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| Fictionlover_32 | 2005.03.12 - 07:27PM | 41: Chapter Forty One | Signed |
| Wonderful as always! You did an excellent job with Ron and Draco. Now they talked, they'll continue being friends without being awkward or confused. Draco took Ron's reactions very well I think, and Ron handled things smoothly. But Hermione could've handled things better. What was she thinking being with Harry and Bella in her condition? Not to mention the lie she had to spew to Snape. I know that she lied because he wouldn't have let her get away with it, but it was a foolish thing for her to do. Snape had every right to be angry with her and her friends, especially Draco. Since he was with her, he should've not let Mione be in that room in the first place. I can see that Snape is disappointed in them all, and I don't blame him. As for Harry, I'm kind of nervous with his him because he's getting kind of dark with every chapter. I know he'll never fall into the Dark Arts, but with Voldemort's memories, he has a difficult time controlling himself sometimes, and I'm afraid that someday, he might lose control himself compelety. I hope Harry finishes with Bella soon, because he seems to be getting worse whenever Bella is around. Update soon! Cheers!
P.S. I'm glad you're getting better. Don't overwork yourself though. We like it when you update frequently, but your health is most important. Take care! Author's Response: thanks so much. i admit i was worried if d/r came through ok. some peeps dont like them being too close. hermione was not thinking clearly. anything could have happened. I like that Severus was angry with them all. They deserved it. He's still a bit miffed about it in the next chapter. Trust and worry and all that... The bit about Harry will be up first and there will be a bit more of dark harry before it clears up. Thanks for the warm wishes! I do feel better, so things should be back to normal soon. Cheers! | |||
| Questa_Witch | 2005.03.12 - 02:00PM | 41: Chapter Forty One | Signed |
| wonderful as always, I can't wait to read what happens next.
~Kim Author's Response: thanks, doll! probably won't be up until tuesday or so. cheers! | |||
| Mishka | 2005.03.12 - 01:25PM | 41: Chapter Forty One | Signed |
| Excellent chapter! I thought you handled the Draco/Ron interplay very excellently! Looking forward to more soon!
Meredith Author's Response: hehe.. thanks, doll!! psst.. i'm having a read again on that story we talked about last night. hahahahaha!!!! cheers! | |||
| lil_jouett | 2005.03.12 - 11:14AM | 41: Chapter Forty One | Signed |
| Oh, enjoy I did. Lol, i only just read the last little bit of this chapter just now, b/c i tried to read it last night when i got into town and i practically fell asleep reading, so i just had to go to sleep! But first thing after my shower (and drying off, yada yada) I got my "happy ass" (as I say in real life over here, it's a long story) on the computer to finish. This story is truly wonderful, and even tho i've never beta'd before, i'd love to just run thru it if you tell me what to do and what to look for until Nay gets back, where she can really go thru and fix it. Now, to me telling you what I love: There's this one line I read last night, let me go find it... Ah, here it is: ' “I love you. I never thought I would have anyone, and you came into my life and wrecked things.” His lips curved upward. “Thank you.” ' Now don't ask me what it was about that line, I just had to stop and re-read that part. It was just... a really good line! Hehe, the shower scene was great, lemons lemons... yum. Lemonade! Oh I just though of that... lol, i'm not making sence... The over-protectiveness and smugness that you showed on Severus was all cute, sexy, and frustrating at times! Like the way he just didn't trust Harry was frustrating but it made sence. All-in-all this was a great chapter, now i've talked for way too long, so i'm gonna go... lol, Luv ya (it's getting to be WAY too much!)~ Lil Jouett
Author's Response: ah!! glad you liked the chappie. I'll send you an email to see if you are busy when i get it together. I hoped Severus wouldnt appear too sappy when he said that! I'm glad you liked it! hehe And, nothing like a little lemonade. I try to portray him as being insecure at times..hehe.. and it appears that its showing! woohoo... i'm working on it a bit right now. so maybe this evening i might have something. | |||
| 12635397 | 2005.03.12 - 04:37AM | 41: Chapter Forty One | Signed |
| Thats so nice... I love the interplay between Severus and Hermione. I cant wait to find out what is going on with Harry!!
Author's Response: Thanks! I was hoping i could portray Sev having diff emotions about the baby and then about Harry. The bit on Harry will be up first in the next chapter. | |||
| Betz | 2005.03.12 - 03:22AM | 41: Chapter Forty One | Signed |
| Sweet, sweet lemony goodness. How sweet it is. So, it wasn't entirely clear if Harry was becoming Pottermort or just lost in projected memories again. Perhaps next chapter we'll learn morea bout Harry's dark side affecting him. So very late, so very tired. WOuld review more, but too tired to say anything other than, great chatper. Author's Response: Next chapter will have a good bit about Harry up first. Sev/Albus/Harry have a talk about what happened, and Hermione finds out some stuff about the Succubus' fear. :) | |||
| sully2 | 2005.03.12 - 12:42AM | 41: Chapter Forty One | Signed |
| Thank you for the update. I can't wait to see what happens next. I love the shower scene. I now have a new recipe for lemonade - lemons, some sweet words, and just add water, preferably from a shower. As for a guess on happy nuptials, I guess Albus and Minerva (I think Harry has too much going on and so does Luna)? Points to Gryffindor. Author's Response: not a problem! hehe sigh...good ol' lemonade. I would love some myself. It isn't AD/MM, but I will touch upon that when the other couple announces their plans. i'll have more up as soon as I can. :) | |||
| droxy | 2005.03.11 - 10:59PM | 41: Chapter Forty One | Signed |
| I hope the nuptials are not Ron/Draco! Like the snakes. Author's Response: hahaha.. noooo Definitely not. more up on the Snakes *wink* | |||
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