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dreamlover2005.01.09 - 10:48AM7: Chapter SevenSigned
forgot to say props for adding sevvy's bday in there! you are probably the first to put that in a fic! :)

Author's Response: wooohoooo!!! it came up in the email as the chapters were pending. I was like hmmm... then I snuck in to change a few things hehe

dreamlover2005.01.09 - 10:46AM7: Chapter SevenSigned
You brat! Bad author! Shame shame! *fans self* I'm so glad they are coming to terms with this situation, and FINALLY doing something about it! Now get chappie 8 up will you???!!!!

Author's Response: the brat bows in shame! lol yes, it is about time that they get it on. I was getting tired of waiting for them to just do it! chap 8 will be pending approval in just a bit. Thanks, doll

dreamlover2005.01.09 - 10:33AM6: Chapter SixSigned
Yea! I'm the first to review chappie six! A wonderful chappie indeed! Poor Hermy and Sev! I wish they'd just shag and get take the pressure off! They must be so randy by now! LOL! I love how we are hearing the characters' thoughts throughout the story. It helps make the transition easier from Professor/Student to Lovers. It's flowing quite beautifully and many of us readers will be so delighted when they finally hook up! All this teasing has us flustered! Mean author! ;)

Author's Response: Right, I especially like when a story has thoughts. It seems natural, and you can kind of feel the dilemma of each. Kind of know how they are feeling about it. You think six has you flustered...wait til 7.. whew, i say

bleu2005.01.09 - 10:20AM7: Chapter SevenSigned
*melts* What a hot, sexy scene... Rife with such electric sexual tension... Made me want to jump in bed with Sev... *blushes* Am practically dangling over the edge of that cliffie, so please don't have me suffering here long! Love your story, your writing, everything! One of the rare occasions that would merit the use of the word 'Fantabulous'! (for obvious reasons). So feel special! Hehe..

Author's Response: Thanks so much. Next one up soon! And, between us, I wanted to jump in there as well. lol

linzsnape2005.01.09 - 10:20AM7: Chapter SevenSigned
you are so evil!!!!!!

Author's Response: cackles evilly. indeed, i am! But, next one is up soon. Then you'll say, "good, sun."

dreamlover2005.01.09 - 10:17AM5: Chapter FiveSigned
I want a nightly nemesis!!! Wuaaaaa!!! Ok, this chappie was a turning point. Wonderfully written. You are easing into the next step gradually, and it's believable. The flow is perfect. I love the Ron in this fic, and the Draco as well! Precious!

Author's Response: I like Draco as well. He's not too sweet, yet he's agreeable.

lisa north2005.01.09 - 09:58AM7: Chapter SevenSigned
Yeah, me and my cliffy, we just have a sort of Love/Hate-relationship...*pats cliffy* I like your fic and I also like your style. The idea for this story is really good, never heard of this legend before. I even had to check which of these spirits was female and which was male *grins* So, now I'm waiting eagerly for next chapters. Btw, how many chapters are still coming? Bye

Author's Response: They are pretty interesting. Makes you wonder about long ago when they first made their appearance! Well, let's see. I am working on 8 now. There are about five more I think. The story is completed, but as I've been doing this, I have been stretching and adding. It was too fast paced before (only five chaps). I felt it needed a little extra life, love, and care. My eplilogue was like ok, this year, such and such...next year, such and such. Now that's expanding some. Hope ya'll don't mind!

ancientgirl2005.01.09 - 09:49AM7: Chapter SevenSigned
OH nooooooo! Evil evil woman! Please update again!!! Great chapter. But I keep telling myself, why don't they just end their torment and just do it! I mean, they both wante each other, and they both realize they would have wound up together, and they have the blessings of everyone else, well almost everyone. So why not?

Author's Response: Hehehe...coming soon. I think Hermione could have been talked into the little deed way sooner, but you know Sev and his 'issues'. He'll not be forced into anything!! LOL...but he's lost control now. 'He will have her.'

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