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tjbaby2005.01.11 - 11:55PM13: Chapter ThirteenSigned

I got my wish! I got my wish! (Chandler dance in chair) Parents visit and the next dream installment all in one! Ahem. Well...Thanks so much! Was nice to see that the Grangers warmed to the "nice young man". It would have been nicer if it had been strung out a fraction as it seemed rather quick, sort of rushed through the visit, but it's all good.

Poor Sev, he's going to be mortified and I'm sure he's all strung out thinking about how he hurt his love. I love how Hermione dealt with it. I do wish we plebs could do that to our parters (just sometimes hehe). I like how the succubus has really gotten to his worst fears. Forcing himself, and on students no less. I hope Hermione can get through to him.

Author's Response: It was rushed at her parents' home. I figured that i would put the important part in and move on. As my first edition of the succubus didnt even have a visit to their house, i thought this was fine. anything else there would have been boring. so long as they accept sev in a timely manner, is good for me. he is mortified! next chap up in a bit. thanks


queenp2005.01.11 - 11:51PM13: Chapter ThirteenSigned
Understand the need for the "evil" Severus in the succubus dream/nightmare. Makes a lot of sense. I like the chapter...as for the potion making, it was good. It shows that they have similar interests other than just sex. The parents were OK. I can see them being upset for the reasons listed. However, I think it would have taken just a bit more time to get them warmed up to him...Chapter was great, just as the story has been all along. Update again soon....

Author's Response: To be quite honest, i hate stories where her parents are arses. I doubt i'll ever have that in one of mine. she's an adult after all. thanks doll!

Horserider2005.01.11 - 11:04PM13: Chapter ThirteenSigned
Well, I didn't have to wait long! Heeheehee...I think I would have slowed the pacing of this chapter somewhat, maybe drawn it out a bit more, but other than that it was interesting. Glad to see Severus eats his pizza like I do mine, and I loved the drunken game, very fun! ~HR

Author's Response: I have a friend that eats it with a fork as well! lol not me though, i grab it up and stuff it in. i debated on breaking it up some... but then i didnt want to put his dream with the next chap... thanks for reviewing! hehe

Horserider2005.01.11 - 10:43PM12: Chapter TwelveSigned
Yea! Now we get to the thick of things, and hopefully see a little fur flying with the parents! I was beginning to wonder where that snippet about the newspaper reporter was heading, and lo and behold, the twins can be relied upon to stir the pot a bit! Maybe it's just me, being in the mood for a little claw-sharpening, but I'm rubbing my hands together hoping for more! ~HR

Author's Response: just as you reviewed, the next chapter went up... lol! coincidence? hope you like it~

carolsh2005.01.11 - 09:09PM12: Chapter TwelveSigned
I have a very difficult time iagineing Hermione calling herself a "mudblood" even ironically. She knows what a terrible word that is. Otherwise, I still really like what you are doing this and am so glad that you update with such great freqency. Thanks for writing.

Author's Response: i can see her saying this as she said it. she's an adult now, and she's above letting words effect her. just my opinion. more soon

Fictionlover_322005.01.11 - 08:57PM12: Chapter TwelveSigned
Those Fred and George! They never stop with their mischiefs do they? When will they ever grow up? Then again, if they did grew up, then it'll take all the fun out of their friends life. So Hermione's parents are informed of their relationship? I wonder how they will take it? I've read most fics where Mion'es parents practically chewed Snape out for disrupting their little girl. I hope in this fic, they'll have a different opinion. You're doing great. Update soon! Cheers!

Author's Response: I think they are more disappointed about something else..not so much that it's severus. thanks!

queenp2005.01.11 - 07:01PM12: Chapter TwelveSigned
Ooooo, "our chambers" that is a wonderful slip of the tongue...Plus Hermione needs to tell her parents ASAP, although the twins jumped the gun a bit...Like the way the discussion of Kids occurred. I'm loving this story. It is wonderful. Please update again soon.

Author's Response: thanks! next chapter up in a bit.

compulsivelyObsessive2005.01.11 - 05:47PM12: Chapter TwelveSigned
Snarky, cold peeps? *gigglegigglegigglesnort* That sounds like disgruntled Easter candy. Wee marshmallow chickens of pure irritability. Confections of crankiness. Surly sweets. *gigglegiggle* The chapter itself was lovely too. Severus and Hermione getting into spats and getting to know one another. What a weird feeling, to know that you're destined to be with someone but to still have to go through all of the adjusting and compromising just like everyone else. That would drive me crazy! Abode anxiety? Believable, most definitely. It would be completely natural for him to react on the assumption that everyone has the same grandiose expectations as Lucius & co. did. It is the society into which he was raised, after all. The chance meeting with Lucius and Narcissa was delightful, very uncomfortable but bearable. People tend to exxagerate that kind of thing but in general events like that are always liveable. Being uncomfortable within your love interest's social scene is a critical part of the dating experience. At least they aren't of differing religions or anything. Hermione the mormon? Severus the ascetic puritan? Or Unitarian, or presbyterian, or lutheran, or methodist, or calvinist, or ba-hai, or muslim, or jewish, or pagan, or catholic, or wicca, or baptist. A whole new level of fucked-up. Congratulations on yet another lovely chapter and I thank you for the quick updates and the quality of these updates. You are the wind beneath my wings, if I had wings. In a sort of metaphorical sense, I suppose. Why is it always references to birds? Well...I guess I can see how 'the turf beneath my hooves' isn't quite as complimentary. I am so totally shutting up now. -cO

Author's Response: hehe! another great review. do you realize how much you make me smile? and giggle? Thanks so much. More in just a bit.

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