Reviews for The Succubus
pickles | 2005.04.12 - 12:59PM | 49: Chapter Forty Nine | Signed |
Thank you for the new chapter. Sorry I was so long in reading it. But you've already heard my problems. Great chapter. Too bad Krum is not really seeing the picture. But if he did you wouldn't have another story to write. Thanks tootsie. have a good week.
Author's Response: thanks, doll! glad you liked it. i'm slowly working on this one. sigh.. |
Aurealis | 2005.04.12 - 12:18AM | 13: Chapter Thirteen | Signed |
Okay, this chapter was really well written. The potion making wasn't boring, as you put it. It was a nice intro to the lab sex. Not that I'm speaking from experience or anything, but next time they should make sure they scourgify the table-top first. Labs are good places to get infections and chemical burns. Safety first! Now my favourite part of this whole thing was the comparison between Pig and Ron. So funny!
Author's Response: lol thanks!!! loved the lab sex |
stuknsmallville | 2005.04.11 - 05:44PM | 49: Chapter Forty Nine | Signed |
i love this story, just wanted to let u know that there are plenty of people who look forward to reading your work! can't wait for upcoming chapers and the sequel!
Author's Response: thanks so much!!! u dont know how much i appreciate that! :) |
warlock_vader_69 | 2005.04.11 - 03:24AM | 17: Chapter Seventeen | Signed |
sometimes short is good ; time to think after a fight helps; she was moving in to fast and he needs space. understandable
Author's Response: right on.. thanks` |
warlock_vader_69 | 2005.04.11 - 03:20AM | 16: Chapter Sixteen | Signed |
as you know i liked how dark he was in the dream. it was cool
Author's Response: it was . lol :) |
warlock_vader_69 | 2005.04.11 - 03:18AM | 15: Chapter Fifteen | Signed |
i wondered where the cat was
Author's Response: what cat? oh! lol.. crooks |
warlock_vader_69 | 2005.04.10 - 06:56PM | 14: Chapter Fourteen | Signed |
i am going to dinner but will review more when i get back the friends are good to see when they have troubles
Author's Response: lol.. i see you right now.. munching on that chicken. silly vader. yes, friends are always good when one has a problem. |
warlock_vader_69 | 2005.04.10 - 06:52PM | 13: Chapter Thirteen | Signed |
the potion was interesting we neer see that much
Author's Response: lolol |
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