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Sniv2005.04.23 - 09:15AM21: Chapter Twenty OneSigned
I think Snape will always be a bit dark...I really hope the 'bad guys' will get their arses ...you know ;)

Author's Response: uh huh... it works out well muahahah

Sniv2005.04.23 - 09:04AM20: Chapter TwentySigned
“Indeed,” Severus said, not liking the charismatic boy with his woman. LOL! Hehe...Lovely chapter...

Author's Response: teehee..he's so jealous at times

Sniv2005.04.23 - 08:49AM19: Chapter NineteenSigned
“I love you,” he whispered softly. Sayyy ittt outtt loouuuddd toooo herrrr! Hooch tsk tsk lol!

Author's Response: i know. he needs to say it :) hooch...muahhahaha

Sniv2005.04.23 - 08:37AM18: Chapter EighteenSigned
I would very much like to know exactly who I should strive to be more like in order to become more appealing to him. aw Hermione...*pets her*

Author's Response: sad huh? women! i can say i've been here before, wondering whose shoes i should try to fill

Sniv2005.04.23 - 08:28AM17: Chapter SeventeenSigned
He was right. Albus wouldn’t be alive forever, and then where would that leave the boy? That a boy Snape! Why could he feel so much, yet say so little? *sniff* Aw lovely ending!

Author's Response: lol.. circle of life

Sniv2005.04.23 - 08:16AM16: Chapter SixteenSigned
Harry felt a bit like Dudley. lol! It would make for a good training show for aspiring firebrands. lol! I'm glad Fawkes are there and I feel sorry for Harry...*pets him* Harry jumped for joy! “You get him, Hermione! Show him what Gryffindor is made of!” Hehe love Harry's outbursts! This chapter was great!

Author's Response: teehee.. oh yes! i loved the harry outbursts (good job fawkes)

sevplusmioneforever2005.04.23 - 07:44AM51: Chapter Fifty One (Epilogue)Signed
I greatly enjoyed reading this story; so much that I stayed up til 5:30 AM to do it! It was a bit long, but I appreciate the fact that you dealt with the "side" plots nicely while still holding interest and putting in plenty Severus/Hermione fun! The poem Severus wrote for Hermione was one of the most lovely things I have ever read, and I hope someday I have a husband who loves me as much as dear Sevvie does Mione in your story. I nearly cried when Hermione almost died, I felt Severus's loss most keenly. An excellent bit of writing, this whole story was and I commend you for it. About the whole "Bella" thing, I must say it unnerved me quite a bit, but I think you resolved it quite nicely. I look forward to reading The Succubus: Part Two! Thank you once again for such an intriguing read. PS: I LOVE Severus and Hermione's child's name! Beautiful!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! it's such a long read. sorry about that, but I had so many ideas that wanted out. :) I wanted to portray him as a man who never thought he'd have anything to a man that had everything. So he does cherish her, and when he thought she was going to die...whew.. that was hard to write. bella ...muahhhaaha... I'll be working on the next part soon cheers and thanks so much for reviewing. I thought the name would be appropriate :)

Lone Raven2005.04.23 - 04:13AM51: Chapter Fifty One (Epilogue)Signed
Hey southern I was wondering is there going to be a sequil to know what happens to hermione and severus's child and the succubus? just wondering I really enjoyed your whole story sorry I dint give you a review before just wanted to see how it turned out and just to tell you you did a DAMN good job!!! thanks again, awaiting your reply Lone Raven AKA Casandra (casandrahirzel_15@yahoo.com)

Author's Response: hello cas! yep there is to be a sequel. i'm not going to write for a couple of weeks though. I'm needing a bit of a break. thanks so much for the review! i'm glad you enjoyed the story. if you liked twists and turns, the next bit will be the same. i'm going to send you an email in just a moment to give you the link to my yahoo!group, Potter_Place. I post snippets and update information there. :)

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