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Reviews for The Succubus

Mouse2005.01.15 - 03:34AM18: Chapter EighteenSigned
wonderful as always, can't wait for them to get back home ^_^ heh heh!

Author's Response: lol! long time no talk! thanks!

Arwen9992005.01.15 - 03:20AM17: Chapter SeventeenSigned
As always, interesting chapter! How will Severus deal with himself? Damn, I have to know! Back in a few minutes for a new review! ^^ Can't wait!

Author's Response: lol! thanks! someone said he forgives it all too quickly but i think will do.. for now

Betz2005.01.15 - 03:02AM18: Chapter EighteenSigned
I really liked the anology of Severus' life in seasons. Very touching. And it's nice to see Severus pal around with his colleages a bit. Nice to know he doens't always have a broom stuck up his arse at times.

Author's Response: thanks! i was hoping that wasnt too corny lol or sappy or what have you. but i hoped it would be like a wake up call. some times i look at something like he did and then i start thinking all kinds of other things hehe. uh huh. i like him to have fun with his mates as well

Darque Queen72005.01.15 - 02:36AM18: Chapter EighteenSigned
I love Hooch as well. Man! The mouth that woman has! She's an absolute riot! I wouldn't eant to be caught in an elevator with her though......I think I'd have to kill her then....lol! Can't wait for the next chapter! D.

Author's Response: lol! thanks!

mirror2005.01.15 - 02:29AM18: Chapter EighteenSigned
everything will be okay...right?

Author's Response: lol yes

compulsivelyObsessive2005.01.15 - 02:02AM18: Chapter EighteenSigned
Ooooh! Preggers Hermione! I love it when she's pregnant in stories, it's just so sweet and oddly sexy actually. I worry about me. I love Hooch too, hopefully Hermione will come around after things get a tad more normal. I think that I have a lot of Hooch's tendencies, which is both worrisome and delightful. I feel like you've added an adult me to the story, quite egotistical of me to think that way but I'm deluded and happily so. In fact this whole story is about me, fuck the story the whole website is about me! No, no, the entire web is about me!!! Mwahahahaha!!! Oh, ummm...I just spilled something on my computer, that's all. I had nothing to do with all of that previous stuff. Evidently my computer has developed a God complex and believe you me, laptop and I are going to sit down and have a long discussion about this latent arrogance. Perhaps lappy should seek counseling or professional psychological help. Can Straterra be inserted into the CD drive? Oh, yeah umm...back to the story. I like the direction that things are moving in but I confess to feeling a tad cheated that Snapers didn't hold out on forgiving himself for a longer period of time. Forgiving yourself is so much harder than forgiving anybody else and I am not sure if it's even truly possible to forgive yourself for the kind of things that Severus holds himself responsible for. Other than that, good shit as per usual. How many more chapters left? Are we following the pair into pregnancy? *crosses fingers, toes, eyes, various locks of hair, the arms of person sitting next to her, the power cables outside of her house, the vcr and tv cables, the arms of every coat and shirt in the house, attempts to train her dog to cross his eyes, hangs pretzels about the house as an offering to the Gods of crossing things over other things. Are you sensing my subtle plea? Well, I'm not in Slytherin so I bet that that's the case. Not a Gryffindor either, I'm actually a Ravenclaw which doesn't exactly explain my endearing lunacy. Something to ponder, I suppose. Okay, I need some fukcign slepe, hasta luego senorita s.w.! -The Reviewer from the Black Lagoon

Author's Response: giggling!! yes, he prob could have gone longer before forgiving himself. i think he's just tired of his life...then her words mixed with albus' and (merlin forbid) harry's helped him along the way to an epiphany. he'll still have 'thoughts' on it, but i think he doesnt want to lose her more. i love preggie mione as well! so...perhaps we shall go that way lol

compulsivelyObsessive2005.01.15 - 01:17AM17: Chapter SeventeenSigned
Oh, sadness. He still can't say what he feels. He's so scared of himself and of what he feels, the saddest part is that I have friends like that. Everyone probably does. *sigh* Unfortunately there's no cure for that. On to the next chapter! -cO

Author's Response: uh huh. i know someone that writes the best love letters possible...cant say a dang thing though! lol

Horserider2005.01.15 - 01:08AM18: Chapter EighteenSigned
Eeeep! Not with Hooch! Now I'm with Hermione, wanting to scratch her eyes out! Meow meow meow! *Okay, so maybe I'm not the scratching type, but I'm hissing at her anyway.* ~HR

Author's Response: lol!! you know those past fling thingies... one night of too many firewhiskys lolol... but noooo definitely no feelings there for the woman. lol

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