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compulsivelyObsessive2005.03.28 - 03:43PM46: Chapter Forty SixSigned
Great new chapter. Poor Victor! He only wants to be with Hermione, how can Snape blame him for that? Stupid question, he can blame anything on anybody, he just needs a thing and a body. Glad you told us what happened to Bella, it was plaguing me. However, I can't shake the feeling that before this story is over, she's going to be dead. As for school, which you so kindly asked about, it's going alright. Classes are good, if not a bit too tame and the homework load is manageable, my planning skills are what need a serious revision. Back to the story: I'm so excited that you plan on doing a sequel and that we get to see birth!Hermione, that's always fun. More Ron and Draco soon??? Those two would have such lovely children, if they could have children. The stunning Malfoy features and the trademark Weasley blue eyes and brilliantly red hair. Somebody needs to draw this kid, he'd be incredibly striking. Though I do believe both sides of the family would need to be revived after receiving news that their children are an item. Not a fan of male pregnancy though, I haven't read much of it but the plausibility is near to zero. Dragons, potions, succubi, a boy that talks to snakes, who are we HP fans, to criticize plausibility? -cO

Author's Response: I don't blame Snape much (I'm a jealous type girl as well. hehe). Bella will be fine for now. I wanted everyone to see the birth of their little one. :) I like that as well. Yes, a Weasley / Malfoy child would be adorable. I've always thought of one (Ginny/ Draco though). lol... no male pregnancy here.

I'm glad that school is going well so far. I'm the same way. I need to get my planning together. LOL... i'm always just here, there, wherever... cheers! more up soon.

Maggie2005.03.28 - 12:42PM46: Chapter Forty SixSigned
Great!

Author's Response: thanks so much!

Fictionlover_322005.03.28 - 12:00PM46: Chapter Forty SixSigned
Aha! I knew Bella was not completely dead! I have to give Harry credit for thinking up that brilliant plan. I could've not done it better myself! I'm so glad Bella is out of the picture(so to speak) I rather have her as a familiar than a human being, I guess Harry felt the same way. I'm sure Snape'll approve of Harry's plan. As for Krum, he's crazy if he thinks he can win over Hemione's sympathy. He doesn't have a clue that Hermione loves Snape and him only, and Snape needs to get over the fact that Hermione would never wantt to daydream about other guys! And Hermione, I don't think she's has a clue that Krum is fliirting with her! Hello? Even Snape can tell! I think he's cute when he's being all possessive and all that. A lot of my questions were answered in this chapter, thank goodness, because I was dying of curiosity! As for taking us through Mione's birth, that's more than accpetable! Also am ecstatic that you're planning a sequel. Hope you're feeling well! Update soon! Cheers!

Author's Response: Yay! I'm glad that things are wrapping up. And, you know, I feel so relieved that most agree that Harry made a good decision. Whew... lol... Krum is a berk, isn't he? Hermione is clueless. lol... Severus is just adorable as jealous!Severus. more up soon! hehe thanks, doll cheers!

Satoni2005.03.28 - 08:49AM46: Chapter Forty SixSigned
hey hey, I love it. krum must die, don't like his vision on how things will turn out when he impregnates the sucubbus. Krum must die ! grrr as for harry's plan: brilliant. but Bella needs to be dangerous still. She must be killed. Jealous sevvie was great, I wud've liked to see Krum bitn more dunk though....BUT You did a damn good job ! Please update soon !

Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you liked Harry's plan. More up soon. Bella will behave for now.

Armor2005.03.28 - 07:09AM46: Chapter Forty SixSigned
I think Krum is a fool... How could he believe a succubus ? Well, I want to know what he and his succubus have in store for Snape.

Author's Response: Krum is being an idiot. Alas, he's blinding by a good feeling. I'm thinking he will eventually make a play for hermione and try to off snape

Winna2005.03.28 - 07:09AM46: Chapter Forty SixSigned
This chapter should be subtitled Clueless. Clueless!Hermione needs to realize when a man is hitting on her. Clueless!Severus needs to realize Hermione isn't even daydreaming about other men. Clueless!Viktor needs to realize the Succubus is slowly consuming him. Clueless!Harry needs to remember that Bella is dangerous in any form. Ah, well, if they weren't clueless, there wouldn't be such a great story to read. Thanks for sharing!

Author's Response: ahahahahaha! Clueless!Southern as well. You are so right! Bella will behave though. Promise.. hehe more up soon. :)

LariLee2005.03.28 - 03:24AM46: Chapter Forty SixSigned
A nice chapter! I liked finding out that I was correct about Bella (and I hope Harry does not regret it) and I feel rather sorry for Victor. But he needs to get over Hermione and find a woman who's not a succubus. :-)
~Lisa

Author's Response: you had it, doll! lol No, he won't regret it (not now anyway) lol Viktor does need his own 'real' woman, doesn't he?

Nightbird2005.03.28 - 02:56AM46: Chapter Forty SixSigned
ahh... Harry's reasoning makes more sense now. I'm glad that Dumbledore knows what happened. and Krum... hmmm.... *suspicious* :)

Author's Response: Yep, it's always good when Dumbledore approves.. hehe.. Krum= idiot. hehe more up soon

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