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Guinnevere2005.10.25 - 11:33PM28: Chapter Twenty EightSigned
Oh, dear. I'm always prey to anxiety about the suspenseful parts, because sometimes writers think they need to be bold in order to be artistically valid, and they take it too far, resulting in ick. This next chapter holds the potential for ick, but I'm hoping it will turn out okay. My fingers are crossed.

Author's Response: Big smiles. I'm a little bold, but not terribly so. You'll be fine! :)

Guinnevere2005.10.25 - 12:02AM23: Chapter Twenty ThreeSigned
This is getting into an area that I've been wanting to see develop. I think that Severus and Harry should be friends, even surrogate family. It just feels so right, the way you've written it. Excellent job.

Author's Response: Even after reading HBP, I would still love to see Harry and Snape reach an accord of sorts. Thank you!

Guinnevere2005.10.24 - 06:33PM20: Chapter TwentySigned
Most married (or in-a-committed-relationship) women can understand Hermione's motivation here. She loves him, and wants to make him happy. And, after all, half a lemon is better than none! Heh! Nice lemon-ade!

Author's Response: yes indeed, my dear!

Guinnevere2005.10.24 - 04:41PM19: Chapter NineteenSigned
Ooh, ooh! Please send your video to my e-mail address! It's guinn_berger@yahoo.com. I'm loving this story, by the way.

Author's Response: I'm going to send it to you now. I think though that it's too big for a yahoo email address, so if it doesn't come. I've tried. :)

Guinnevere2005.10.24 - 12:05PM13: Chapter ThirteenSigned
I think we've all done some pretty disgusting things in our dreams, things that have us cringeing in mortification at the memory afterward. The Id comes out in dreams, and Severus' horrified reaction to his unrefined darker impulses is exactly right. Good job.

Author's Response: Thank you. I was worried people would say, "Oh, that's too harsh." But, as you said, hell, we all have funky dreams at times that make us think we've gone mad when we wake.

Brisinggammen2005.10.24 - 03:35AM10: Chapter TenSigned
I violently disagree with whoever said Severus should not be a capricorn. He is very very capricorn to me: Ambitious, an authority, someone who likes to go on his own, structured, in controll. As I have my decenden in capricorn I am quite attracted to men with these qualities - in fact that was one of the first things I thought about when I met the Severus Snape of fanfiction. Funny that JKR made him a capricorn. Just goes to show she knows her characters. PS. I love the story - Brisinggammen

Author's Response: Thanks! I looked up some stuff about capricorns after that, and I was like, "This is Snape!!" I figured she must have looked up some things as well! Hehe! Thank you. I was surprised that someone said that in the first place, but ah, well, eh?

Guinnevere2005.10.24 - 12:27AM8: Chapter EightSigned
I think these were very sweet lemons. I liked reading this chapter, a lot. Good writing, girlfriend!

Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you enjoyed. I hope it made up for that cheesy Snape line in the other chapter. lol the *rape* one

Guinnevere2005.10.23 - 07:58PM2: Chapter TwoSigned
...some women that he’d raped...

Are we talking about Severus here? Ewwwww! I don't like that idea, boss! He's supposed to be an honorable man, and an honorable man simply doesn't do that.

Author's Response: Indeed. They don't kill people either. I'd like to think what he did in the past is in the past though. I've done things in my past that I would never do now. Let's hope nobody thinks I'm not honorable. hehe

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