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Reviews for The Succubus

Cenicienta2005.01.07 - 02:50PM4: Chapter FourSigned
Great story. I just read all 4 chapters and I really like the plot. Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: thanks. i have more coming. it's completed.

darkgryffindorgal2005.01.07 - 02:01PM4: Chapter FourSigned
Great! Please write MORE!!!!

Author's Response: as you wish :)

ancientgirl2005.01.07 - 01:29PM4: Chapter FourSigned
Great stuff. I hope she realizes he's just trying to do what he believes best. I really hope she doesn't go to someone else, but I have a feeling she won't. I'm glad Harry told her Severus looked like a jealous lover. That should count for something.

Author's Response: yeah, harry to the rescue! fear not though, where could she find someone that Sev wouldn't see it? lol i think he's too jealous to allow that to happen..

pickles2005.01.07 - 01:26PM4: Chapter FourSigned
another excellent chapter... mmmm... maybe she should stay behind. room with minerva... take a walk to the dungeons to see if professor snapeypants needs some assistance with potion making.. then make her moves on him. i guess that may be a little to forward... too bad she can't find out what she is "wearing" for part of his dream... wear the same outfit but different colors... thank you for updating.

Author's Response: **wink** wait til next chap when he sees her lol

Horserider2005.01.07 - 12:41PM4: Chapter FourSigned
Damn good angst to be had in spades here! :) Great Snapeism, and I love how I can still see all their expressions! Better still, I can hear *his* voice! Logged on to read this before breakfast, and it just hits the spot! Dare I hope for more by tonight? Throwing chocolates your way for such enticing bits of this intriguer...Severus sure is the jealous, possessive, territorial lover in here that I always picture him to be! Brava! 10/10! ~HR

Author's Response: i wanted him to come across as he doesn't want her yet he does (but then he reasons with himself.. well only b/c ...such and such..) lol but yes, i think of him the same way

Mouse2005.01.07 - 12:41PM4: Chapter FourSigned
Gasp! What a rotton selfish GIT!!!!!! OOO, I just want to box that man's ears. Feel free to bed whomever you wish. Well could he be more insulting? Snarl! Ok I'm better now. . . I think. Hah. I hope you can up date soon. :D More please.

Author's Response: I'm updating right now. Hopefully it will be up by this evening. Snape is just being Snape hehe

Rainbow2005.01.07 - 12:26PM4: Chapter FourSigned
Please, Hermione, don't sleep with someone you like, even if it's just as a friend. Severus will kill him when he finds out! This is a great story.

Author's Response: thanks! yes, he would kill them lol

Taura2005.01.07 - 12:17PM4: Chapter FourSigned
Ahhhh no, Hermione! Calm down! We don't need any of that! I LOVE this story, more please!

Author's Response: hermione jumps to conclusions at times.... lol

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