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ancientgirl2005.03.25 - 07:37AM45: Chapter Forty FiveSigned
I'm glad Harry finally came to his senses, although I would have liked to see a more nasty death. But I suppose being swallowed whole by a giant snake is pretty bad lol.

Author's Response: oh no! you will not like the next chapter, i dont think! hehe the secret comes out! hehe

tjbaby2005.03.25 - 07:02AM45: Chapter Forty FiveSigned
thank goodness you've updated! Great chappie as per usual, but opens more questions just when I thought my other ones had been answered (but then that's a mark of a good story right?). Either Bella and the new snake changed souls, or Harry transfigured Bella directly into a snake. Either way it's got to be the new snake inside Nagini. But how??? And was Bella doing some kind of soul exchange or body takeover with Gin? It's a belated type of curse so it's only activating now? And Krum is in the picture? Feeding his fantasies huh? Severus will get to the botom of this no doubt - just when? So will the Succubus finally get her peace by breeding a new child in place of her lost one? All new questions! Curiouser and curiouser... Update soon please??????

Author's Response: Yep, I purposely didn't let any of this chapter come from Harry's pov. that will come in the next chapter :) i'll explain things from what he saw and did. Krum wants Hermione big time, but he will only have his succubus (and yes, the succubus wins...that wench!)

Armor2005.03.25 - 03:58AM45: Chapter Forty FiveSigned
This was a great chapter. Though I agree with Severus :is belle really dead ?

Author's Response: thanks, doll. Severus has a right to be suspicious. :)

LariLee2005.03.25 - 03:44AM45: Chapter Forty FiveSigned
I want to know how Harry turned Bella into a snake. :-) And why? And who would really believe that he let Nagini eat Bella? No wonder Snape is suspicious. And is Ginny going to be okay? Darn you and all these questions you raised! :-)
~Lisa

Author's Response: hehe.. answers to these in the next chapter! muahahhaha good questions, doll. ;)

GinnyW2005.03.25 - 02:53AM45: Chapter Forty FiveSigned
Very nicely done, my dear! I like this. Bella....hmmmm....and what's the deal with Ginny? You know I'm a little overprotective of that red head! I'm very curious to hear about Krum and his idea of the Succubus!!!! ~Gin

Author's Response: teehee..thanks, doll. ginny will be okay for now. :) Krum is so....blind, i think! hahahha more up soon. cheers!

JTBJAB2005.03.25 - 02:23AM45: Chapter Forty FiveSigned
Hey looking forward to more of this funky story!

Author's Response: thanks! glad you are still enjoying. more up soon

compulsivelyObsessive2005.03.25 - 01:56AM45: Chapter Forty FiveSigned
Things are far from over, I see. Poor Ginny, hopefully she'll start feeling better soon. Is she preggers too? That would certainly complicate matters for everyone but it might snap Harry out of his psychotic moods. Certainly a responsibility that would change the dynamic of their relationship and if Bella's still alive (which, I'm pretty damn sure she is) then she would have even more jealousy of Ginny. Of course, I'm writing my own plot now so I'll just shut up and sit in the corner quietly and wait for your next update. Sorry I keep going off on tangents, I do love this story and I love your writing in general but I can't help but want to see it played out a trillion different ways in addition to the way you put it. Probably a large part of the reason that I stare into space and mumble alot the time. I'm busy imagining what's going to happen next in the many versions of this story that I have stored in my brain. Oy vay, it's bedtime for this mattress surfer, I'm off to go catch me some soothing sleep waves. Toodles dollface!

Author's Response: Ginny will be ok. She isn't preggies though. She won't be for another year or so. Harry would 'wake' up if he had a child on the way. Bella is still alive (u know me so well).

I'm the same way when I read stories as well. I think about all the different little plots! hehe Don't ever feel bad about sharing your opinions or giving me your thoughts on the matter. i love hearing from you. i had wondered how you were faring in school. all ok?

cocoachristy2005.03.25 - 01:56AM45: Chapter Forty FiveSigned
Very very good!!! I don't like the affection he still shows her. I still say he is a little mental....I can't wait to see what happens next. They should make Harry put his memory in a pensive! I think Dumbledor knows something and he likes things the way they are. Does Ginny have a lasting affect from that spell? She was acting funny in the end...Victor better watch it if he doesn't want Severus to knock him on his ass!!! ;-)

Author's Response: yep, he is a bit mental, isn't he? more up soon. hehe dumbledore usually does know most of what's going on, sneaky codger..lol Severus will be rude to Viktor. i dont know that it's a good thing though

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