Reviews for The Succubus
| HermioneFan21 | 2013.02.23 - 10:38PM | 6: Chapter Six | Signed |
| was that the real hermione and not the Succubus? had the real hermione somehowcome to him in his sleep?? where was the Succubus?? why didnt it visit that night??
“What are you doing here?” he barked. “Shouldn’t you be off with Weasley?”
“I told you I don’t feel that way about Ron. Why don’t you come have a little lie in with me?” Her voice had turned husky, and she appeared to be naked under the duvet. Ha! It was the Succubus trying to get one over on him. He’d see about that.
“Miss Granger, I think you ought to leave straightaway whilst you still can. I’m not above hexing harlots that find their way into my chambers.” He sneered as hatefully as he could, and was quite proud that his insult seemed to hit home.
“Please, sir, I’ve only come to talk. Nothing more,” she pleaded, a flush seeping out over her cheeks.
“Oh, that takes the biscuit, Succubus! Get out! I’d rather sit down for a good hour with noughts and crosses before talking to you. Go on,” he bellowed, patting himself triumphantly as she sprung up from the bed. His internal victory was short lived, however, as he noticed something wasn’t quite right. “What are those clothes you are wearing?” So, she had been dressed then!
“Don’t worry about it, sir, and please, don’t let me keep you from your ruddy game!” Were those tears in her eyes? He’d never know because as he moved forward to have a closer look, she vanished. In fact, to his puzzlement, his entire room began to darken. What the hell?
He blinked when firelight suddenly flooded his vision. “Sherbet lemon?” Albus asked from the side of the bed. Damn! It had been a dream. All of it. Of course, he knew it was a dream, but who was that?
“Of course not!” he hissed. “How long have I been asleep?”
“Quite a while, Severus. I dare say, you finally just had your visit? It’s the only time you’ve moved or spoken since you’ve gone down,” Albus said, fumbling in his pocket for a candy.
“I’m not quite sure what I just had to be honest. I felt as if Hermione was in my dream at first, and then when I came back to my room, I thought it to be the Succubus. However, as I told her to get out, she acted completely opposite to any previous visit,” he said softly as he pulled down his twisted, gray nightshirt. “I think I may have thrown the wrong woman out. She didn’t try to advance on me unless she was about to when you woke me.” |
| HermioneFan21 | 2013.02.23 - 10:10PM | 5: Chapter Five | Signed |
| is the staff (severus) gonna board the train too?? |
| HermioneFan21 | 2013.02.23 - 09:09PM | 4: Chapter Four | Signed |
| “Couldn’t you just...make love to someone else? I mean wouldn’t that help?” Ron questioned.
“I don’t think so. I mean, I would no longer be a virgin, but it’s already coming to me. I don’t know if that would stop it. And, besides, no one interests me that way,” she said softly. “If it was a normal Incubus, maybe that would work, but I don’t see that helping here. Not when it’s him.”
is the only reason the thing after her because she is a virgin? but if that the case then why is it after severus since he obviously isnt a virgin??!!! also is it true that if she was with someone else other than him the thing would go away? |
| HermioneFan21 | 2013.02.23 - 08:56PM | 3: Chapter Three | Signed |
| Severus Snape loathed Hermione Granger. Why did she want to remain at Hogwarts? If she had chosen to go into any other field, this would never have happened to them! Some future attraction, although highly unlikely, would never have occurred!
is that true? because i think some how they would have endeed up together even if she didnt stay at hogwarts as a teacher etc they would still have ended up togeter and this would have happened one way or another and this thing they are going though would still be happeining to them!!! RIGHT?? |
| HermioneFan21 | 2013.02.23 - 08:50PM | 3: Chapter Three | Signed |
| why can they only visit one a night like they do? why when hermione or severus go back to sleep cant they come again or the next night? will it ever be like that as time goes on?? |
| HermioneFan21 | 2013.02.23 - 08:48PM | 3: Chapter Three | Signed |
| Ron took in a sharp breath before moving closer to hug her from behind. “It’s a ruddy fantasy, Mione. You can hardly control those. It’s over.” Ron’s hands were sliding along her sides. “We all have them at times. Don’t be so hard on yourself.”
this is hardly a fantacy and is hardly a dreams what rons hads ever had!! this is no dream!!! |
| HermioneFan21 | 2013.02.23 - 07:32PM | 2: Chapter Two | Signed |
| was it possible that she only tuned into granger that time because he was thinking of her and the sucusspus wasnt her?? like how if you think of someone then you normally dream of them?? |
| HermioneFan21 | 2013.02.23 - 07:12PM | 2: Chapter Two | Signed |
| i thought she had the dreams longer before they fifured out what was happoing to her and from hermione's dream the Incubus didnt seem to be sujucing her (which is what they have to do) in order to get her horny to fuck her!!! why is severus sucubus more succiding than hermione;s Incubus was surely hermione would be warker to it than severus would?? |
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