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tonkatrish2005.03.25 - 03:20PM45: Chapter Forty FiveSigned
okay.... this has really piqued my imagination. I was questioning Ginny's second thoughts of going to the Chamber w/ Harry... I was questioning the feelings Haryy was projecting w/Bella's actions.. and the curious way he was telling Ginny to stay down and not look. I am wondering the purple l8ight may have been a way to extract Bella's escance into the new familiar and the way Harry has named here Bella? Clincher. I am soooo sucked in...in a succubus-sort of way........great job. Keep'em comin'!!!

Author's Response: All will be explained by harry in the next section. I purposely kept things from harry's pov to make readers wonder about it. we will find out everything in the next bit. :)

Selene2005.03.25 - 01:58PM45: Chapter Forty FiveSigned
ok, so has bella become the snake or transferred herself to the snake or has she really died? did harry intend for her to? i, like sev, am paranoid and i will not believe she is gone until i hear it from the all-knowing author. great chapter, hope harry doesn't become too evil...

Author's Response: bella has not died, no. we will find out from harry exactly what happened in the next chapter. harry will be fine though. :)

lovethelab2005.03.25 - 11:10AM45: Chapter Forty FiveSigned
So Nagini ate the other snake and Harry transfigured Bella into a snake. Oh this is going to be so bad if anyone finds out! I can't wait to see what happens at dinner - Viktor and the Snapes. Should be fun - NOT!

Author's Response: harry is such a bad boy, i say. The dinner shall be interesting (it's mostly from Severus' point of view). We find out exactly what harry did in the next chapter

Betz2005.03.25 - 10:22AM45: Chapter Forty FiveSigned
Bella has been transfigured into the new snake (I know it). Nagini ate the new snake that had been transformed to look like a human (that must be it). And for the fact Harry left Ginny alone with Bella?!?!? What a stupid berk! What a first-class idiot! I can't believe he's THAT stupid. What, yes I can believe that. And after what Bella did to Ginny he let her live as a snake? No, no, no, no, no, no, no, this is just plain wrong. KILL BELLA! Albus and Severus should force Harry to give up the information, pull it out of his mind by force or slip him some Veritaserum. You version of Harry is even more impulsive and foolish than OotP Harry at times. Okay, he doesn't need a 2x4 to smack some sense into him, he needs a steel I beam. On Viktor...I can see VViktor and Severus getting into a fight over Hermione. "All right boys, let's whip out the ruler to see whose is bigger." Something must happen though to tip Severus and Hermione off about Viktor's interaction with the succubus. Perhaps failing magic over dinner? Can't wait to see how dinner does between the three.

Author's Response: ahahahaha! You are so right. Harry's pov will be in the next chapter where he explains his motives. Bad Harry, I say, but he'll be fine soon. :) Good thinking about the veritaserum though. hehe.. i may use that bit.

ahahhaahah... I cheering on Snape to be bigger... muahahahaha! I maybe be biased though. teehee They will have a conversation on the succubus over dinner! yes, he has weakened a bit. Hermione will comment on it! Get out of my head! lol more up soon!

angeLicaLLy_me2005.03.25 - 09:56AM45: Chapter Forty FiveSigned
she's not dead, is she? bella slithered out of this one....very interesting chapter...update soon!

Author's Response: you are quite right... slick bella has snaked her way out of death. :)

KarlaMarie2005.03.25 - 08:17AM45: Chapter Forty FiveSigned
not to spoil your story but i have an inkling that bella is slithering around somewhere waiting to return... ps your story is sublime and i must ask, is the succubus based on a real myth or legend... any whos, im obsessed with the word succubus now and its all your fault... loving it

Author's Response: too right you are, doll. The succubus is a true myth. I read about Merlin. Supposedly, he is the offspring of a nun and an incubus. I'm sure if you look it up, you can have a read. I, though, have added all of this extra stuff to it. I think it's a bit fun. :)

Winna2005.03.25 - 08:10AM45: Chapter Forty FiveSigned
Oh, Harry, I think you did a bad thing. I'm guessing that Bella isn't dead, she's the snake. I'm also guessing that Ginny's dizziness is due to Bella's last spell. I wonder if Ginny will be switching bodies with the snake. I also wonder if the chamber itself is affecting Harry. His description of Nagini eating Bella was just so nasty! Oh, I really liked Snape's suspicion of Krum; I thought he was going to channel Ron and start calling him Vicky *grin*. Looking forward to next chapter and more Dark!Harry.

Author's Response: Harry is a bad boy, isn't he? ginny won't have lasting damage, but yes Bella did drain her a bit. The chamber does affect harry. each time he goes there, he sort of changes. I'll touch on that bit soon. Yes, that would be funny to hear him say Vicky...hahahhaah.. I might have to work Ron in somehow. teehee

Kaliedra2005.03.25 - 08:09AM45: Chapter Forty FiveSigned
Great Chapter! Bella and the new snake switched places best I can tell here. Tsk tsk Harry Potter, that will come back to haunt you :-)

Author's Response: lol bad harry, i say! things do have a way to bite ya in the bum

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