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| LariLee | 2005.03.20 - 02:29AM | 44: Chapter Forty Four | Signed |
| I loved Valentine's Day! I loved the Lockhart references! And where can I buy that cream? I didn't think it was too fluffy, the poem was perfection. And what is there it up to? Evil!Harry? That I can live with. :-) another wonderful chapter! ~Lisa Author's Response: lol thanks! thought i'd try to slip a bit of funny stuff in there b/c the next chapter will be hard for me. sigh... harry is being such a bad boy, isn't he? thanks, doll. more up tomorrow | |||
| lil_jouett | 2005.03.20 - 01:30AM | 44: Chapter Forty Four | Signed |
| Effin A! Lol, sorry, that's some slang term that i've picked up and i'm not quite sure what it means. Let's just say that I usually use it to express anger, and that very evil mean little cliffie was enough to rile the inner anger in me. That was just mean! You had better get the next chapter up quick or i'm flooding Potter Place with requests that you do so. I'm sure ppl will reply to the numerous demands with demands of their own. Harry! What is that little sneak prat up to? He'd better not cheat on Ginny, he'd better not! I just KNOW that she'd find out and it'd break her poor little heart! You'd better not let that happen Sunshine (that's cute, i'm gonna call u sunshine now!!!) or i'll cry! Big fat tears. Lots of them. Anyways... Valentines between Severus and Hermione was truly wonderful. An awsome little bit of writing has been done in this chapter. That poem was awsome, and Severus's shyness was just so cute! I really loved it, I wanted to cry too (but there's ppl here and that would have had awkward questions, so i refrained.). I'm lovin' this tension between Ron and Draco. Ron was SO jealous and Draco just knew, and i'm pretty sure that he liked it!!! You've written those two very well. I noticed you snuck Luna in that chapter too, I saw that. So Harry's new snake is gonna be Bella? That's kinda cool I guess... atleast I think that's what's gonna happen... lol. The staff bit with the Lockhart trashing was great also. No, the Valentine's Day bits weren't too fluffy, I enjoyed them alot. I'm looking forward to the next chapter that I know you're gonna update real soon. Viktor? This could be interesting....
Luv ya loads and a hippogrif! (are there 2 f's at the end?)~Lil Jouett Author's Response: wow!! lol..where to begin. About Harry, well, he's going to be a good boy (mostly). He does have a plan, but ultimately bella will be gone. Poof. :) Yep, I couldn't leave luna out! You are right about R/D. I think they are both confused lol Poor blokes. Something snakey coming soon. Poor Lockhart. He never knew what an arse he was. haha I'm going to post day after tomorrow.. monday. Viktor's visit will be fun. :) two f's in hippogriff? lol think so... cheers xoxooxoxo ~Sunshine | |||
| Betz | 2005.03.20 - 01:19AM | 44: Chapter Forty Four | Signed |
| Sweet poem from Severus. Oh, anyone got a 2x4 in which to smack some sense into Harry? Stockholm syndrome with those two. Poor, deluded Harry. Better not be screwing around on Ginny. I'm liking Harry less and less as this thing with Bella progresses. Somebody stop that boy...and quick. Well, hopefully Draco and Ron will come to realize ity's not so bad to go both ways..or at least give some pleasure to another that's not the opposite sex. Polynadry is definitely a possibility..that is if Narcissa and Lucius don't have a corinary first. Author's Response: harry is being terrible isnt he? lol never fear though; he next chapter will show what happens to bella. :) i like the polyandry bit as well **winks** | |||
| medicdaddy | 2005.03.20 - 12:32AM | 44: Chapter Forty Four | Signed |
| This is getting along nicely. What a very good chapter. As the plot thickens it leaves the wonder. Ron seems to have a handle on things and Draco seem to be coming to an understanding . I can see there confussion now but am trying to see how they work through it. Things are going well for Hermine and Severus. Harry is still going down that scarry road. I hope that he is getting it together. I know how he gets in and out of sticky things but hope that his trust and hopes are not for not. It may be that he still feels that killing is wrong unless it is a very last resort , as in battle. Even with out magic she has eval thoughts and can still have a will to hurt people.well until you update again I can only speculate. hope to hear from you soon . your update are coming through in record time . I dont know how you do it but keep up the good job. Bill Author's Response: i'm glad you are liking it still.. it will get together soon. harry is just being a bad boy. all will be well though. after the next chapter, bella will be gone. :) more up monday probably. thanks so much@ | |||
| enchanter | 2005.03.19 - 11:24PM | 44: Chapter Forty Four | Signed |
| I really enjoyed this chapter and the poem, though I do have a suggestion to make. In the line, "Matrimony ensured that we’d last," the rhythm is a bit off to me. I think it would flow better if you used the full "we would" instead of the contraction. I know it toys with the visual aspect of it, but this way the rhythm changes you've made two the ending couplet will draw the focus of the reader instead of being distracted in the middle (plus it will sound nicer aloud). As well, a ";" to end second last line instead of the period would further differentiate the end lines from the rest, as well as tie the two ideas together more strongly to give it a final kick. Hope this is helpful.. great job though! Author's Response: well i'm glad you liked the chapter and i am sorry the poem disappointed you. I'll keep it as is, thanks, but should I decide to really publish anything, i will keep your advice in mind. I do like unrestricted poetry though, and I figured since it was simply an acrostic with rhymes,it would be fine. Naughty Southern. More up soon. Cheers. | |||
| blaze_of_fae | 2005.03.19 - 10:39PM | 44: Chapter Forty Four | Signed |
| you are evil southern! you can't end this chapter with a cliffie! and one such as this! you must upate the instant you get the next chapter ready! huggles though! Author's Response: "Mishchief Managed" lol more up soon xoxoox | |||
| queenp | 2005.03.19 - 10:36PM | 44: Chapter Forty Four | Signed |
| What the heck is Harry doing?????????Loved the sentimental bits from Severus. Chapter was excellent...The scene at dinner was great--Lockhart bashing is wonderful sport...Update again..please.SOON! Author's Response: harry is a bad boy! sigh... i thought sev was sweet as well hehe. thanks!! teehee about lockhart! poor sod. more up monday.. xooxoxo | |||
| droxy | 2005.03.19 - 10:18PM | 44: Chapter Forty Four | Signed |
| Stupid Harry! Lovely lovely sweet and romantic sentiments between SS and HG. I hope the snake works out. Author's Response: Harry is a berk, isnt he? lol Snake up next! | |||
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