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GinnyW2005.03.15 - 10:58PM42: Chapter Forty TwoSigned
YAY! Sunshine! Very nice! I really like this part: "..drive himself mad eventually, likely taking his own life. When that happened, he would become a dream stalker..." That makes sense to me! YAY! ;-) Also like the explanation of the Wizard of the Snake. Oh and poor Hermione's reaction to childbirth! LOL!

Author's Response: aahahah!!! I was trying to make the succubus talk about it the right way lol!! damn. I need to go back and credit you for helping me with the Wizard of the Snakes thingies. lol about what hermione thought huh? i did the same thing when i saw pictures hehe

mamabecca2005.03.14 - 06:00PM41: Chapter Forty OneSigned
first time reviewing your story. i love it. there it is and i hope you like it! update again soon.

Author's Response: Well thanks very much! I'm glad to hear it. more up soon.

illnevertell2005.03.14 - 12:25PM25: Chapter Twenty FiveSigned
BEAVER LEVER ?????? OMG!!! ROFLMFAO!!! I have to say that was a bit of a distraction for me!!! I have NEVER heard that one before and I was married to a sailor for 14 years!!!! I LOVE IT!!!! I think I have found a new favorite nick name for that part of the male anatomy!!! Thanks!! That just made my day! Although, I have to admit I thought I had heard ( and used ) them all what a shock to find out I hadn't. (I tend to have a range of vocabulary that would make a Jarvey blush.) Now, back to this chapter. * Kudos* Jaimie

Author's Response: ahahahaha! i thought that was funny as well. my beta said wtf? lol i shrugged and said, "I wanted Lucius to slip into some naughty slang b/c he hates that raggedy umbridge...and fudge!" hahahah.. glad you liked it! teehee

illnevertell2005.03.14 - 11:26AM23: Chapter Twenty ThreeSigned
The relationship developing between Harry and Severus is WONDERFUL!!! I have always secretly wished that someone could pull this off in a realistic way and you have done a superb job!! I believe this entire change in his demeanor is very plausible. He did not turn into a big mush the instant he slept with Hermione as he does in so many stories. It has happened very gradually and he still fights with his emotions like most people would in his place. I have to say that this is one of the best fis I have had the pleasure of reading in a very long time. * Kudos* Jaimie

Author's Response: Yay! Thanks so much. I always hope to portray him as a 'normal' guy with conflicting feelings..only a bit more since he is Severus. hehe! The next chapter is nearly complete. My beta is coming home tonight. I've just posted a summary for it though over at Potter Place. Have a look if you'd like! cheers

HarryPotterSNL2005.03.13 - 08:13PM41: Chapter Forty OneSigned
you always stop at the good parts! update soon! i wanna know what's going on with harry

Author's Response: lol.. sorry bout that! hehe... more up tuesday or wednesday.. depnds on mah beta and the queue.

medicdaddy2005.03.13 - 04:55PM41: Chapter Forty OneSigned
As always this is great. I do say that Hermine has learned a very hard lesson in being a prospective parent and a wife. Got to think of the others also. Just cant stop thinking about what Harry did to Bella. Well i will sit on my cliff and hold on until you update. I think Harry promised to have sex with her but wouldnt be serprised if her used dark magic on her to make her think that they were having sex in the shower. Or did he promis her someone else. Well i will just wait. Bill

Author's Response: yay! welcome back. right about hermione. she needs to think on the little one. the bit about harry and bella is up first. you are very close! more up soon. Cheers!

Satoni2005.03.13 - 12:25PM41: Chapter Forty OneSigned
sure... My guess? krum and the succubus :p LOL please go on... you are my past, my present and my future....You are...Awesome !!!!! this story makes my life worth living...it's my excape from reality, from Life.... I hope that one day, My story will get as good as yours.... Thanks !!!

Author's Response: ahahahaha!!! krum and succubus teehee... too funny. i'm so glad that you like the story. the next bit will be up tuesday or wednesday. i will have some snippets up though over at potter place

Miari2005.03.13 - 03:09AM41: Chapter Forty OneSigned
Just curious, but is there gay marriage in the Wizarding world? hmmm };^>

Author's Response: i dunno. i wonder.. prob not lol more up tuesday i hope!

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