Ashwinder :: To bewitch the mind and ensnare the senses

Reviews for The Succubus

pickles	2005.04.14 - 08:03PM	50: Chapter Fifty	Signed
Woo Hoo... I got to read this before hubby. Oops sorry about the little happy dance. Excellent. I was almost devasted to think Hermione was going to be gone for good. Thankfully Harry was able to lend a "hand". I'm sure later Snape won't be to thrilled about owing Harry again. But will he actually stop at one? Or will they have a second go and have all the medical people around to take care of her as well as Harry? Waiting for more. Author's Response: lol poor bill.. hahahaha good thing harry was there, i say! :) Snape owes harry so much now... muahahhaa.. but that's for the sequel. Severus wants to stop at one, yes. Harry will always be hovering about hermione. interesting, isn't it?

hallowsnape	2005.04.14 - 07:52PM	50: Chapter Fifty	Signed
can't wait for the next, sequel or prequel, or even a new tangent entirely, keep writing, you have fans here! Author's Response: thanks so much! glad to hear that!!

wisteriarose	2005.04.14 - 07:49PM	1: Chapter One	Signed
Well, this is certainly a different tangent. I have had this story in my favorites for a while saved for idle time. Now that term is over, I have ample. So far, the story has been well worth the wait. On to the next chapter... Author's Response: well good deal! i hope you enjoy it!

GinnyW	2005.04.14 - 06:37PM	50: Chapter Fifty	Signed
Well done, my friend. Personal opinion...no epilogue. You've set yourself up nicely for your sequel...the unanswered questions need to be unanswered. (Had to put that in a public place so that peeps didn't think that everyone thought an epilogue was necessary.) I think you did everything well here. It's all set up nicely for your sequel, but nothing that's going to drive us all batty for months waiting for the sequel. Does that make sense? Awesome! So glad you got this one finished! YAY! (It was my first HG/SS story...thanks to Nyxie and Meredith...those two definately did a good job of corrupting me.) ~Ginny Author's Response: thanks, doll. I'm glad you liked it. There are people prob saying no epilogue!!?? lol it makes perfect sense. those are my thoughts as well. thanks for reading, doll, and i'm glad that i was your 'first' hehe

Mouse	2005.04.14 - 06:15PM	49: Chapter Forty Nine	Signed
Well that was a lovely chapter. Her dreams are troublesome though. How wonderful that sev was pleased that harry got his much coveted position. Great job can't wait till the next one. Author's Response: thanks, doll. glad you liked it :)

Cmuse	2005.04.14 - 06:08PM	50: Chapter Fifty	Signed
I am not usually one to review, so I am sorry if this might seem awkward or disjointed. I have greatly enjoyed reading this fic, and am very interested in the prequil and sequil. I assume you'll post the sequel here, but where will you post the prequil? I would hate to miss out on more of your wonderful writing. The twist with Krum was wonderful; I would have thought he'd be long dead and burried by now. Perhaps he has a larger part to play in the future? In any event, terrific story. I eagarly await more. Author's Response: i appreciate the review :) I would post the prequel over at Occlumency. It's another SH site. There is a link to it on the main page. They have a few other archives as well. The sequel will be here though. Krum has a huge part in the sequel. :) xooxox

2005.04.14 - 06:04PM

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Excellent! Oy I almost cried when Hermione was proclaimed dead! That would have been awful.

Yes, it was definitely worth the read. I have enjoyed it thoroughly and I will be sure to keep tabs on the sequel and prequel.

Thanks for writing such a great story! Cheers! :-)

Author's Response: thanks so much. i'm glad to see that you liked it! i'll put more up soon. :)

SeverusGal	2005.04.14 - 05:24PM	50: Chapter Fifty	Signed
OMG! Amazing! I was on the verge of balling my eyes out! I love this story! great job. Author's Response: thanks so much! :) glad you liked it