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MaevePotter2005.05.02 - 07:52PM35: Chapter Thirty FiveSigned
she moved her legs a bit and leaned back, taking her with him small error there..should be him with her... great chap. this one had the passion that was missing in the last. I hate to say it, but i love the dirty harry bella thing lol..

Author's Response: heheh.. me too.. arent they hot? it must be b/c it's "bad" hehe. I'll go fix that bit in just a bit. no telling what i was thinking muahahaha... thanks!!

MaevePotter2005.05.02 - 05:39PM34: Chapter Thirty FourSigned
I have to say I found the ceremony a bit stiff. I appreciate the whole wiccan signifcance, but it seemed to lack feeling. And even though I see your reasoning for sydney it just made me scowl.. it doesn't fit severus. Overall I have enjoyed the story a lot though.

Author's Response: Uh huh. was a bit rushed, wasnt it? I'm thinking it's because they really didnt have time to plan it well. The good part at least was that her 'boys' were able to come. I dunno about Sydney. I love it. I usally see people saying Sebastian, so I opted to try something different. No matter. Is just my nod to Rickman. Also, we don't hear that much anyway. hehe. Glad you liked it.

deejay2005.05.02 - 01:42AM51: Chapter Fifty One (Epilogue)Signed
This was worth the read. It took a while to finish, but it is quite original, and the many twists and subplots sure held my interest.

Author's Response: thanks so much deejay! glad you enjoyed it! Chees ~sw69~

MaevePotter2005.05.01 - 09:50PM2: Chapter TwoSigned
some women that he’d raped, though they seemed to be begging before he ended it begging for *it*? or death?

Author's Response: for the rape. poor women, huh? sad tsk tsk

charon2005.04.29 - 04:01AM50: Chapter FiftySigned
Hi! I've just finished chapter 49! I think the fic is great. It is one of those that are not supposed to end because I always want to know what happens next. I don't like it that much, if fics just contain the sex and stop afterwards. I believe it to be a lot more romantic to get to know the pair (whatever pair I'm reading about) in everyday life. And that's what I found in your fic. Thanks a lot!!!! charon

Author's Response: Thanks, Charon! I hated for it to end as well, but that was pretty much all I had to say about this bit of the story without it getting too lengthy. I do plan a sequel though, as I have so much more to tell. :) I appreciate the review! ~SW69~

thrillergirl72005.04.27 - 09:58PM19: Chapter NineteenSigned
Hi, great story! I'm slowly making my way through it. Can you email me that movie? ThrillerGirl7@hotmail.com Thanks!

Author's Response: hi, i sure can. or, i can try anyway. It's such a large file. I might have to upload it and just let you have a link to it. glad you are liking the story. xoxoox sw69

zowe052005.04.27 - 08:40PM51: Chapter Fifty One (Epilogue)Signed
I was to awe-struck to comment on any of the other chapters, but you are a brilliant and talented writer!!I have read plenty of fan fic but this was probably my favorite. There is only one more that I like as much you may like it, its called Lost by VenusDeMilo its great too.You should write a book!

Author's Response: thanks, zowe. I'm glad you liked it. I've never heard of that fic, but I'll do a search for it. I do enjoy a good story. I have written a book, but I'm in the process of making changes.. lol.. apparently some things have to be cut and added in and shuffled... sigh.... lol And, now that I am redoing it, I see other things that I want to tamper with ahahaha... hope to see you at some of my other stories xoxo cheers ~SW69~

keep2005.04.26 - 09:43PM51: Chapter Fifty One (Epilogue)Signed
You absolutely must write a sequel of some sort to this story. It was amazing, and you could do so much with it! I like that you had Harry bring Hermione back to life; I was really scared for a few paragraphs...

Author's Response: thanks so much! i'm pleased that you liked it. i do have a sequel planned. Many people were afraid that i'd kill off hermione, but there is no way. I love her too much in this story. more up soon as I can xoxooxox

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