
| beaweasley2 | 2008.03.14 - 02:44PM | 22: Chapter Twenty Two | Signed |
| This was good. I love that Draco is in on the plans, even though he is a target. Severus confiding in Harry, almost friendly toward him – what a real turn around! The surge of power Harry displayed – almost fits with the dream, Lord Potter. If Harry cannot learn to control his emotions, lets them get the better of him – he’ll explode and take out – em, everything! I hope the ‘lessons’ go much better than the Occlumency ones did. I’m confused about T. Higgs and his being at Hogwarts, but that he is plotting against both Harry and Severus is eerie. Terrance was 7th year Harry’s second? or first? May have to re-read that part again…
Brilliant story, nice twist and turns. You do have a way with the quill my dear!!
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| beaweasley2 | 2008.03.04 - 07:12PM | 20: Chapter Twenty | Signed |
| I love the deeply committed slowly falling in relationship between them. Kudos to Hermione for taking him in hand! hehhe Still, the unrepentant Death Eaters - someone is going to do something foolish, I can feel it! |
| beaweasley2 | 2008.03.04 - 06:43PM | 19: Chapter Nineteen | Signed |
| Oh, I really thought that Hermione was going to be abducted! Thank Circe that Severus showed up! |
| beaweasley2 | 2008.03.04 - 06:19PM | 18: Chapter Eighteen | Signed |
| Oooooh, what will Hermione think when she finds out it was Harry's mum Severus was pinning for?
Love Hooch, she's a complete kick in theis story! Ok, I was wrong... do I have to iron my hands for my earlier reveiw? *erk* |
| beaweasley2 | 2008.03.04 - 05:32PM | 17: Chapter Seventeen | Signed |
| It is so good that Harry told Severus that he respected him. The 'thank you' and maturity Harry showed Severus as astounding, but I think they will finally be able to be firends sometime down the raod.
I hope Severus doesn't take too much time to deal with his 'inner demons' and realizes that he is redeamable.
Loved this chapter - even for being short, there was some very deep heartfelt moments here. |
| beaweasley2 | 2008.03.04 - 05:03PM | 16: Chapter Sixteen | Signed |
| Oh, that was some nightmare! Dark Lord Potter? hehehe, with Dumbledore and Snape as his henchmen, and Draco... twisted! |
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