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lovethelab2005.03.16 - 08:39AM42: Chapter Forty TwoSigned
So is Harry going to transfigure Bella into a snake? Just a guess. I hope Hermione can change Severus' view of Valentine's day!

Author's Response: i think v-day will be very special, and wow.. you are so close!

ancientgirl2005.03.16 - 07:14AM42: Chapter Forty TwoSigned
Hmm, I'm feeling really uncomfortable about Bella here. I hope Harry doesn't get carried away. She's still a very dangerous person, and if and when she finds out Harry's been messing with her who knows what she will do. Good stuff here.

Author's Response: bella does have a way of slithering about, doesn't she? more up soon with harry / bella

enchanter2005.03.16 - 03:49AM42: Chapter Forty TwoSigned
Thanks for the update and another wonderful chapter! The plot is still incredibly intriguing, I know I won't be able to put this down until it's done, sequel included! ;) The only problem I had was with Hermione reading from the muggle book. It didn't really "read" like a muggle book on legends, at least to my ears/eyes. It was too.. concise, to the point. It sounded more like she was summarizing rather than reading aloud. Of course, this was nice, as part of your story, b/c it relayed the necessary information quickly and efficiently. But I thought I'd mention it in case you ever want to use this kind of device in a piece that has fewer plot layers and more wiggle room to allow for the digressions and quirky details to be more fleshed out. Strategic "..." are great to indicate the skipping over of the irrelevant information while character reports said findings, too. I'm really worried I might have said this before, since the two do so much research, and if I have I'm sorry to sound like such a nag. Nothing but the best intentions! Happy writing!

Author's Response: ahahahaah!!! you dont know how funny this is that you've brought this up! I first wrote it as if she summarized it and let him read what she wrote.

Then, I said, "Hmmm. Such a long bit with no breaks." So, I let Ginny W have a read for me, and she said perhaps it would be better if it sounded as though Hermione read from a book. So, she reworked it for me. I must say I like this better with her reading it aloud. I don't think you've mentioned it before though.. hehe Not a prob. Cheers!

Meredith2005.03.16 - 02:01AM42: Chapter Forty TwoSigned
Oh, it was excellent!! Can't wait to see how everything wraps up!

Author's Response: thanks, doll!!!!!!!!!!!! won't be long now

Mouse2005.03.16 - 01:48AM42: Chapter Forty TwoSigned
Dealing With Pregnancy: A Man’s Point of View, I nearly spit my tea all down the screen. lol. You should put warnings with your chapters. *warning, spit up alert. Extreamly funny!* Wonderful chapter. Poor Harry I'm glad he's keeping the one snake, too bad about loony though. Valentines day for snape doesn't sound to promising. :( Can't wait for the next one.

Author's Response: ahahhaaha!! i thought that would be funny teeehee... more up soon!

amethyst2005.03.16 - 01:14AM42: Chapter Forty TwoSigned
"Bella: to kill or not?" How about turning her into a snake. It'd make everyone happy.

Author's Response: naughty amethyst.... have you been reading my outlines? teehee brilliant

Dover_witchy2005.03.16 - 01:08AM27: Chapter Twenty SevenSigned
Quite tasty lemons muwahahahahahaha!

Author's Response: teehee... gotta love 'em

Dover_witchy2005.03.16 - 12:39AM26: Chapter Twenty SixSigned
YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Theyre engaged oooh how exciting :D!!!!!!!!! Look at me gushing like a little girl *sigh* Im hopeless i tell u utterly hopeless lol!! wtg luv excellent as always! That Bella bitch needs a good beating!!!! Damn wothless whore muwahahahahahaha!

Author's Response: lol... yes, bella is a bad girl!!

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