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| Gardengrrl13 | 2005.01.08 - 12:16AM | 5: Chapter Five | Signed |
| *sigh*
I hope you continue to update quickly... You've sucked me into this one and I want more! *smile* Author's Response: Chapter six should be up soon! thanks! | |||
| Betz | 2005.01.08 - 12:04AM | 5: Chapter Five | Signed |
| Two best lines of thre whole chapter, "am I awake?" and "this should be entertaining." Really laughed over those lines. Loved Caveman!Severus. Hot and ready to pounce on her in his office. Thank God you are updating quickly, as I don't think I could stand to wait much longer for another chapter. The UST is building very nicely. Sigh...that really was quite a proclomation of his love, showing up on the train and giving her a little kiss goodbye. Siiiiigggghhh. Ah, young love. Author's Response: i liked the little train visit too! hehe. i don't know how much longer they'll be able to stand it! | |||
| Darque Queen7 | 2005.01.07 - 11:26PM | 5: Chapter Five | Signed |
| I've been reading this since the begining - and I really like where the story is going. Snape is rather Snape-ish...but he was a bit soft this chapter. But it was a great fluffy kind of soft that I can definitely forgive. I liked the way he went after Draco - and snogged Hermione senseless on his office floor!
Oh - definitely a good lemony chapter! Can't wait for the next one!
D. Author's Response: Not too much lemon in the next... but coming soon! | |||
| Betz | 2005.01.07 - 11:26PM | 4: Chapter Four | Signed |
| Good for Hermione! Go get some girl! If I knew at then, what I know now at 36, I would have lost my virginity before I was 21. Poor Severus, feeling like such a perve, and nothing to do about it till he comes to his senses. Oh well. And then there Ron, clueless, big mouth, prat!Ron. There's something about him that screams "I'm a loser!" at times. Good on Harry that he sensed Severus was acting jealous and not as a tempermental bat. Author's Response: I always feel like harry would be the more understanding one for some reason. Hell, I know what you mean. If I knew things that I know now... the possibilities. Hermione almost reminds me of me. Hell, i never knew girls could *pleasure* themselves. LMAO! Did I just say that shit aloud? oops! Cheers! | |||
| Betz | 2005.01.07 - 11:00PM | 3: Chapter Three | Signed |
| (Happy dance.) Lots of updates to read! How nice that they fight it, though they want to give in. How wonderful that their curiosity is piqued. How delicious that they suffer. On to read more. And in refernce to your question on chapter 13 of my story...I won't tell! You just have to wait and see. Can't spoil all the fun of the story if I tell now. As you are an author, yourself, I'm sure you don't want to tell us immediately that they'll end up in the sack. Of course we know it, but we love to read the long lead up to the completion. It's the question of if they will or won't that's the wonderful part. THe journey is the joy with the destination it's final sweet reward. And so though I strongly suspect they will get down and dirty eventually, I love reading about them in their current state of mind, trying to deny that they might eventually shag one another. Author's Response: Dang! thought i would sneak in a freebie! lol love your story, and i understand :( hehe. down and dirty you say? definitely | |||
| SeverusGal | 2005.01.07 - 10:56PM | 5: Chapter Five | Signed |
| This is truly an amazing story. The progression of the romance is beautifully written. Keep up the amazing work! Author's Response: thanks so much! | |||
| CarnalRhapsody18 | 2005.01.07 - 10:43PM | 5: Chapter Five | Signed |
| This story is turning out to be simply smashing. ^_^ I absolutely love it! Hermione and Severus are simply endearing in this. I love their reactions to everything and you've managed not to make Snape too soft and mushy. He's his wonderfully snarky self, the only difference is that he's showing a bit of heart.
Great job, sorry for the lack of reviews, and I can't wait for another update!
~CR Author's Response: :) thank you! | |||
| pickles | 2005.01.07 - 09:53PM | 5: Chapter Five | Signed |
| NO WAY he definitely was not too soft... i'm sitting here all smiles on my face.. (i probably look goofy too - oh well)...love it.... especially draco dancing with her and then sitting in the train... oh the poor professor i know he can't help because of those evil spirits but oh i don't know what else to say... i just love it. thankyou so much for updating again.... will try to be patient for the next dozen chapters
just kidding Author's Response: thanks~! i was afraid someone would accuse me of having him ooc! lol... but i don't think he's that bad... next chapter up soon. | |||
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