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Enitsirhc2005.04.19 - 03:48PM50: Chapter FiftySigned
Was it worth the read? HELL YES!! I loved every bit of it! Did you write a sequel? I'll have to go check the Yahoo site you mentioned. I'm from Kansas, so I guess you won't be too surprised when I say have to say; Aethonon, Bella the great snake, and Viktor with Succubus Hermione OH MY!! 10+++

Author's Response: lol thanks so much! I'm going to email that minimovie to you this evening some time. I've just gotten in from a long trip, so I'm going to take a bit of a nap

Lyndie5782005.04.19 - 12:44PM50: Chapter FiftySigned
Wow! The permutations on the implications for Harry bringing Hermione back are infinite! Poor Severus, he almost paid too high a price. I wonder how Harry's actions will effect all their relationships. And what will happen to Albus now that he's helping Harry recover. Will it take all of Albus' majic? If you do a sequel, I'm afraid it's going to have to be more than 15 chapters. You've really do have quite a bit of ground to cover if you follow what you've laid out here. Good Luck! Thanks for the effort, this has been one hell of a ride!

Author's Response: thanks, lyndie! I'm glad that you liked it! I say 15 chapters, but you never know lol... I will try to make each a bit longer though. i'll have more up soon. xoxooxxo

sully22005.04.19 - 04:56AM49: Chapter Forty NineSigned
Can't wait to read the rest and the epilogue, and the sequel, and the prequel . . .

Author's Response: thanks, doll. i'm so glad you liked it! :)

sully22005.04.19 - 04:55AM48: Chapter Forty EightSigned
OK, It was just a dream. . . I have to tell myself that or I'll get squicked. For some reason I was OK with her pleasuring him with her mouth, but him actually f---ing her, no way. . . it was just a dream. I really like that you left it up to our imagination as to what really happened and the same with the Ron/Luna/Draco thing although I could have used a few more details (lemons, please). Maybe another 3some will happen over the summer?

Author's Response: lol! not much of a threesome but a friendly something or other .. hehe

Enitsirhc2005.04.18 - 07:47PM46: Chapter Forty SixSigned
I have been reading and reading. This is so incredible. You are an amazing writer. I wish it would never end! I have to go read more now!

Author's Response: teehee.. thanks, mate! i have an epilogue to add and then i'll start planning the sequel :)

sully22005.04.17 - 09:06PM47: Chapter Forty SevenSigned
Moving right along. Good job on moving forward and tying up loose ends. Can't wait to finish reading.

Author's Response: hiya! long time no read.. lol

Lyndie5782005.04.17 - 06:32PM29: Chapter Twenty NineSigned
Oh, that really sucks about Luna. She didn't seem to be to central to your story, but I liked her nonetheless. Thanks for the post! Interesting chapter--Harry is reallly changing! I hope it is for the better!

Author's Response: yep, poor luna. She will be back though, no worries :) glad you are liking it. harry goes through a lot of changes

Kylara2005.04.17 - 04:06PM50: Chapter FiftySigned
This was definitely worth the read. However, I don't think you need an epilogue. If you do, I recommend putting the last scene (with the prophecy) as the epilogue/teaser. To do anything else as a epilogue strikes me as starting the new story early.

Author's Response: right. i was thinking along those lines as well. i do know where i want to start my next story though. Maybe i'll just put a small piece of something in here that I wouldn't have bothered with in the next story. maybe i could put the entire prophecy ? good thinking

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