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| CarnalRhapsody18 | 2005.01.21 - 11:16PM | 23: Chapter Twenty Three | Signed |
| Yep...I'm still here! I must apologize for the lack of reviews but I've been reading every chapter. ^_^
Such a wonderful, wonderful story! You should really be proud! Great job! Now...write more chapters. lol.
~CR Author's Response: lol! i have some more. I've been waiting well over a day for chapter 24 to be posted :( boo hoo i say! lol after they get that up, i will slip in chapter 25 (intense sev) lol thanks! hopefully it will be up soon | |||
| Horserider | 2005.01.21 - 05:39PM | 23: Chapter Twenty Three | Signed |
| Good chapter, and a blockbuster of a line:
*Draco’s owl had left his owlery if he thought he’d get away with that.* LOVED that! It just isn't safe having Vanilla Coke present with lines like that! ;) And I loved Jealous!Severus! ~HR Author's Response: lol! ty doll. i've had chapter 24 in queue for over a day now. sigh! i was wondering if anyone noticed the hooch line! lolol more jealous sev up again in chap 25 | |||
| pickles | 2005.01.21 - 04:37PM | 23: Chapter Twenty Three | Signed |
| Thought you might be interested in this - http://www.hersheypa.com/events/chocolate_covered_february/index.html Author's Response: omg! lol that is the 'sweetest' place. i've never heard of it before... passing along to my beta..she'll likely show up there lol sigh.. i've been waiting for about 33 hours now and still i've not been posted... hope nobody thinks i've forgetten them... thanks so much! | |||
| swooning | 2005.01.21 - 12:34PM | 19: Chapter Nineteen | Signed |
| A stone is about fourteen pounds... Do you think there's really anything in the canon to suggest Hermione needs to lose thirty pounds? I'm just asking. Author's Response: not at all (in canon) but in my story she is a bit on the healthy side. not so much that it's bad. but honestly, what girl doesn't want to lose 14 or even 20 pounds? she said that about herself. so he wasn't putting her down. he did say that he liked her as she was. i just see her as having a full figure. no firm, flat body here. just the body of a well figured woman Author's Response: To be quite honest, i was thinking a stone was about 10 pounds. LOL. Glad to know it is 14 though (packs away for future reference) Thanks! | |||
| alphafemale | 2005.01.20 - 11:10PM | 23: Chapter Twenty Three | Signed |
| I loved the parallels usiing "my boy" between Albus and Severus then Severus and Harry. Good job with that. Also, jealous Snape is a good Snape. I love it when he's jealous and just lets loose. And yes, poor Draco. Aw. Thanks for updating. It was a great chapter, very revealing. Sorry it took me so long to review. Author's Response: not a problem! i've had 24 in there all day but it's not approved yet. sigh... hope nobody minds terribly. i love jealous snape too muahahaha. i did like snape/harry/albus thing as well! one of my hopes (that they can be friendly). | |||
| Arwen999 | 2005.01.20 - 05:59PM | 23: Chapter Twenty Three | Signed |
| Interesting reaction from Draco, knowing what his father did to Ginny in second year. And Draco kissing Hermione in front of everyone (including Snape)... How funny! lol Oh, and poor Madam Hooch! That's sad... But I really liked the way she was portrayed in that chapter. I musn't forget: the part about Dumbledore was nice (when he speaks to Severus [and the parallel with Harry at the end of the chapter]). Waiting for the sequel, as usual!^^ BTW: thanks for having read and reviewed my story! Lumos is so deserted... (bad, bad Lumos!) Anyway, I was happy!!! ^____^ Author's Response: uh huh. lucius was hiding some stuff from draco. i liked the harry/sev/albus thing as well. it's like a fantasy for me! lol *can't they all just mesh?* your story is brilliant, and i will be over in a bit to catch up on it as well. i wish more peeps would go to lumos. there are some great stories there! | |||
| Terra of Slytherin | 2005.01.20 - 04:17PM | 11: Chapter Eleven | Signed |
| I am enjoying the story. Just started today and noticed you are on chapter 23. But I mainly wanted to thank you for fixing MY writers block by giving me another name for a winged horse other than a Pegasus. Aethonon. I knew I read it somewhere, but couldn't think of where and it was on the HP Lexicon. My crazy fanfic is never going to be done either. 25+ chapters and not close to being done or in the middle yet. Yipes, sorry to go off like that, I am enjoying the story though.
~Terra Author's Response: thanks very much! i update each day usually, once or twice depending on if i'm allowed.. lol I'm gonna go in search of your story. i love long ones! The HP Lexicon has been a big help to me, i say! I've recently bought her Fantastic Beasts... and Quidditch through... I can't wait to read through them. Will likely inspire more stuff! lol... cheers! | |||
| lynn_k_fletcher | 2005.01.20 - 07:33AM | 23: Chapter Twenty Three | Signed |
| I have to say that I really like the way you portray Hooch. No one really uses her much in stories but I like that you've shown her softer side. She used to have a lover too. I really like the idea of Draco under the Imperius spell. And having the kiss Hermione was so funny. I am still really enjoying this story. Keep it up! Author's Response: Thanks! Yeah, I figured I'd show that Hooch has feelings too. And, Draco *teehee* poor bloke. he'll be okay though. more up in a bit | |||
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