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joots2005.03.01 - 08:59PM38: Chapter Thirty EightSigned
Hm, i can't wait to see how hermione's parents react. I'm glad Mrs. Weasley will be helping Ginny- all in all, can't wait for the next chapter. I really enjoy your writing :)

Author's Response: thanks so much! i'm about done with it now! i should have it posted this evening. i think it's great that ginny's mum is involved as well. sometimes there's nothing like mum to make ya feel better

HarryPotterSNL2005.03.01 - 08:38PM38: Chapter Thirty EightSigned
i'm happy that Luna's awake but i"m sad about Ron. I can't wait to find out more about Ron and Draco. ANd I can't wait to see what happenes with hermione's parents. That will be interesting. Update soon!

Author's Response: lol i'm just done writing the parents bit now.. grrr and lol at the same time hehe more up soon about luna/ron/draco cheers

Betz2005.03.01 - 07:09PM38: Chapter Thirty EightSigned
Oh no! Poor Ron. Well, Luna is probably very overwhelmed with everything. Hopefully she won't end everything with Ron. Poor Draco. I got a feeling he REALLY fancies Ron. Any possibility of a three-way relationship? Hope Hermione's parents will be calm about all this. What Muggle parent wouldn't freak out over thier 18 year old daughter coming home form school mid-term only to discover whe finished school early, got married to a man twice her age and got knocked-up? Thinking of my daughter, I believe strangulation is the first thing that comes to mind, then castration....and that's for starters. Well, if you even need advice on the pregnancy parts, email me, I've been there twice...it's different every time. Loving the story, as usual. How about extract Bella's magic and implant in Luna? Then kill Bella. Yeah, that's the ticket!

Author's Response: you are right on about luna. it's just so much to deal with. he just needs to give her a bit of room. draco.. poor doll. i feel sorry for him. here paretns are going to be like WTF? but things will work out. more up on bella dear in the next chapter! thanks, doll

Betz2005.03.01 - 06:23PM37: Chapter Thirty SevenSigned
Oooooohhhh, how sweet. Hope Severus takes the news well. At least she pregnant AFTER she got married. So Ron and Draco were snogging? The way you wrote it, it seemed to be more, nudge, nudge, wink, wink. God, I love reading this story. On to chapter 38.

Author's Response: we would like to think it was the night of conception.. hehe of course, it could have been the night before. sigh... we'll pretend. i'm glad you like it! more up soon

Betz2005.03.01 - 04:58PM36: Chapter Thirty SixSigned
She's pregnant?!?!? ACK! Well, at least she's married. Did she conceive before or after the wedding? Draco likes Rooooooon. So if Luna recovers, will she be interested in a three-way? Poor Ginny. Yes, I know she's a bit bitchy right now, but after losing a brother, a dear friend and now a boyfriend off snogging the bitch who did it all, it's a bit much for any16 year old girl to handle. Another great chapter. Off to read 37 & 38, a perk of coming back from vacation to find more than one chapter waiting for me. YEAH!

Author's Response: lol! thanks for reading and reviewing, dear! glad to have ya back. hope you had a great vacation! you got ginny in a nutshell! excellent! more up soon

jayafel2005.03.01 - 02:14PM38: Chapter Thirty EightSigned
Hi. Wonderful story! I haven't been able to "put it down." But I do worry about poor Draco especially now that Luna is awake. Do you plan on working something out for him?

Author's Response: yes, i do. i don't wanna leave my friend out in the cold. hehe.. i'm glad you like the story! yay~

Fictionlover_322005.03.01 - 12:53PM38: Chapter Thirty EightSigned
First of all, I want to congratulate you on your pregnancy! You must be so happy! I'm happy for you! I'm having a busy week as of late.(misssed two chapters already) I'm supposed to be studying for a pysch exam, but I need to catch up, don't I?(Grin) I kind of guessed that Mione was pregnant, and I was right! I've never seen Snape show such raw emotions like that when he heard the news! I think that he would be a great dad, and Hermione will make a great mom. I'm ecstatic Luna is awake! Harry did a great job with Bella. Finally, she can patch up her life she missed. Sad that she won't have any magic, but she's a strong person, I'm sure she'll pull through. Ron seems happy though, and who wouldn't be? But what about Draco? He's happy for Luna, but at the same time, he's sad of possibly losing Ron again. And where's Lucius? I haven't seen him yet. Hopefully, he'll make an entrance on the next chapter. Hope Hermione's talk with her parents goes well. Update soon! Cheers!

Author's Response: thanks! I was hoping that i wrote the emotions ok. it's such a shock when you find out you are pregnant when you are definitely not expecting it. lol.
It is a bit sad for Luna, but like you said, she'll be fine. hehe. She and Ron have a big talk in the next chapter. Draco and Ron do as well. It's so interesting that you asked after Lucius. I've just written his part! hehe
The talk with the parents won't be bad. Someone spilled the beans on the marriage already! i didn't write tha part out just yet though. it should be okay. cheers and thanks!!! more up soon.

queenp2005.03.01 - 08:37AM38: Chapter Thirty EightSigned
Yay! Luna is back...Glad that they were able to make the incantation work...Excellent chapter. Can't wait to see what you have up your sleeve next. Story is still excellent. Please update soon!!

Author's Response: poor luna. had almost no hope. more up soon. cheers, doll and thanks

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