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Reviews for The Succubus

Athena2005.01.09 - 07:02PM9: Chapter NineSigned
what about a contreception potion, she can't get pregnant this early in the game can she?

Author's Response: they'll broach that topic in the next chap! hehe good thinking

lovethelab2005.01.09 - 07:02PM9: Chapter NineSigned
I liked how the Weasleys (and Harry) all seem to be happy for Snape and Hermione. Great chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I like it when they approve as well. I think only her parents (who don't know him) will have maybe something funky to say.

Drake2005.01.09 - 06:51PM9: Chapter NineSigned
Heh, Harry gave his blessing. Now who are we waiting on? Anyone?

Author's Response: uh huh...the incubus and succubus still have to come! her parents... But, Hermione is so headstrong. I doubt they'll be able to talk her out of anything.

Horserider2005.01.09 - 06:48PM9: Chapter NineSigned
Hmmm...wonder if I get to break this review section's cherry? ;) Dying to see what reaction the demons have when they realize they've been foiled. Uh-oh, I just remembered something...Hermione didn't take a you-know-what before getting up to mischief. Could Trelawney be telling the truth for the third time in her life? Or will it be Ginny and Harry to give her that distinction? Looking forward to more! ~HR

Author's Response: Hehehe...naughty HR! That topic is up in the next chapter. I think you and that mae have been in my journal!

MlleGigi2005.01.09 - 06:24PM7: Chapter SevenSigned
I'm really enjoying this story so far -- especially since you've managed to find a new way to get SS and HG together (what with all the fanfics out there, that's not so easy to do). I only have one tiny nit to pick with you thus far, regarding Severus's birthday. I realize that this is your story and hence you're entitled to do with Severus as you see fit (up to a point, anyway) but...Severus, a Capricorn?? I just can't see it -- to my way of thinking, that man can't be anything other than a Scorpio. Subtle, intensely private, outwardly calm yet seething with emotion underneath, prickly, secretive, sarcastic, prone to holding grudges, vengeful when angered...with that, I rest my case.

Author's Response: Sorry, but on J K Rowling's site it says Happy Birthday to Severus today, January 9th. Maybe send her a flame. LOL. It's Rowling's idea. I swear it! I had his birthday in November until she announced it on her site yesterday.

Sonni2005.01.09 - 06:06PM8: Chapter EightSigned
*applauds * I like the various balances and counterpoints of emotion you brought into play here.

Author's Response: Thanks!

ancientgirl2005.01.09 - 05:19PM8: Chapter EightSigned
Oh no, not anticlimatic at all. Throughout the entire story I've had that feeling about her innocence and his difficulty to put his feelings into words. You did a fantastic job. Thank you so much for updating this so fast. I'm eager to read about their breakfast with the staff though. If I know Hermione, she will say something to shut the others up fast.

Author's Response: I think she probably would like to, but she might be a tad 'afraid' to start off on the wrong foot with her new associates. LOL. It's interesting though. Hooch is a character that likes to poke fun in this story! LOL

NotSly2005.01.09 - 05:11PM8: Chapter EightSigned
As always, looking forward to more!

Author's Response: thanks so much!

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