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Arwen9992005.03.07 - 05:05PM30: Chapter ThirtySigned
Hi! One chapter before dinner! (yes, it's late to eat) Nice dialogues! The first part was touching. After what happened in the earlier chapter, it was soothing to start with something not as dramatic! (although it ends with something not very happy [but that's life!]) Oh, now I'm very, very sad for Ron... Poor guy! Did I already mention that I hate Bellatrix? ^^ I wish Luna could cure, but... she doesn't look very well. And what will happen to Hermione and the others? Damn! (P.S. Yes, I've finally updated my story. I'm late for that too...)

Author's Response: hiya doll! i'm going to go have a read as soon as possible! woohooo.. glad it's updated! yay you will see as it goes on how things turn out. there is hope for luna yet... :) poor ron is right... sigh... sometimes you get through a bit of pain before pleasure... more up soon

macabre312005.03.07 - 04:34AM40: Chapter FortySigned
I love this story, and can't wait for the next chapter. I hope everything is well with you!

Author's Response: thanks so much! more up soon as i can

Dover_witchy2005.03.07 - 03:14AM8: Chapter EightSigned
I thought it was written very well, you protrayed Mione to be the virgin that she is, unexperienced nervous and questioning everything. thats how she should be. Besides giving it the truthful look it was as you say lemony very sensual and tender. Great work!

Author's Response: thanks, doll. i was hoping it would turn out that way and be believable. cheers!

Dover_witchy2005.03.07 - 02:19AM5: Chapter FiveSigned
Doing great luv, this is excellent!

Author's Response: teehee!! ty ty ty

blaze_of_fae2005.03.07 - 01:09AM40: Chapter FortySigned
please don't tell me that you are doing a switch of powers (luna's magic has to go somewhere right? so why not into draco? she does love ron and draco is close to him right) actually that might be a really cool plot bunnie....update soon

Author's Response: actually, no. that never crossed my mind. lol.. sorry! but being a plot bunny, yes, that is very, very interesting!

Dover_witchy2005.03.07 - 01:01AM1: Chapter OneSigned
So far so good luv no complaints from me. Then again i dont think you could write anything that would turn my stomach (so to speak lol)! I am some what addicted to the SS/HG romance tangles. You have successfully made them an item I love to read about! Great work...now I think I shall continue any objections? No. Good ta ta til next reveiw! ; )

Author's Response: yay! thanks, doll! i'm glad you are liking it.

Arwen9992005.03.06 - 08:53PM29: Chapter Twenty NineSigned
Hi! Ok, I'm a bit late... (to sum up: old computer to change, problem of screen, virus on my new computer, and lots of "AAAAARRRRGGGGHHH!!!"). But I finally managed to read one chapter before going to sleep. So: Well, well, well, the students of Hogwarts have strange games! ^^ And Percy is still such a prat... (ok, not that much now I've read the sequel) Oh, and I hate Bellatrix! Really, I hate her! More and more every day! And... Sniff... Percy died! *made me cry, although I'm not a Percy-fan* And sad for Luna *sniff again* Sad chapter, but really wonderful!!! ~Arwen999~

Author's Response: Thanks, doll. I had missed you! glad to see tht you are back. I'll be checking for updates to your brilliant story on lumos!

HiddenAllusion2005.03.06 - 07:41PM40: Chapter FortySigned
I check this story all the time, but I always seem to manage to not realise that it's updated, and then by the time I've finished catching up you've added more! But that's a good thing... I really love this story, and it gets better with every chapter. And the hospital sounds ominous... I hope you're okay. Umm... excellent chapter, as always. Thank you!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! Sometimes it doesnt stay on the front page long, so people miss the updates. Glad you are liking it. Hospital trip wasnt too bad. I need to get on some fluid pills b/c of something with my kidney. I have more tests soon though. Thanks so much!

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