Reviews for The Succubus
| Jong_Kahn | 2009.02.25 - 11:02PM | 51: Chapter Fifty One (Epilogue) | Signed |
| Very nice story! Do you have a working title yet for the sequel? I liked that Harry, Severus and Lucius together helped to bring Hermione back. It would be nice to see their mutual friendship continue. Cheers--and thanks for all your hard work! |
| Jong_Kahn | 2009.02.24 - 01:14AM | 31: Chapter Thirty One | Signed |
| Hmmmm! Quite interesting; what a lively plot turn you've got going here! |
| Angry | 2008.12.15 - 02:12PM | 5: Chapter Five | Signed |
Would you call your lover 'little one'?
Author's Response: I call him "Big One" actually. He calls me that sometimes, so no, I don't see it as some creepy thing. |
| drakos4 | 2008.12.15 - 04:30AM | 51: Chapter Fifty One (Epilogue) | Signed |
| EPIC!!!! I really like the characters this time and the various shifts of power amongst them. Wonderful story! |
| apinchofhope | 2008.08.23 - 02:01AM | 14: Chapter Fourteen | Signed |
| the plot is pretty good, but I can't keep reading 'cause the character portrayal is poor. the speech that hermione and severus use is just too unrealistic and it's turning me off. sorry. |
| MissingGreen | 2008.07.21 - 07:40PM | 51: Chapter Fifty One (Epilogue) | Signed |
| I enjoyed this story immensely. I do like how everything turned out. I did start to dislike Ginny near the middle and it just got worse, but eh, you did with her what you thought fit. I love the power that you give to Harry, it's intriguing. I know there was something else I wanted to say.. Hmph. I know I would have loved an excerpt from the book they made, as well as a letter or two from their own reviewers ;) Umm.. I can't wait to read more stuff by you. |
| MissingGreen | 2008.07.20 - 06:09PM | 44: Chapter Forty Four | Signed |
| Usually I don't review per chapter basis, especially on a completed story, but I just totally had to on this one..
I almost laughed myself into to TEARS when I saw that sensitizing potion! Have you, by chance, read any of Veresna Ussep's stories? I dare say, that's the exact thing that happened in that story! Albeit, not on valentine's day.. but even the breath was the same. Adorable. The story I do mean is Secretly Slytherin, and the one before that is Don't Lie to Me. Have to say I enjoyed that, nobody EVER thinks of sensitizing potions! Adorable. Thanks for that. I enjoyed everything about this chapter.. and I love how Severus *always* says She for their child, while Hermione nor him ever notice it.. (I did look ahead once someone died in a chapter because I never noticed the "Character Death" warning on the chapter only warnings, not on the story itself, just to see who died. I would have noticed it anyway, tho! =) - ) Thanks for this cute chapter. On to finish the story! |
| Terrible Tues | 2008.07.15 - 02:10PM | 39: Chapter Thirty Nine | Signed |
| virile http://dictionary.reference.com/search?q=virile
nubile
http://dictionary.reference.com/search?q=nubile
Good story, but you might not want to say that Hermione is virile. |
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