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| greeneyeschip | 2006.06.11 - 02:43AM | 9: Chapter Nine | Signed |
| Lol - I loved the interaction between Snape and Ron particularly - "You went to visit the great bat, didn’t you?” hehe... Ok, back to the topic. Yeah, I'm still liking it although, Snape is becoming quite nice, unlike his normal self..well, I might as well get used to while I can! The interactions between the staff/Weasley and the couple was pretty awkward, but I guess it's realistic when you find out someone you know, has a 'partner'. Great work Author's Response: Thanks! | |||
| greeneyeschip | 2006.06.11 - 02:03AM | 5: Chapter Five | Signed |
| Hahahaha, I just had to laugh. Hehehehe...poor Draco...I can't believe Snape is sooo possessive - I have to admit, the publicity act front of the students is quite plausible and you've done a nice job with it, particularly everyone is teasing or gawking at the couple. This chapter is a nice bit of comic relief. haha Author's Response: Thank you very much! :) I try to add in some "fun" sometimes. | |||
| greeneyeschip | 2006.06.11 - 01:47AM | 4: Chapter Four | Signed |
| Man..this story is flowing quite nicely. I still love how you portray the characters - especially Snape & Ron. I can't believe what Ron said to Hermione and reading Snape yelling at him gave me some sort of satisification as he deserved that! Hmm...he is starting to feel a bit jealous & possessive of Hermione, isn't he? Also, I'm glad that Harry is being reasonable and takes care of Hermione, in a sisterly way - now that is a great friendship. Everything really connects and flows. How do you do it - make it so intense? *sigh* Great work so far! :) Author's Response: I always like that kind of Harry/Hermione feel to the story. Thank you! | |||
| greeneyeschip | 2006.06.11 - 01:14AM | 1: Chapter One | Signed |
| Wow, a great chapter and fantastic start of the story. I shouldn't have started reading this story at the moment as it is so engrossing (as I have to do some studying soon...eek). The plot is really unique - I haven't come across reading this kind of plot of Succubus...whoo, I'm excited to read the upcoming chapters :) Oh, also I really liked how you kept the characters personalities realistic as JKR's in her HP series - especially when Snape was thinking of who could be the potential Succubus and dismisses them. Very Snape like. I'll review some more later on when I read some more chapters (Hope you don't mind as I prefer to review throughout - though not every chapter - otherwise I might forget the important bits of the story if I reviewed at the end)
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading and for all the re views. I'm sorry it took so long for me to answer. :) | |||
| Alyssa_Snape | 2006.06.08 - 10:16PM | 15: Chapter Fifteen | Signed |
| If I were Severus, I would be furious. For my own good or not, I HATE being forced into doing anything. Part of me hopes he's pissed when he wakes up...and part of me just wants him and Hermione to make up. But mostly, I hope he's pissed. I can't help it...and now, enough time reviewing and more time reading... Author's Response: Thanks for reading! :) I know exactly what you mean. | |||
| Kristal River | 2006.06.04 - 07:12PM | 51: Chapter Fifty One (Epilogue) | Signed |
| Wonderful story. This has everything I like, humour, drama, romance, angst, and all with plot. I look forward to reading more from you. Author's Response: Thanks so much, I'm happy you liked it! ;) | |||
| Girl_interrupted | 2006.06.02 - 10:37AM | 1: Chapter One | Signed |
| aww poor snape he didn't sound to happy about that realiation.....love the whole succubus idea good start :-) Author's Response: thanks! | |||
| Firewall | 2006.06.01 - 10:08PM | 5: Chapter Five | Signed |
| I must admit I am thoroughly enjoying this story. I'm stretching it out when I read so I can enjoy it for a longer period of time. :^) Author's Response: Thanks for reading. I am the same way when I sit down for a long read. I just like it to last! | |||
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