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tjbaby2005.01.19 - 04:00PM23: Chapter Twenty ThreeSigned
nicely done! I agree with Draco on this one. I pity the poor sod who tried to take Hermione from Sev! I really do like the way you have put Harry and Severus in this chapter. Very nicely done without being out of character. I can't see him turning into a Dumbledore mini me though! ;-) I am curious about the role that Stuart will play if any. I am glad that you cleared up with him that they were seeing one another. Leaving a nice little trail of clues though... hope it pans to what I think!

Author's Response: thanks! no i don't see sev as the next albus! lol.. mah own sick joke there...teehee. Stuart is my only original character (was hoping too many peeps didnt object), and he does play a role in things soon! Thanks for the thumbs up! it's appreciated.

LariLee2005.01.19 - 03:59PM23: Chapter Twenty ThreeSigned
I wish I could offer some con crit, but I'm just overwhelmed by this story. It's so original, yet the characterizations are superb! And I can see Snape becoming Potter's mentor.
~Lisa

Author's Response: thanks, doll! i appreciate that. it's kind of hard to pull them (harry/snape) together in a friendly manner due to what goes on in canon, but hey! this is our world! lol more up this evening if they let! thanks so much!

Winna2005.01.19 - 03:56PM23: Chapter Twenty ThreeSigned
Another wonderful chapter. I'm waiting for the bad guys to make their move...

Author's Response: won't be too much longer. thanks so much!

compulsivelyObsessive2005.01.19 - 03:53PM22: Chapter Twenty TwoSigned
Hmmm...the plot thickens to a glue-ish consistency. I like the direction this is going, I especially like the plan that Higgs had to mail a bit of bloodied Hermione hair to Snape. That would be a great dramatic moment, but then I'm kind of insane when it comes to creating scenes. Anything for a beautiful scene, and I also happen to be one of those weirdos that thinks that aesthetically speaking, suffering ends up being quite pretty on the page. I sound like I'm evil. Oh well, tis the curse of those in theatre to appreciate the ugly in life and to be incapable of properly explaining it. *sigh* Lovely chapter as per usual. Ron growing up a bit? Good for him. Good for you for not turning him into a completely obnoxious character; that happens SO MUCH in SS/HG unfortunately. I'm not a huge Ron fan but I think that there's alot that we don't really know about him. -cO

Author's Response: Uh huh. I hate when Ron is made into a complete dunderhead. lol. And, hell yes, i am twisted as well. Can do with the scenes like that also! Perhaps we may see something a bit off color(?) soon. more up this evening (so i hope) thanks again, doll

crinna2005.01.19 - 03:44PM23: Chapter Twenty ThreeSigned
i am enjoying this fic bunches but there is one suggestion i could make. when you change seens in a text document could you put a page brake line like this ************************************************ so it is easer to read. thats the only thing i would cange the rest is wonderfull

Author's Response: lol! i just went back and did that... they disappear when i upload... so you prob started reading right before i did it! sorry, love! glad you like the fic. more up this evening if they will allow it! muahahahaha

yutamiyu2005.01.19 - 03:24PM23: Chapter Twenty ThreeSigned
Interesting that Snape never says "I love you" when Hermione is conscious...or did I miss something? Another interesting chapter...I'm curious as to where you're taking Draco in this story.

Author's Response: no he never tells her. he's not comfortable voicing it just yet. draco is a pawn much like hermione is. he won't be a bad guy here (sorry? lol i dont know if that is good or bad). i like a good draco so he'll be a help

HarryPotterSNL2005.01.18 - 09:44PM22: Chapter Twenty TwoSigned
You updated, yay! Good chapter, can't wait to see how hermione's job goes. You do a good job with the whole plot about trying to get severus and malfoy in trouble, even though sometimes I wish you had more lemons but I know you need a plot. Update soon!

Author's Response: lol! sorry for the lack of lemons so far. More in just a bit. chapter 24 i believe. Chap 23 has been in queue for a while. Hope there is no problem!

dreamlover2005.01.18 - 03:46PM16: Chapter SixteenSigned
Bravo! moving on...

Author's Response: lol thnx!

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