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bubblybabs2008.07.12 - 01:46PM8: Chapter EightSigned
My only problem is that after the 1st time you are SORE, not for a day but for like a week... All these stories make like a girl hurts for a few seconds and then the pain magically goes away and the girl is orgasming all over the place... Kind of unrealistic... Guess that's par for the coarse... I do like how you portray their awkwardness after the hot sex... And their timid discussions...

Sarah_Smiles2008.07.05 - 05:12PM51: Chapter Fifty One (Epilogue)Signed
im sorry that i havent reviewed untill now but i have just finished your story and i absolutely love it! i love that way you thought out the plot and how the characters interact. im so glad that you didnt kill off hermione either. thank you so much for writing and i can wait to read part 2 :) your awesome!

A_Vixen_Unfurled2008.04.13 - 11:23PM40: Chapter FortySigned
all three of them? i wonder where that is going? Wonderful story, severus i this fic makes me think of AR in Sense and Sensibility as Col. Brandon

beaweasley22008.03.21 - 06:52PM44: Chapter Forty FourSigned
What a lovely and intriguing, slightly twisted in knots Valentines Day complete with loads of chocolates! whew!

beaweasley22008.03.21 - 06:25PM43: Chapter Forty ThreeSigned
I don't want Bella to be Nagini's new friend - i wnat her DEAD!! I don't think Bella would be a good familiar for Harry. Yuck!! Let Lucius and Severus kill her or let Neville!!

Looking forward to Valentine's Day... hope we see all the cute couples get flffy n' lemons too!

beaweasley22008.03.21 - 06:08PM42: Chapter Forty TwoSigned
I loved the historic story of the Wisard of Snakes! that was really cool.

But get rid of Bellatrix already! Harry is getting to emotionally attached to her and she's served her purpose. Hermione can find the answer to what Voldemort did - just give her the notes and journals! Geeze!

beaweasley22008.03.21 - 05:19PM41: Chapter Forty OneSigned
It still seems like Voldemort is still in Harry!! I loved the jealousness Seveus had when Harry touched Hermione. hehehe with all the wards Harry set up how would Lucius and Severus get in? 10++ ?SW - this is a great story!!

beaweasley22008.03.21 - 04:44PM40: Chapter FortySigned
So it was Harry's connection to Ginny that was giving him the visions? There isn't a bit of Voldemort in the mix? It's weird, I read this chapter and felt - soothed. as if everything will work out. Nicely done.

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