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| lovingsnape | 2006.05.06 - 01:32AM | 51: Chapter Fifty One (Epilogue) | Signed |
| wow this story was amazing!!! just when I thought it was over I would get hit with another fabulous round of intrigue, suspense and love :) I laughed and cried and prayed Harry would kill Bella
I adore this story and you have done an amazing job~!~ Author's Response: Thanks for reading! Bella has a good part in the sequel. I think we'll all be surprised. :) | |||
| EternallyTwisted | 2006.05.05 - 06:44PM | 51: Chapter Fifty One (Epilogue) | Signed |
| Wickedly original...a long road but definitely intriguing! Very well written. I do believe you were attempting to make people cry and thus you managed to with me *tsk tsk* It will def be interesting so wee what else you have in store...Keep up the fabulous job! *hands you gold stars* Author's Response: Thanks for reading. I'm so twisty, huh? LOL Yeah, you caught me. I was trying to muck with emotions. Teehee. Cheers | |||
| SwissMiss | 2006.04.30 - 03:00PM | 35: Chapter Thirty Five | Signed |
| I was honestly confused about who the other victim is that the Incubus/Succubus is thinking of. The way you wrote it, it sounds like it must be Severus, (the wizard bound to the witch before him), but then it is clear that it isn't Severus, that it is another wizard. But the whole thing is confusing. I'm sure you will clear it up later.
I think Severus's jealousy act would get tiresome pretty quickly.
Yeah, wow on Harry! That is a seriously messed-up kid. Freak time. Love it. Author's Response: It will clear up for you soon enough. That's where the rest of the story ties in and makes the complete circle. She's bound to Snape, who "defeated" the Succubus form, but there is another who pines for Hermione. The Incubus will be trying from that angle if nothing else. Maybe. I don't mind if my hubby is jealous. It's sort of a turn on (I'm so weird, huh?) and lets me know he cares. Well, that's how I see it anyway, but then again, I've always been a really jealous girl when it comes to my significant other. *bats eyelashes* | |||
| SwissMiss | 2006.04.30 - 02:49PM | 34: Chapter Thirty Four | Signed |
| That was a beautiful scene between Severus and Hermione, and somehow even more poignant switching right to Molly bending over her son's coffin.
Harry and Ginny: Love you. Yeah.
I think what's happening to Luna is absolutely horrible.
Aw... Narcissa wuves Lucius. *sigh*
Erm... Severus smiling goofily? Just can't wrap my head around that image.
No, I don't like Sydney as Severus's middle name. I understand about the Rickman connection, but it just doesn't fit.
This would have almost been a good place to end the story. That was a perfect ending scene. But I see there's more. A lot more! (Hope you fix Luna up and get Bella put away for good.) Author's Response: Yeah, bit of a switch I pulled. Contrasting. Or an attempt. LOL. Uhhuh. See that, do you? Poor Luna will eventually be all right. I feel Sydney is a cute little name. There's a neighborgirl here with that name. She's a doll. I wanted an "S" middle name and snatched that one. I didn't expect anyone would like it, but I was sort of tired of all the same overused ones at that time. I can so see him smiling goofily. *sighs in contentment* But then it's my vision--likely why. Muahahaa... Poor thing. You must be so bored, always talking about the the length. It won't end until after the littler one is born, and then, it's a set up for part two. *Gasp--it could have been longer?* Indeed. All of this build up is for a reason, though I've not written the next story yet. | |||
| SwissMiss | 2006.04.30 - 02:27PM | 33: Chapter Thirty Three | Signed |
| Ah, OK. Now I see why Draco had to leave the dungeon. You were thinking ahead, weren't you? :-)
I knew that potion that Pomfrey gave her would make her get pregnant! Just hope it's not from the Incubus. Once again, Severus will just have to get there first. Go, Sev!
You are going to make Luna better, right? Right?
That was a neat trick with Stebbins. I found the "In memory of Cedric" tattoo a little maudlin, though.
*GAAACK* Something lemony.... Lemon drop? Too funny! And they both took one! Too cool!
Swooning over Severus' declarations of love for Hermione. Although I want to say that was Out of Character, I don't feel deep down that it was. So well done on that count. Author's Response: Uhhuh. Hehe! Poor Draco! Ah, I don't see any reason why "this" Snape shouldn't say that he loves her now. Luna will be better. hahaha Stebbins. I got the idea for Cedric's tattoo from something personal. Some of us do do that sort of thing, though it may be seen as maudlin by some. I'd like to think of it as honoring a memory. | |||
| SwissMiss | 2006.04.27 - 12:09PM | 32: Chapter Thirty Two | Signed |
| The initial scenes with the Weasleys and Steward and Hooch seemed slow and out-of-place in the midst of all the action.
The part with Lord Potter was well-done; I could feel Harry's discomfort yet pride with what he was capable of. I think that's an important struggle for him to work through.
Kind of weird that Draco had to use the toilet in the middle of things. Assuming there'll be a reason coming up in the next chapter.
Also a confusing dream with the Incubus...but again, assuming explanations are forthcoming.
(And yes, I noticed the point about Poppy giving Hermione a potion that interferes with the working of other medications. This will figure as part of the plot later, yes?) Author's Response: Well, there has to be some balance. It can't all be action all the time. Teehee. In truth, I was trying to build reader anticipation. There's always a method to my madness. :) | |||
| SwissMiss | 2006.04.27 - 11:55AM | 31: Chapter Thirty One | Signed |
| That first scene was very disturbing. Glad Harry got there in time.
Awesome Harry as Dark Lord. Did I say I wouldn't like Dark!Harry? I was wrong.
See? See? I said the good side was just hanging around twiddling their thumbs when they should have been taking action!
Author's Response: I really like the Dark Harry bits. I had the most fun with that. | |||
| SwissMiss | 2006.04.26 - 03:20PM | 30: Chapter Thirty | Signed |
| *snicker* I liked Lucius barging in on Severus and Hermione. Also Severus' response: blind and Obliviate, indeed!
That was a nice trick to make us think Steward was a bad guy, but have him actually be a good guy.
Lovely scene between Hermione and Severus. You know which one I mean.
I don't know why, but it seems like the bad side is planning and plotting, and the good side is just kind of hanging around having sex and breakfast. Action, not reaction, is what they need. Good chapter, though. Author's Response: Poor jolly Steward. Teehee. Yes, unfortunately the good side doesnt really have much to go on to make counter-attack plans. | |||
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