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CarnalRhapsody182005.03.03 - 09:11PM39: Chapter Thirty NineSigned
Great job on this chapter! I really liked the pace and rhythm of it as well. In fact, the entire story has a wonderfully well-paced plot. I like it, although I do wonder sometimes if you should maybe tweek the title a bit. The entire story seems to have went off on a tangant from the Succubus, although it is still present in some way or another... Then again, it is your story. ^_^ I'll let you decide, lol. Great job, once again! ~CR

Author's Response: yes it did get away for a bit, didnt it? but she's back.. more up on her next chapter... plus a bit about it from hermione and the succubus will be the reaons for the sequel. :) glad you are liking it!!! cheers more up soon

HarryPotterSNL2005.03.03 - 09:06PM39: Chapter Thirty NineSigned
you ask a good question, what did happen to hermione? I do think it has something to do with her pregnancy and maybe all the stress she is under. Or maybe the succubus, had something to do with it because she said that should would get hermione through her children. And I can understand how herparents reacted, but I would like for them to get over the shock and be all nice with hermione and seveus.

Author's Response: just stress mixed with preggie stuff... her parents were a bit harsh for my taste (letting her go off like that). they'l come around eventually

Lady_Autumn2005.03.03 - 07:26PM2: Chapter TwoSigned
This is another amazing story. Do you write anything bad? I can't believe it's almost 40 chapters long! Amazing! I can't wait for you to update because I think I'm more hooked on this story than I was on Libertine. Keep up the good work. Again... congrats!!!!!

Author's Response: lol! well thank you so much! this is mah bit of drama. i just love to write. it always feels good to know that people enjoy it. i thought that i would be done at chapter 40, but it's a bit longer than that. sigh.. hehe.. I love it though. i hate to see it end. Cheers!

lil_jouett2005.03.03 - 06:44PM39: Chapter Thirty NineSigned
YES! YES! Have I told you that I just LOVE you??? I get drama, sweetness, teaching, AND my name ALL in ONE chapter! What more could a girl ask for? OH! And i'm in Gryffindor! THis chapter was really awsome, but i'm late for work so i've got to get outta here. You're truly made my day a hell of a lot better, and now everyone at work is going to be wondering why i'm smiling so big! You're my favorite! Luv~ Lil Jouett!

Author's Response: awwww!! thanks, doll. I thought that would be a bit of a treat for you! glad you liked it! more up as soon as i can. keep on smiling!

Betz2005.03.03 - 06:29PM39: Chapter Thirty NineSigned
Oh, one more thing. So are Ron and Draco going to shag?

Author's Response: I'm not sure about that. I think by the way the story will end, it will be up to the reader's imagination. I'm wicked enough to want them to though.. hehe

Betz2005.03.03 - 06:28PM39: Chapter Thirty NineSigned
(Whimper) I hope the baby is all right. Please, not a miscarriage. Hopefully it's just exhaustion, hormones and low blood sugar. You did a good description of what it's like to pass out, as I have done it enough times myself (when I'm sick, that it). Well, I think Hermione's parent's reaction is normal. Hell, if my daughter knew someone romantically for a short while then married in a hurried fashion without telling me, I'd be more than pissed. Add on top of that Muggle's views on thier age difference and her sudden pregance at 18 and "Houston...we have a problem." I think their reaction was tame compared to what I think other parent's would do or say. Great chapter.

Author's Response: baby will be okay. i've never passed out! i just tried to imagine what it would feel like. so glad i was able to do it right! woohooo. Her parents do have those views, but eventually they will come around. i think seeing the pair interact the way they did will have something to do with it..and a grandchild on the way! thanks!

SeverusGal2005.03.03 - 05:55PM39: Chapter Thirty NineSigned
OMG! You have to update! I'm on the edge of my seat!!!! Brilliant chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm working on the next one now! cheers!

Selene2005.03.03 - 05:01PM39: Chapter Thirty NineSigned
i'm so glad i thought to check the story, i'd've missed this chappy if i hadn't! great as always. congrats on the nearly 1000 reviews, you deserve it. what happened to mione? emotion and stress? poor dear...that photo the guy took outside the restaurant, going to be a big deal?

Author's Response: it didnt stay on the main page long this time, did it? most peeps might think it hasn't been updated as well. hehehe. thanks so much!! hermione simply fainted, poor doll. The photo won't amount to much except a front page story, again... more up soon. cheers!

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