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queenp2005.03.05 - 09:17PM40: Chapter FortySigned
Chapter is absolutely awesome!! I can't wait to see what you have up your sleeve next. The ring was great..I'm glad the thing with Harry and Ginny has been at least partially resolved...I'm loving the story...Update again soon!!!!!!!!!!!! (Hope your tests are all OK!)

Author's Response: I thought the ring was pretty cool! hehe. Harry/Ginny getting better finally. nice to talk things out. more up soon.
my tests are kind of ok. i just need to take better care of myself by drinking water and taking fluid pills or my kidneys will suffer further. Sigh... no more dr pepper for now.. i have lots of fluid to get off of me. i was wondering why i had a weight gain. i thought it was b/c i quit smoking but apparently i've been harboring fluid... yuckers

Fictionlover_322005.03.05 - 09:16PM40: Chapter FortySigned
It seems eveything is resolved for now. It was good of Hermione's parents to come around. I guess they just needed time. As for Luna, I agree with on parting with Ron for awhile. She needs all the time in the world to regain back all that she's lost, and she'll do it better if she's not reminded of the place where she lost it in the first place. Ron seems totally distraught, but it's for the best, for the both of them. Speaking of Ron, I'm sure he got the most surprise when Draco kissed him! I don't think Ron had any clue about Draco's feelings towards him at all! I bet it was a Kodack moment! Hope Ron can handle this gently. And why is Ginny having this dark thoughts and emotions? Is it possible she may be channeling Riddle through Harry's emotions? It seems like it. So the succusbus decided to move onto it's next victim, and why am I not surprised it's Krum? I knew that Krum didn't fully get over Hermione. What's going to happen to Krum? Hope he doesn't die. Hermione had the right idea about Krum, though, but she doesn't have the evidence yet. My mind is whirling with unanswered questions, which I have to wait in the next update. This is why I love your fic, you keep me guessing! Another excellent chapter! Update soon, please! before my brain explodes! Cheers!

Author's Response: mostly resolved! yeppers. dm/rw info up next. about ginny, she had those diary memories and the bad chamber experience, so that was surfacing. And, yes, they were feeding off of each other.
poor krum! no, the succubus will let him live. she needs his connection to hermione and hermione's child. i'll explain that though soon. thanks again, doll. cheers

Meredith2005.03.05 - 09:01PM40: Chapter FortyAnonymous
Oh, excellent as usual!!! Poor Ron! Poor Draco! I can't wait to see what you have up next!!

Author's Response: thanks, doll! yep poor ron/draco. i didnt start on next bit yet. been lazing about today, but i'll be on it tomorrow. Thanks so much!! cheers

grill2005.03.05 - 06:05AM39: Chapter Thirty NineSigned
Ah, finally I'm back to review one of my absolute favourites! I've been away to finish the film we're making for almost two weeks now (sleeping on location and all), so I've missed a few chapters, but finally I was able to get back home to catch up. Brilliance, my dear witch! The confrontation with Hermione's parents was well written, but I must say the best part of it all was Snape's words to them in private. Loved it; he's really something, isn't he? I'm very curious to see what'll happen between Ron and Draco, if anything at all, and of course what will become of Bellatrix... But most of all I'm now just itching to know if Hermione will be alright. Hopefully it's all just effects of her pregnancy, right...? Keep the updates coming, girl!

Author's Response: the next update is in queue. Welcome back. Glad you've caught up and like what i've done with it. I loved Snape's words too. hehe. her parents will come around sooner or later. more on draco/ron in next chapter. it's just the pregnancy and stress. Hermione and the little one are fine! thanks so much! cheers

Lana Manckir2005.03.05 - 12:25AM39: Chapter Thirty NineSigned
Still, I think they were too harsh. I mean, she is pregnant! The last thing she needs is worrying about her parents. Anyway, lovely two chapters, had to read with some interruptions because real life kept getting in the way. I hate when that happens ;-) Can't wait for more. Oh the twists you throw on us!

Author's Response: thanks, doll! glad you are still liking it. more up this time. i think they were a bit mean as well. they'll come around. uploading next chap now

meoki_pixie15252005.03.04 - 11:46PM39: Chapter Thirty NineSigned
ahh come on!!! not another cliffy!!!!!! pzplz plz plz write more i love it!!!!!

Author's Response: uploading next section now! cheers! and ty

magicalwonder2005.03.04 - 02:36AM39: Chapter Thirty NineSigned
You did the parents fine. It is hard to imagine a parent being happy about their 18/19 yr old daughter marrying a man at least 20 yrs older than she is. Let alone being pregnant. As a woman who had to tell my parent I was pregnant at 19, I can tell you, not a pleasant experience. I really do like this story, and you have built the characters to be more than just background for Hermione and Severus, that is not easy to do.

Author's Response: Thanks very much! I had hoped that I had done it correctly. I found they were a bit mean letting her just leave that way, but like you said, just all the things adding up (age diff, marriage, preg...). Thanks so much for reading!! More up soon! cheers

GinnyW2005.03.03 - 10:11PM39: Chapter Thirty NineSigned
I loved this chapter! Very nice. Come on, keep 'em coming! ;-)

Author's Response: thanks, doll! more up soon

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