Reviews for The Succubus
| HermioneFan21 | 2013.02.23 - 06:38PM | 1: Chapter One | Signed |
| why and WHO was it that SENT the Succubus. to severus and why and WHO was it that SENT the Incubus to hermione?? was it the dark lord? |
| HermioneFan21 | 2013.02.23 - 06:35PM | 1: Chapter One | Signed |
| “If only we knew her face, we could take steps to change this. You must fight her, Severus. You can’t succumb to the desire to mate with her, no matter how tempting she may be. I feel you would be lost to us.”
what would happen if he did?? would die or as i asked before get the thing pregnant? |
| HermioneFan21 | 2013.02.23 - 06:32PM | 1: Chapter One | Signed |
| can the Succubus get pregnant by severus? and can hermione get pregnant by the Incubus? and why does the Succubus to severus look like hermione of all people and why does the Incubus for hermione look like severus!! they are not in love with each other!!!! so why? |
| Elenaluv | 2012.10.20 - 10:08AM | 51: Chapter Fifty One (Epilogue) | Signed |
| I loveeeeee this story. This is like the fifth story I've read of yours and I have to say I love your writing. It was so beautifully written!! You really are an amazing author. |
| adelgado | 2012.02.13 - 02:38AM | 51: Chapter Fifty One (Epilogue) | Signed |
| Wow. It took a little time, but it was worth it. very intriguing. Looking forward to the next part. |
| verasuspense | 2011.05.19 - 09:45AM | 1: Chapter One | Signed |
| I once stayed awake for over 24 hours, so I know that it makes you feel spaced out, as though your head was floating above your neck. You fall asleep the minute you lie down. and sleep like the dead. |
| SS Felton | 2011.02.16 - 03:51AM | 6: Chapter Six | Signed |
| in reading this story i jjust got to say this: The concept is novel and that is the only reason i'm trudging through all this bad writing. The style is juvenile. The idea is good but it is not supported by the writing. This fic had the potential to be great. it is just mediocre. |
| angelnomiko | 2010.06.21 - 01:36AM | 51: Chapter Fifty One (Epilogue) | Signed |
| wow that was awsome .. i love that mione can now talk to snakes... are you still going to make a 2nd part to it .. i hope so i love your fics... later for now
angel |
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