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Reviews for The Succubus

Betz2005.01.10 - 10:51AM6: Chapter SixSigned
Poor Severus, such low self-esteem if he thinks she's cheating on him and feels the need to spy on her. And I do hope Lucius doesn't think a Hand of GLory is an appropriate gift for a young lady.

Author's Response: lol! uhhuh...he'll be better

dreamlover2005.01.10 - 10:32AM10: Chapter TenSigned
Oh my god Sun! You did an amazing job with this chappie! First, we got sweet, romantic snuggling, then SUPER HOT LEMONS (drools), and then, WOW!!! ACTION!!! I love how they stood up to the evil visitors! WONDERFUL! When Hermy drew her wand!!! YES! GO GIRL! And when Sev struggles and fights and finally finds his strength in his love for Hermione...AHHHHH!!!! WONDERFUL!!!!!! This story is complete for me now, anything else you add will be the marinara on the ravioli! BRAVO!!! BRAVO!!! :) hehe, can you tell I loved it? :)

Author's Response: Yes! I can tell. LOL. I'm messing with eleven now. It should be up at some point today. I've decided to add a couple of things hehe...hopefully it goes over well. thanks for the review (and let me know if you start the Narcissa story again).

ladyofthemasque2005.01.10 - 09:34AM10: Chapter TenSigned
More, please!

Author's Response: working on it now! Thanks for responding (loved for someone special-as you know, since i sent pleading emails..lol)

Kaylee2005.01.10 - 09:23AM10: Chapter TenSigned
wahoo great lemons and the triumphant defeat of the really icky creatures. ok y bella i mean ewww. haha oh well thanks so much for the great story.

Author's Response: uh huh. i can't stand bellatrix either... that slag! lol thanks so much

ancientgirl2005.01.10 - 09:20AM10: Chapter TenSigned
I loved this chapter. But, now I'm wondering if that gash she left on his leg while he was dreaming is something to worry about. I'm looking forward to more!

Author's Response: we'll have to ask Dumbledore about that one. hehe thanks! i was hoping i described the succubus' true form enough

pickles2005.01.10 - 09:19AM9: Chapter NineSigned
yippee updates..... the chapters have been excellent. thank you.

Author's Response: thanks so much!

grill2005.01.10 - 03:57AM9: Chapter NineSigned
I just stumbled across this story, and I must say I absolutely adore it! You portray Severus brilliant - not only is he in character, but he's UNBELIEVABLY sexy...! The plot's brilliant and believable, and I can't wait to see what will happen next. Please update soon - like, how 'bout, right now?! :)

Author's Response: lol...it's being approved now. thanks for reading!

scully_m_2005.01.10 - 01:55AM9: Chapter NineSigned
WOW! Thanks for so many chapters! Gods i love this fic; i am smiling like a big dork as i write this, just like i was as i read the 4 chapters. More soon! Got to love Ron's lame ass cover up.

Author's Response: yeah, lol! what a goof! hehe more will be up tomorrow. thanks~

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