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Fictionlover_322005.02.18 - 01:11AM35: Chapter Thirty FiveSigned
I wonder if the Incubu's back-up plan might involve Harry? He thought of kissing Bella of all people! Harry hates Bella, for what she did to Sirius. He wouldn't be caught dead being with her, let alone kissing her, no matter how important his plans are for the order. I think the Incubus is somehow controlling Harry somehow, and if that's the case, then Severus and the other will have a hard time figuring out the truth. Another plot developement! How exciting! And to your question to Ron and Draco, I have a feeling they like each other. They're always together, not to mention their constant bantering with each other. Mabye they'll become a couple? Who knows? Anything can happen! You're doing a wonderful job with both stories! Keep it up! Update soon. Cheers!

Author's Response: actually, it's not harry, but i did wonder about that. i would have loved to have messed with it somehow in this story, but that will have to wait for the sequel. Harry has some 'internal issues' haha
Normal Harry would never be with bella, but Harry wanting to help luna would (oh! don't forget, harry's being influenced a bit..hehe)
i too think that the boys (r/d) have a bit of feelings but luna is still around so... not sure where they will end up just yet. more up soon. cheers!

126353972005.02.18 - 12:56AM35: Chapter Thirty FiveSigned
Well well well... This is interesting! I love how your story twists and turns, it always ensures that I check every time I come here to see if there is an update, keeps the interest high! I cant wait for the next installment!

Author's Response: thanks! more up soon. hopefully today! hehehe cheers!

pickles2005.02.18 - 12:29AM35: Chapter Thirty FiveSigned
Hello SW. Great to see another chapter in your story. Poor Harry. I can picture a scene from charlie brown where lucy gets kissed by snoopy and starts yelling for something to kill the germs. yes harry must watch his step. since mione is married has that changed her scent? that's it isn't it. oh send me the chocolates. an don't listen to hubby all we have is nestle choc chips in the house. (2nd bag hidden.) since him and our 3 yr old devoured the last bag leaving a few chips. lol too bad harry didn't ask her to give a little input on what she needs to reverse the spell.

Author's Response: lol @ charlie brown! Let me send you some of this V Day chocolate that I have. I need help in getting rid of it. Expanding hips and all that...
It isn't her scent. Harry hasn't changed that yet, but he will. I'll likely go into that in the next chapter or the one after. Cheers! xoxoxo

Betz2005.02.18 - 12:18AM35: Chapter Thirty FiveSigned
Damn Incubus! Is it Harry it has its sights set on? Either that or Victor. I'm guessing Harry. Wedding conjugal bliss. Aaaahhhh! The satisfaction of a great shag. Bella, you little whore! Bad Harry! Bad! He better hope Ginny understands. Evil thoughts creeping into his mind...OOooooh Pottervolt is on the rise. And what's up with Ginny? Is it the fact Luna got zapped and her brother dies while Severus walked away unscathed that has her jealous of Hermione? Draco likes Rooooon! Maybe when Luna's all better they can have a threesome. WEEeeee! The chapter raises so many questions. Hopefully some will be answered next chapter.

Author's Response: Pottervolt.. haha!! i love it! you very nearly have ginny pegged. more up on that in the next chapter. In fact, lots of questions will be answered ( i hope hehe).
and you're right. it is Viktor that the incubus will be going off to next if Hermione remains too strong for him. And...naughty bella hehe...I love it!! more up soon

Maela2005.02.17 - 11:36PM35: Chapter Thirty FiveSigned
Hmmm....Is this other wizard Harry? Or Victor?

Author's Response: i'll be honest with ya.. it's Viktor. hehe more up soon~

tjbaby2005.02.17 - 10:06PM35: Chapter Thirty FiveSigned
hey, me again. Just saw your reply to my review. I know that the consumation was tech over. Just got me all into the whole thing and then wham bucket of cold water! hehehe don't worry just me grumbling over the cold water thing. But I have to ask.... what's to become of this Draco/Ron attraction? Will they realise? Reading what you wrote, I think that Draco knows, but Ron doesn't? More soon please? Sigh, this is going to be over soon, isn't it? (whatever will I do then?)

Author's Response: well ron really does love luna. i think he thinks of draco as a friend, but i do think that in his mind there is no other girl for him if she doesnt come out of it (so, in my mind, being with a guy...enter draco, wouldn't be like cheating). but, we won't see any of that here. i'll just leave things to your imagination. that way peeps that don't really care for slash can just imagine that luna and ron hook up and draco moves along. draco knows he feels something, but he is confused about it. i'll touch on it just a bit more.
about the consumation, hehe.. no problem. i prob could have waited, and i planned on it. i was gonna have him admired the ring and asking on it, but i said hmmm... while he's in her mind maybe he could see it lol Yep, mah poor story is wrapping up. What will i do after? lol... I'm sure we'll think of something. Wanna go to a pub and have some Firewhisky?

Molly Schlemmer2005.02.17 - 09:38PM35: Chapter Thirty FiveSigned
Great chapter! Who knew that Harry/Bella would equal surprisingly hot? And I LOVE the Harry-is-the-new-Dark-Lord plot element. It's very original. And you write Snape and Hermione so well! Keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I too thought that was pretty cool (harry/bella). you and another reviewer agrees.. hehe.. there will be a bit of something else before harry behaves like a good little hero (muahahaha..) for now anyway. I will do a sequel at some point. I love my SS/HG. Glad you are enjoying my story~!~ Cheers!

Dkstar2005.02.17 - 09:26PM35: Chapter Thirty FiveSigned
I saw your response to my review saying that Harry/Bella was hot. ---- might you put a little more in ?????? I say - it would screw with some people's minds but I think it would be oh so fun to see this go on for a little bit longer (please put at least one more semi-lemon of this in...). I really am liking the whole "Harry is the new DarkLord incarnate"......

Author's Response: yeah i think a semi lemon is in order (how'd you guess that? hehe) he's gonna have to be a little persuasive to get her to actually give him help for luna. sometimes you just have to take one for the team. he'll figure out what's really going on and sev will help him. i think a part of him will always have some darkness, but we won't see all that much in this fic. (anything darker than we have seen anyway). that'll be in the sequel. hehehe...

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