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| Winna | 2005.01.31 - 09:18AM | 27: Chapter Twenty Seven | Signed |
| I don’t have a problem with dominance sex-games in fics, but this one struck me as kind of out of place in this particular story. It seemed that Snape moved pretty quickly from ‘I’m afraid to touch her because I hurt her in our dreams’ to ‘I’ll shag her on the desk between classes and tick her off to boot’. The scene itself was well done, I just thought its placement was a little rushed. But then again, I am a plot junkie, and look forward to story telling more than smut (not that there’s anything wrong with that). Author's Response: ah, no problem at all. They've been having more sex lately (since she attempted to seduce him, he feels more comfortable with her now and wants to explore his other desires...) but you have a good point and just so happens, she touches upon that in chapter 28. hehe Cheers! | |||
| lynn_k_fletcher | 2005.01.31 - 05:31AM | 27: Chapter Twenty Seven | Signed |
| the action is certainly mounting! the lemons are fabulous as well. Keep up the good work! Author's Response: thanks so much.. more up today... was under the weather a bit, but much better now! cheers | |||
| Lana Manckir | 2005.01.30 - 09:46PM | 27: Chapter Twenty Seven | Signed |
| The lemos are actually great, nothing wrong with a different thing. It's usually long and mind blowing and well, we all know it can't be always like that. Some teasing here and there and fast rough sex can be very exciting too, believe me, I loved every minute of it.
As for the informant, I admit I was thinking of Steward, but I'm glad it isn't. That means Hermione has good judgement. When this whole thing reaches a climax, gods it will be intense and I can't wait! Author's Response: thanks so much, doll. I'm feeling quite sick today, and I've not uploaded my next chapter yet, but I promise as soon as my son is off to school, i'll start it up! Psst.. I like any lemons as well teehee... | |||
| Mouse | 2005.01.30 - 07:30PM | 27: Chapter Twenty Seven | Signed |
| Phew fans self, that was amazing!! :D once again you melted my screen. lol. Keep this up i'll need to buy a new one ;D lol. I feel sorry for Draco having to be with that girl. Icky. I don't like her. :p And you left us at a cliffy, who's at the door girl? Wonderful as always. Till next time! definately a 10+ ;) Author's Response: thanks again! always can count on ya! hehe.. we'll start off with draco next chap and see how he feels about it.. :) | |||
| Mouse | 2005.01.30 - 06:43PM | 26: Chapter Twenty Six | Signed |
| Does Draco bat for the other team hahahah so funny. Lovely chappie darlin. On to the next one ;D Author's Response: teehee.. i thought that was funny as well... cheers! | |||
| HarryPotterSNL | 2005.01.30 - 06:09PM | 27: Chapter Twenty Seven | Signed |
| Very good chapter. Its getting very twisted. I liked to Hermione/Severus lemons. And I bet it's draco at the door. Update soon! Author's Response: yep..draco up first in next chapter.. more soon | |||
| pickles | 2005.01.30 - 05:05PM | 27: Chapter Twenty Seven | Signed |
| geez i go to put in a review and it doesn't work. let me try again. a very hot chapter. snape can be such a tease. glad to hear most of the characters had some physical exercise. must keep the cardio working properly. good job. Author's Response: teehee..thanks! working out some kinks in next one.. more up soon | |||
| grill | 2005.01.30 - 06:19AM | 27: Chapter Twenty Seven | Signed |
| This definitely showed another side of Severus in the bed department, but I liked it! It's so like him, he is after all a Slytherin... ;) And it would be really fun for Hermione to pay him back in the same manner at some point... As for Marietta, you've turned her into a truly fascinating character! She's still canon, but you show us some brilliant sides of her, and I have to say I'm intrigued. Poor Draco though, he's really being put through a lot, isn't he? Now I'm really curious as to what will happen during their Hogsmeade weekend... Update soon, darlin', I need to know what's going on!! :) Author's Response: Yay!! A review for my Succubus! Everyone is leaving a review for Libertine and bypassing my fave story here lol... She will pay him back muahhahahaha And, yes, Marietta is something else eh? Draco is gonna be first up in the next chapter... more up soon! | |||
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